OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered

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pallavi003

@pallavi003

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

di..it's so awesome that it really feels sensuous when one imagines herself at Jodha's place..

Just one complain..why don't you take over the charge of story telling on yourself..you are much much better, in fact no comparison is there between you and cvs..hats off to you...

Edited by pallavi003 - 11 years ago

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pallavi003

@pallavi003

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
super lashy... u write so well..
its Bath tub... lovely one

in fact worth use of the bath tub too..😉😆

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Lovely!😳 It was a treat and a delight to read this piece!😃 Simply loved it to core di !🤗 First of all, the title is superb!😳 👏⭐️The story was so much intense at every bit 😳 I loved that Ben was dead here..!😛 The intensity and the sensations you created in the story was out of the world! Loved how Jalal said that he doesn't even know what color of her eyes was..omg! 😲😳Jodha kya..mi bhi shock mei chali gayi..khushi wale shock mei! This piece was absolutely fantastic! I wish aisa kuch serial mei hota! Instead of giving us bakwas epis one after the another, they should read n follow such pieces to give a treat to readers!!👏👏 Well written piece di..Superb 🤗 Loved it! Love you 🤗

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Rutuja Deo

@Rutuja...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Diii🤗 Lovely OS I really want Jodha will get to know that Jalal has no interest in Ben soon,
Thank god.. In ur OS at least Jo got know this

Thank u soo much Its really very fantastic esp BT scsene of Akdha wow!!!! 😳😊