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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: angel04
NICE UPDATE CONTINUE SOON THANKS FOR THE PM😊

thanku angel...😃

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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: srividhya68
wow...awesome upt
cont soon

thanku vidya😃

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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: sarthshru
loved the update !!

thanku dear😃

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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: pranavvikas
oh my god it was an heart touching update
rula diya tumne

really...tahnku so much dear😃

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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Mishika123
Omg ! it was a fabulous update ! 👏
Its too emotional 😲
I have no wards to describe its awesomeness
Really its too gud👏
It really touched my heart

oh yaar...

so glad that u like it mishika...

i m so happy today...😃

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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: rima4ever
superb awesome amazing update

thanku reema😃

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Pallavvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: LilyOrchid
Nice 1

welcome to the thread dear😃

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Soumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Amazing SS Pallavi!! Your command on hindi is commendable!

A touching story and very well written, sad to see Jalal and Jo's condition!

Waiting for the next part...do continue soon!!🤗

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 me abhi dil khol ke ro lu baad me comment update karti hu...superb!

U DESERVE STANDING OVATION 👏👏👏👏👏FOR THIS CHAPTER...YAAR U HAVE LEFT ME WITH TEARS...BOLNE KE LIYE KUCH BACHA NAHI... WHAT MASTER STROCK PIECE...AWESOME!!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️YAAR AAJ TO I AM FEELING SO PROUD... HAMARE IF PE AESE WRITER HAI JO SACH ME KISI KO RULA SAKTE HAI... 👏👏👏👏👏

I LOVED MOTI AND JALAL CONVERSATION!!!!! OMG...THE WAY MOTI REMINDED HIM EVERYTHING HE DID JUST TRULY AWESOME...REALLY POWERFUL DIALOGUE...😊😊😊

JALAL WILL FIND OUR...AND MAHAM KI CHUTTI HOOORRREEE PARTY US DIN HUM SAB BETH KE JASAN MANANYEGE... MADARE MAHAM PARTY😆

TU AESE KESI NIRLAJJ 😳HOKE MUJE RULA RAHI HAI...SUDHAR JA VARNA😡 AUR JALDI SE SR DEDE BABA😆😆😆 AUR WO NAHI TO MAHAM KA MADER KAR DE BABA😆

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago