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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
Pallavi tell us the truth! Arey u need not to hide it from us.. We are ur frndz na! 😉

LOLL😆😆

yes yes pallu..tell us..varna humein sach ugalwane ke aur bhi tareeke aate hain 😈😈😆

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

</div>LOLL😆😆
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yes yes pallu..tell us..varna humein sach ugalwane ke aur bhi tareeke aate hain 😈😈😆

Tum log shayad Jante Nahi ki Shehensha ki begum hai..
Pallavi Bol do.. Jalal ko Bol denge 😈

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

extraordinary out of the world update

i could feel all of jalas emotions

i could feel his pain and suffering

i felt so bad for him

he has been cheated so badly

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Superb update Pallavi!! It was simply amazing...👍🏼

Jalal's pain and hurt was heart breaking..Salima and Rahim are sweethearts...bless them!❤️

Looking forward to the next part..update soon!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

I have already like this chapter... I am sure I will love it...CANT WAIT TO READ!!!!!! U ROCK

YAAR TUNE SACHHI ME MUJE RULA DIYA😭

JALAL IS SO TORN...HE IS CRYING AND HIDING HIS TEARS...REALLY BROKE MY HEART INTO PIECES...

SALIMA BEGUM AND JALAL CONVERSATION WAS ALSO HEART TOCHING...SHE UNDERSTOOD HIS PAIN... AND SHE GAVE HIM A HINT OF VISH KANYA...SUPERB TWIST... SHE IS REALLY AWESOME...

WHEN RAHIM CAME THEIR ...MY HEARTBEAT WERE DOUBLE... I WAS GETTING ANNOYED WITH NOT PAYING ATTENTION TO JALAL... I WAS ALMOST READY TO SCREEM WAIT SALIM...

I GOT SO CARRIED AWAY IN MY EMOTION WHEN JALAL ASKED HER READ MORE...I WAS LIKE...OH MY GOD...I CAN'T SEE HIM IN MORE PAIN😭 SHE READ ENTIRE LETTER AGAIN...WAS SO MUCH PAINFUL...WHAT JALAL WAS FEELING...I FELT IN MY HEART... THEN HE WAS ALONE WITH THIS IMMENSE PAIN...😭😭😭

YAAR THIS IS BEYOND EXTRA...SUPERB... MINDBLOWING...ARE YAAR MERE PAAS KOI WORD NAHI HAI... MERA DIL RO RAHA HAI...

YAAR TU ITNI SIMPLE SCENE KO KITNA INTENSE BANA DIYA...IN THIS CHAPTER MAIN THING WAS HE CAME TO KNOW JODHA IS INNOCENT AND VISHA KANYA PART

BUT THE WAY YOU WROTE IS AMAZING...TUJE ME AAJ SE DIALOUGE MASTER BULAUNGI...KYA EMOTIONAL UPDATE HAI YAAR...SAACHI ME SUPERB!!!!!

YAAR ME TERI FAN KABSE HU...AB ROCK HARD SUPER DUPER FAN HO GAYI😊

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago