||Modern Desire|| Chap 24(18.07) Page 145 - Page 29

Originally posted by: ...hema23...

Wowww...im 1st


awesome update dear⭐️👏...as like Jallu im too jealous😆 i want her to hug our jallu😳

Any way this will make Jallu to realise his feelings😳 waiting to see both fall in love with each other


p.s: Pls dnt take too long tym for next update😡😆 i madly love this FF😳

thanks hema di!

Originally posted by: -Suni-

Nice updt dear...uff Surya😳
naam hi kaafi hai mere liye😛

thanks suni di

Originally posted by: mithrasayee

pls try to update the conversation in english...i wil help all members of the forum to read the full story...

hey sure i will try... 😳

Originally posted by: Jodha_Akbar_Luv

Sooo excited!!!...
Waiting... 😊

thanks dear!

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Radhika dear what an awesome update !!!

Jodha really had a bad day ...

Damn I really hoped that Jodha hugged Jalal instead of Surya ...

The precap really scares me ...

Ruku is back , that mean something bad will happen ...

Looking forward for the next update ...

Keep up the good work dear ...

thanks so much

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Hayye Radsss... Thanks for d awesome update!! Loved it !!👏👏👏 Yar...your story is rocking more n more by each of its brilliant chapters!⭐️⭐️ Loved the Jealous Jallu!😳😳 Bahut maza aaya...Missing u terribly on WA😭😭 !! Love you babes!😃😃

thanks nanu

Originally posted by: PupCat

thanks hema di!

welcome dear😳😳

So So So So sorry guys for making you wait.💔 I was really busy. Here is next part for you! Im really happy with your response!!! Thanks!!

Kindly ignore mistakes especially grammatical ones!😳

Recap:

Both Jalal and Surya reach office at same time. Without wasting a single second Jalal opens the lock and both runs inside. Jalal goes to start power supply. Surya hears sobbing sound. He immediately runs towards direction of sound and sees Jodha sitting on the floor crying bitterly. As Jodha sees Surya she literally runs towards him and hugs him very tightly. Jalal witnesses this with heavy hart. Surya hugs her back with love and comfort. Don't worry Jodha I am here. Don't cry. He wipes her tears. Jalal finds himself sinking in the sea of jealousy. In a flash scared Jodha faints in Surya's arms.

Part 11

Jodha faints in Surya's arms Jalal feels jealous. He picks her in his arms. I will drop her argues Jalal. Surya gives him annoyed look and says how can someone be so careless? No I don't believe you anymore. I will take her to my house. Surya leaves with Jodha. Jalal helplessly leaves.

**Next morning**

Jodha regains her conscious and finds Surya sleeping on the chair next to her. All scenes of last night plays in her mind like a movie. She gets up and walk towards washroom suddenly Surya wakes up hearing noise of door.

Hey please rest for more time Jodha. Ummm... Need to go to washroom she replies. Ok you get fresh in mom's room. Surya calls his mom and requests her to take Jodha to her room. His mom agrees. How you feeling now beta? His mom asks with care. I am fine now aunty Jodha replies with a smile on her face.

After half an hour Surya's mom serves breakfast. Wow aunty Misal Paav today! I just love it. Surya bursts in laugh and says ohh so miss hyper acidity abb apne bachpan ke pati ACIDITY ki yaad nahi aayi? Shut up Surya's mom scolds him. Jodha pinches him. He hits on her back. Ouch Surya it hurts. Oh I am NOT sorry... She looks at him with funny anger. He starts running and she follows him. Stop you idiot today I will beat you with my sandal. First catch me. Then we will see who beats whom? Come on Idiot. Surya's mom scolds Surya for making fun of Jodha. They finally start breakfast. Jodha today you are going to stay here only. And I am not requesting you but it's my order. Ok aunty but can I go to office? Why? Surya immediately asks. Well Surya tomorrow there is a meeting and today is last day of rechecking things and presentation rehearsals so I have to go today. Sure but I will drop you says Surya. Jodha agrees.

**At Jalal's office**

Jodha enters the cabin and finds Jalal writing an apology letter.

Jodha- Good morning sir!

Jalal is shocked to see her. Hey please you take a leave today. I don't want you to faint again. Take this he gives her an apology letter. Jodha is shocked.

Jodha- No need of apology sir! It wasn't any one's fault. Just time was wrong. Pleases don't apologies. It's ok. She says with a smiling face.

Jalal- I am not agreeing with you. It was my fault. I expected that you have gone home. How I can be so careless? I came in your cabin but you were not there so I thought... Jodha interrupts when he is about to complete his sentence.

Jodha- It's ok sir! Please don't be sorry.

