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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice. Looking forward. Thx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the update ..thxz for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update plz continue soon tanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 8-misconstrued

Jodha and jalal were on the floor with jodha on top of jalal.both of them tried to get up but failed.finally jalal put his hands on jodha's shoulders and transported her to his side.he stood up and gave jodha a hand.

Jodha was infuriated.she did not know why jalal had done this and did not want to hear why.she rose to her feet without taking jalals hand.

Jodha- aapki himmat kaise hui hume chune ki.samajhte kya hain aap apne aap ko.mughal saltanat ka badshah hona aapko sab karne ka adhikar nahi deta.aapko kya lagta hain ki kyunki hamari behen ka vivaah aapke bhai se hone jaa raha hain hum kuch nahi kahenge.hume tohfa dete samay bhi aapne jaanbhoojke humara hath chooha tha.hum koi kamzor daasi nahi hain jo shahenshah se bhaybheet hogi.hum ek rajvanshi rajkumari hai jo apne samaan ke liye jaan de degi or le bhi legi.

Jalal was till now quiet.he had not uttered a single word but now he could not stay quiet.

Jalal-(loud and clear)-bas rajkumari jodha ab hum ek shabd apni shaan ke khilaf nahi sunege.kisi insaan ki baat sunna to aapne seekha hi nahi hain.kya aapne ye socha ki humne aapko is tarah is hojre mein kyun khicha,kyun hume aapko choone ki aavashykta hui.hum bhi aapke gulam nahi hain jo aapke piche-piche bhagte rahe.
(By now his voice had become softer)

Jalal(Calmly)-aapka libaas peeche se phata hua hain.humne aapko darbaar mein jaate dekha isliye is hojre mein kheech liya.

Jodha felt her back using her hand and was astonished to feel her skin instead of the cloth.there was silence for a few moments after which jodha put down her pallu to cover her back.

Jodha-(a tear fell from her eye)ab hum samjhe. koi insaan itna neeche kaise gir sakta hain.ghin aati hai hume aapse

Jalal -kya keh rahi aap?(confused)

Jodha-(sarcastic tone)aap aise kyun dikha rahe hain jaise kuch maloom hi na ho apko.hum jaante hain ki aap he ne humare vastr ka ye haal Kara hain.parantu hum ye nahi jaante the ki aapke tohfe ko nahi apnane ka aap aise badla lenge.

Jalal(angry)-madad karne ka aap ye silah de rahi hain.humne aapki izzat bachayi aur aap hume hi aaropi thehra rahi hain.hume to lagta hain aapne khud hi apne libaas ko phada taki aap hum par inzaam laga sake ya ho sakta hai ki kisi ko apni or aakarshit karna ho aapko.

Jodha was enraged.she lifted her hand to slap jalal when jalal grabbed it midway through.

Jalal -bas jodha.bahut ho gaya.isse zyada hum na kuch sunege aur na kuch sahenge.humpar haath utha ne ki aapki himmat kaise huyi.

He gripped her hand relentlessly.

Jalal-humpar haath utha kar aapne bahut badi galti kari hain jodha.iska anjaam acha nahi hoga.

He pushed jodha away and walked out of the room.jodha sat there alone crying



Edited by gvsmu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
wow this is such a diff story...love it...love how u give us 2 updates in a day..thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Amazing update plz plz plz continue soon Poor jalal but what will happen now I want them 2 get married
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
So many updates! Thankx dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wow ! its awesome dear ! 🤗 u are such a nice writer !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
both are so angry with each other,love between them seems a distant dream.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Hey dear...
M Soniya...
Read all d parts
Amazing story...

A different concept...👍🏼

Do cont soon...
N do pm me wenevr u update...

N can u put up a index on d first page...
It becums easy to find d chapters...

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