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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy


<div></div>Pallu Update plz😆

our pallu.. Pallu 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

our pallu.. Pallu 😆

llooll😆 Pallu😆 Pallavi humein maaregi😆😛 Pallu update plz😳😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
PS:- hello friends...
In this SS i have assumed that the person poisoned by a vishkanya could only be healed by the vishkanya herself...
There are two facts that i have assumed...
1) whenever the poison in the vishkanya's body decreases i.e. after targeting someone she needs her dose to regularized her system and get normal again...that is...Snake bite on her tougue(as u have seen in the show also...)
2) the second one which i have assumed is...that whenever the poison increases in her body...she needs a proper dose for that too otherwise it can become harmful for her also...so she has to take some kind of medicine sort of time by time...
So...the medicine mentioned in the second point is the only treatment by which that poisoned victim can be healed...
Its completely based on my imagination...no relevance to any actual incident or character...
Thanku...
Pallavi...
Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello friends...😊
here is the next update...😃
sorry for the delay...😭
i have written it in a single stroke...😕
so dunno hows it...plz bear with me...
and do like and left reviews...😳

Chapter 8:-

Jalal: -(in extreme anguish) Jodhaaa... (And a long waiting scream came out and pierced the sky to reach the divinity)

(as the loud piercing cry came out...jalal's anguish soon turned into wrath and hatred...now his surrounding aura was completely captured by the thoughts of betrayal and backstabbing...his eyes had become so fiery that were capable of melting the rain drops itself...he determined something in his mind and wiped off his tears by harshly sliding his hand on his face...he gathered all his strength and stood up... and headed straight towards his destination)

(on the other hand, the stormy night had driven many brains out of their senses also...a storm was outside and other was going on in maham's head as well...she was pacing fast back and forth in her room and barging on to Resham for loosing that important letter...)

Maham: -(with disgust...still walking) tumhe shayad andaza nahi hai Resham ke tumne kya khoya hai...har kimat per wo khat chahiye hume...kisi aur ko mile isse pehle dhundna hi hoga use...na jaane kaha hoga wo khat is waqt...

(She was about to speak further...when a voice interrupted her..."Wo khat yaha hai badi ammi... "...she turned and was shell shocked to see jalal standing at the entrance with the letter in his hand...he was completely drenched from head to toe...his condition was capable enough to indicate about something wrong...she was in a spell...her breath had got struck in her throat...there was absolute silence in the room in a flick of second...both of them were just looking at each other...finally jalal broke the silence)

Jalal: - (sarcastically) kya hua badi ammi?? Aap ese kyu dekhne lagi hume...??...bataiye isi khat ki talash thi na aapko...

(maham dint budge even a single word...just standing still at her position...meanwhile Resham tried to escape and tends to go out...when jalal immediately stopped her...)

Jalal: - are Resham...tum kaha chal di...tumhe kahin jaane ki zarurat nahi hai...esi koi khaas baat nahi karni hume jiske liye tumhe bahar jana pade... (Now he looked at maham...seeing her not responding he asked tauntingly)...are aap itni ghabrayi hui kyu lag rahi hai badi ammi?? Hum to sirf ye khat lautane aaye the aapko...

(maham dint get him...so she asked again..."ji??")

Jalal: - haan...wo darasal hum baagiche se hoker guzar rahe the...to humari nazar is khat per padi...to hume laga shayad aapka ho...lekin agar aapka nahi hai to... (He tends to turn...when maham suddenly held his arm...)

Maham: -(stammering...hiding her nervousness) nahi...nahi jalal...hum...humara hi hai... (She thought to herself and smirked)...iska matlab hai ke jalal ab tak sachhai se unjaan hai...unhe kuch bhi nahi malum humare baare me... (She immediately plastered a smile on her face...)...shukriya jalal...kab se dhund rahe the hum is khat ko...

Jalal: -(cutting her short) kyu??...esa kya hai is khat me??...kahin ye wohi khat to nahi jo humne kaha tha aapse dhundne ke liye...

Maham: -(she was again shocked but she immediately tried to hid her nervousness...)...Na...nahi jalal...ye wo khat kahan??...wo to hum dhund rahe hai abhi...aap fikr mat kariye jaldi hi mil jayega wo bhi...ye...ye to kafi purana khat hai...adham ke abbu ne likha tha hume kisi zamane me ...aaj achanak unki bahut yaad aane lagi...to socha ke is khat ko padhker man ko thodi tasalli mil jayegi...isiliye ise dhund rahe the hum....(and she started faking her sorrow with the crocodile tears in her eyes...but that dint seem to have any impact on jalal this time...he spoke out plainly...)

Jalal: -(with a little resentment) shukr hai ke ye khat humare haath laga...vrna logo ka kya hai...na jaane kab ...kis tarah "istemaal" (use) karte is khat ka... (He emphasized on the word "istemaal")

Maham: - (surprised) kya matlab hai aapka jalal??...acha ye sab choriye...aap to buri tarah bhig gaye hai...aap... (She tried to touch his forehead with care...but jalal moved back preventing her hand to touch him in an indirect way)

Jalal: - (with a strange stare) aapko fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai badi ammi...hum thik hai...acha hume kuch kaam hai...chalte hai hum...khuda hafiz...

(and he left from there without looking back...as soon as jalal got out of the room...both maham and her soul mate Resham took a sigh of relief...)

Maham: -(with a sigh) ya khuda...tera lakh lakh shukra hai...ek pal ke liye to hume laga ke jalal...sab kuch jaan gaye hai...magar...shukra hai tera ke unhe kuch bhi pata lagne se pehle ye khat humare paas wapis aa gaya...

