||Modern Desire|| Chap 24(18.07) Page 145

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

awesome update dear⭐️poor Jalal he's so lonely😭😭😭i hope Jodha understands him and completes his life😳..eagerly waiting for the next chapter dearcontinue soon

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Radz

@...Radhika...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: indudolai
kudos to ur writing dear👏...passion yaha bhi gayab ho gya jallu ke ander se...nxt update jaldi karna😳

hoga re! passionate update likhne ke lie time lagta hai !

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rose11691

@rose11691

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

awesome update dear...loved it...😃😃

thanks for the pm...

...do continue soon...😛

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

wow yr its amazing...loved jalal past nd wow jalal accident..

m sure next part vl be awesome...waiting for next part plz continue soon

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

good evening radz 🤗

awesome update 👍🏼

do continue ur nxt part soon 😳

loving ur writing skillz 😃

ua too brilliant 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️

En thnxx foh d PM 😊

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Soni

@-Enigmatic-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Ohhh Wow lovely & very nice update👏👏👏 i loved update❤️❤️❤️ the interaction betn sun & jodha 😳😳 Truely frndship is very sweet..& they r the best buddies😃😃 & jalal first time apologized sum1 & that to be jo..his day & nights r going restless frm nw😆..omg jalal's past is horrible😭😭😭 he is so loner😭😭.. his b***** father😡😡 & u know wht i loved so much specially ur thought of adding the diff presceptives abt future frm the angle of jalal,jo,sun,ruku & U..for this 👏👏👏..& omg precap is so terrible..jalal's accident😭
Thank U so much for a lovely Update & PM🤗
& plzz don't say sorry yr...& this update was very luvly trust me😃😃

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roshaeldsouza91

@roshaeldsouza91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Wow.. lovely update dear..👏 am loving it...

update soon and please pm me😃

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Radzzz! It was really good...but I'm more into the precap now... My Jallu's accident! Nahi!!!!! I feel like crying... Hope Jodha tends him... I really liked the end where u gave everyone's POV and even urs.. Beautiful..

Btw what happened to Viber??

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KDR81

@KDR81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Who said it's Bekaar chapter?? It's lovely dear...😊

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Brilliant job Rads!! You've written it really really well...loved it😳

Jalal's apology was really good to see, hope he gets answers to all the questions soon! His past is terrible...hope Jo comforts him, he needs it badly! Loved Jo-Surya friendship too!

And ofcourse...the best part was the quotes putting forward the future differently in every person's perspective! 👏

Luv ya dear...enjoyed reading it!!🤗

Update plzzz😆

Edited by baubles - 11 years ago