OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered

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kushboo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

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Ummm ... My stupid phone doesn't support the blush emo (dance one too) 😡

So I will go a step further and go 🤢

Don't be shocked ! That is the emo that has a higher value than blushing in certain context ! 😆

I'm working to be a teacher but heck ! I wouldn't mind at all and so should you if CVs plagiarize this ! 🤣

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ghalibmirza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

OMG! lashy, what was that! u made me go back to the long lost akhdaland☺️..how i wish that u were the writer..u know what we all akhda lovers want..esp, what u wrote in blue..mind blowing! here is a big🤗from me dear!

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ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Shraddha, this was a fabulous as usual. I loved it. Why dont u make it to ss or at least two shot.

I loved the bathntub scenes but my fav part was Why did he have to hurt her so much to prove a point? Why did he do it to her? Was it because HE was still reeling from hurt too - the hurt she'd caused him on THAT fateful night and the morning thereafter

I likevthis introspective jodha. Hope ja serial shows this.

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Delphi

@Delphi-03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow!!👏👏👏

This story was really a treat to read... I really wish that the CV's take a reading of this and stop giving us that nonsense that is going on in the show now-a-days...The Jodha and Jalal you've portrayed here are the ones that we all wanna see on-screen...!!!
Seriously, Hats Off!!!👍🏼

Nd BTW, Can u continue this story... I believe it would be a LOT better than the rubbish being shown on-screen...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: parinika
Fabulous, its a masterpiece

Thank you so so so much dear😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: IFRutuja
Diii🤗 Lovely OS I really want Jodha will get to know that Jalal has no interest in Ben soon,
Thank god.. In ur OS at least Jo got know this

Thank u soo much Its really very fantastic esp BT scsene of Akdha wow!!!! 😳😊

Never thought I'd be writing on an Akdha BT scene, but anyways here it is😆

Thanks rutu.😳...

btw, since the ongoing tracks show no signs of the MU abating, at least here I wanted a glimpse of how it would look when on the path to MU being solved😭

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.FairyDust.

@.FairyDust.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

first of all - oh la la 😆

second of all - I love you di 🤗

third - Ja-Jo in the bath tub !
I loved it !

haaye I hope the cvs read this

and we get the exact same thing in the show too 😆

it was just ❤️

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sparikh
lovely OS - so Shahenshah only remembers his favorite begum's eyes.
-Sona

Hey thanks yaar... in a way yes and no...

he's trying to prove a point here...that 'I didn't even bother noticing the colour of her eyes, because yours' were the only one on my mind!'

Thanks yaar 😳

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: lashy

Awww you liked the peacock and poetry bit?
What better to give his begum who's a Krishna Bhakth and a lover of birds I thought? Also, peacocks are always exotic na...
As for the onscreen jalal, the less said the better...
But totally loved your style of complimenting yaar...😳
Like jalal had once said of Jo, aap aati ho aur kuch hi lafson mein kuch na kuch alag kehke jaati ho Sneha 😳

Oh! Thanks a lot!🤗 I used to think what I say wasn't enough because I just don't know how to write so much.😊