Jalal- I never said this before to any one I am sorry Jodha.

Jodha asks Jalal about his today's schedule and swiftly changes the subject. He asks her to read the presentation once and correct it wherever necessary.

As Jodha leaves Jalal again starts thinking about her. What's happening to me? I apologized to someone for first time in my life and to whom? To the person I hated... Why? It was not my fault still I apologized Why Why? It wasn't necessary too. Why I was sad seeing Jodha in Surya's arms? Why I was crying seeing her unconscious? Questions occupies his mind and brains.

I have noticed myself. I am changing. I am not more that Jalal who was egotistic. Who only loved his success and money. Who was literally emotionless. Why I am changing? Is Jodha is reason for this change? I am in love with her?

Jalal becomes more restless.

Its lunchtime and Surya asks Jodha to meet him in office canteen. Jodha and Surya start their lunch. Do you remember Jodha we used to go in our collage canteen for lunch? Ya I remember. Our collage days were awesome. Do you remember that Alafia? We used to call her dinosaur. Hahahahahhhaaa Jodha starts laughing. Yes! and her so called boyfriend who was like a cauliflower? Hahahahhahahhhah I remember him. Those people were too funny. They share their collage memories and bursts in a laugh. Jalal who is going to restaurant for lunch enters in canteen. Hey can I sit with you? asks Jalal. Surya and Jodha looks at him with "O" Sure. Please have a seat.

After lunch Surya leaves for his department. Jodha goes to counter to pay bill. Ladies from other group starts gossiping about Surya and Jodha's realtion. He is really hot says one of them. Jodha suits him says other girl. Jalal is TOTALLY JEALOUS! Hey they both are lovebirds says other girl. Jalal leaves in anger.

Sun goes down and its 5:30 pm Jodha completes her all work and goes to Jalal. But luckily he finds no mistakes in her work.

Jalal asks her about presentation and she answers all his questions swiftly. Perfect! Exclaims Jalal. Next week's conference will decide Business Man Of the year awards winner. And I want to win it! Sure sir you will win it Jodha encourages Jalal.

May I leave now? Asks Jodha. Sure. Take rest Jalal replies with smiling face.

Jalal is obsessed with SuryaDha's thoughts. He can't concentrate on his work. Leaves office in anger.

**Jalal's home**

Jalal enters with a bang! Finds servants gossiping. Whats happening here? He asks angrily. One of the servants tells him that his father Mr. F Mohammed and his step brother Aadham are coming. He didn't say anything and leaves to his room.

Jalal thinks about his past... His childhood...

Jalal was only 5 yrs old when his mother died. His father was reason of her death. Mr. F Khan was having an extramarital affair. And a son from his non wedded girlfriend. That son is Aadham. After his mother's death his father threw him out of the house. His childless uncle and aunt adopted him. Gave him their surname. Provided him good education though they were not so rich. They completed his every wish. When they died Jalal became like STONE! With no feeling. Rude arrogant egotist ... And now when he is rich famous his father is returning to him.

With this he starts drinking heavily... He is losing his temper and control...He asks a servant to bring his car keys. Servant hesitates but is unable to reject him. Drunken Jalal leaves without deciding destination. But faith has decided it TOWARDS JODHA. Jalal drives his car nearly at full speed. He is drunken heartbroken and angry. His ego didn't let him accept that though situations were worst in his past but he need not be too arrogant. Jodha who is completely counter of Jalal is happy with her life and Surya with his "NASEEB"... But future is UNPREDICTABLE!

Jodha's POV (about future):

How sure I feel, how warm and strong and happy
For the future! How sure the future is within me;
I am like a seed with a perfect flower enclosed...
~D.H. Lawrence, "Wedlock"

Surya's POV (about future):

Tomorrow is fresh, with no mistakes in it. ~L.M. Montgomery

Jalal's POV (about future):

The future, according to some scientists, will be exactly like the past, only far more expensive. ~John Sladek

Ruqaiya's POV (about future):

I have seen the future and it is very much like the present - only longer. ~Kehlog Albran

My POV for their futures:

The course of life is unpredictable... no one can write his autobiography in advance. ~Abraham Joshua Heschel

I know not what the future holds, but I know who holds the future. ~Author Unknown

Precap: Jalal's accident...

I know this chapter was really short and not so good but believe me I will give next chap full of surprises!👏

I hope you guys will forgive me for this BEKAAR chapter!🤗

Plzz comment and LIKE!

loved it...i hope jodha understands jalal,do update the next chapter soon.😊

kudos to ur writing dear👏...passion yaha bhi gayab ho gya jallu ke ander se...nxt update jaldi karna😳