Resham: - (with a victorious smile) aap bhi khamkha hi dar rahi thi wazir e aliya...itne bade bade karname kar dale aapne...jab tab koi na pakad saka aapko...to is chote se khat ki kya bisaat...

Maham:-(at first stared at her angrily...but as resham was about to apologise...maham bust out laughing loudly...) hahahahahhh...sahi kaha tumne Resham...ab to hume bhi lagne laga hai ke shayad khuda ki bhi yehi marzi hai...ke begum jodha...humesha humesha ke liye jalal ki zindagi se dur chali jaaye...(she put her hand on Resham's shoulder) tabhi to...wo khat jalal ke haath me hote hue bhi...unhe sachhai ka pata tak nahi chala...tum nahi janti Resham...kitni muddato ke baad humari ye saazish rang laayi hai...kya kuch nahi kiya humne us begum jodha ko jalal se dur karne ke liye...apne farz tak se gaddari kar li hume...Rukkaiya begum ko wo zeher bhara kesar humne diya aur ilzam aaya to us jodha begum per...unjane me hui choti se choti galtiyo ko bhi apne hathiyaar ki tarah istemaal kiya humne...ab wo chahe khane me mirch zyada hone ka mamla ho...ya phir holi me humare chehre per udne wale gulaal ka...yaha tak ke tumhare zariye uske hamal se hone ki afvah udvaker use ruswa karne ki bhi koshish ki...lekin har baar...(gritting her teeth)...har baar na jaane kaise wo humare keher se bach gayi...magar is baar...is baar uske paas bachne ka koi rasta nahi hai...kyuki uski begunahi ka jo eklauta saboot tha(the only evidence of her innocence)...wo to jalal khud apne hi haatho se hume nazar karke gaye hai...(and she looked at the letter in her hand with an evil smile...)

Resham: -(smirking) wohi to wazir e aliya...shenshah ke walihat (heir) ka katal... bhari mehfil me karne ke baad bhi jab aapne itni safaai se shenshah ko gumrah kar diya...to phir ye to bahut choti si baat hai uske saamne...agar shenshah ko pata bhi chal gaya hota...to bhi aap sab kuch samhaal hi leti...hume pura bharosa tha aap per...

Maham: - Resham...kya baat hai...hmmm?? Aaj badi tariff kar rahi ho humari tum...khair...tum ek baat to bhul hi gayi...pata chalta bhi to kaise...humara pyara beta jalal...bhale hi dimag se kitna bhi shatir kyu na ho...magar aakhir hai to wo ek unpadh hi na...aur isi baat ka to fayda uthaya humne...aur dekho...kitni aasani se ek chote se khat ko us begum jodha ki tabahi ke sabab(reason) me tabdil(convert) kar diya humne...hahahahahhh...

(and she started laughing like mad...on her so called victory...but soon her laughter was interrupted by a pair of clapping...but not of appreciation... She turned and the sight was not that pleasing for her... ...unknown to the fact that each and every word of her disgraceful confession was being witnessed by someone...she kept on opening all the unseen and unheard pages of the devilish offence book of her disgusting criminal acts...it was none other than jalal himself... )

Flashback:-

(jalal pretended being unknown to the truth in front of maham as he wanted maham to tell him the reality herself...it was just because he trusted her so blindly that even after reading the letter and learning about the mistake...yet his mind was not able to believe that his "Badi Ammi" could ever even think of deceiving him...so he thought of giving her a chance to admit herself about it...but no ...he was totally wrong...instead of justifying her act...she lied to him and even dragged her late husband to hide her dirty intentions...jalal was disgusted with this women...he acted as if he left from there...but he wasn't...he just went outside and stood leaning to the wall near the entrance gate...he was waiting for her move and reaction but what she did was just out of his imaginations...he came there just to seek her explanation about the letter fiasco...but what he got to listen just left him completely broken and dishearted...how could this women stoop so low...how dare she do that to him...his blood boiled in extreme anger...he clutched his fist tight in wrath and gritted his teeth)

Flashback Ends

(jalal clapped out loud by harshly colliding his hands with each other... having a disgusted look on his face...his eyes were almost blood red as if they will burn maham out with the fire oozing out of them...the hatred and resentment was so much evident in his eyes)

Jalal: -(in a stern yet sarcastic voice) mashallah...subhanallah...kya kamal ka khel khela hai aapne "MAHAMANGA"... (He said the last word with so much bitterness that shocked maham completely)

(It was the first time ever in her life...when she heard jalal calling her by name...he never ever called her anything apart from Badi Ammi...she tried to argue...as she couldn't be able to believe what she just heard...)

Maham: -(amazed beyond words...) jalal...ye aap...

Jalal:- (cutting her short as he already had listened enough from her...he almost roared like a wounded tiger this time...) SHENSHAH...SHENSHAH JALALUDDIN MUHAMMAD naam hai humara...aur aapke liye ...hum sirf shenshah hai...jalal nahi...

Precap:- jalal's punishment to maham...and hakim telling jalal about jodha being poisoned by a vishkanya

Thanku everyone😃

Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome superb update 👏👏 plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update👏. thank you😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb. continue soon. I wish to read Maham's punishment soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
pallavvi congrats for being a goldie
wonderful superb awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW.i am so happy that jalal got to know everything...maham toh gayi,i hope she is given death sentence,ab bas benazir ki bari hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
congratz for becoming a goldie...
Superb and amazing update...
Loved it...
Loved the confrontation,especially,the ending...
I hate MA...
Jalal shocked to know about her wrongdoings...
Jalal should give MA a death sentence...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm... :)

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