OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered

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Kalluchirpy

@Kalluchirpy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

superb OS...you and nancy made my day today with ur wonderful one shots...

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Ohooo di!! Truly amazing this is! ⭐️⭐️

This is precisely the Jalal I've been missing on the show...it's great to have him back in this OS, the way we both love him!

The whole setting was obvio the best one could ask for..and these two define passion!😳

It was so Jalal-like to tease Jo saying all that...go close and whisper stuff into her ears in that husky tone! And Jo's emotions and all that she went through in that short span...wow! You described it too well! RT and PS would have set the screen on fire!☺️

I want this scene in the show di...wish the CVs would come up with somthing half as good.😳

Love ya di...pls keep writing more!🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: AngadPariAddict
Wooo... Its so awsmmm..
U right so so well lashy..
Goshhh i luvd it alottt..
Awsm os

Hey thanks so much Simi...thanks a lot yaar.. 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: --Rashmi--
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Thanks Rashmi 😳

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KDR81

@KDR81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Hi Shraddha,
Though I am not that frequent in the forum off lately for some personal obligations...But Just could not help but give a 👏 to u for this exceptional piece...Sensuality and sentiments at their best...!!!😊
Marvelous Dear ...!!

Regards,
Kamal

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: disha15
Res! :D

Zzz 😛

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Greeshma

@pulu1995

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

One of the most beautifully wriiten OS i've read. Thank you

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sun29

@sun29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

awww member e khaas...it was so beautiful and so perfect ,the love story we all are searching for, a part of it ,how it should go forward...one shot all emotions in it ...i hope someone read this and puts this scene in the show without their weird twist...

this is our lost Ja and Jo...shayad dono bath tub mein chup kar baithe hai ...sighhh

thank you so much 🤗for such a beautiful read

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: leelu0001
wow lashy if CVs plan something like this for us at the end of this stupid track then don't mind bearing Benazir for a few more weeks

Thanks leelu...😳