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Radz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Guys here are links of previous parts
Part 1- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3793009/modern-desire-last-note-on-page-30
Part 2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3793009/modern-desire-last-note-on-page-30?pn=9
Part 3https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3793009/modern-desire-last-note-on-page-30?pn=13
Part 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3793009/modern-desire-last-note-on-page-30?pn=20

Recap:

Jodha-His name should be Jallad and not Jalal! He's a

monster! How can he do this to me? Oohh maa ambe! He is such a...Suddenly Jodha hears some one's footsteps!

Who is he? Jalal? Or someone else?

Part 5

**At Jalal's office**

Jodha hears someone is coming to her... from dark... Step

by step...She gets scared

She closes her eyes tightly and shouts AAA! Help me!!!!!

And Jalal closes her mouth... Shut upp you idiot... It's

me!!
She opens her eyes and moves away from jalal...

Jodha- Ohhh sorry sir! But you scared me!

He gives a sly look...

Have you completed your work? Or u want to stay here all

night haan?

Jodha- No sir! I haven't completed yet! But I am doing!

She sits on chair and starts typing... Slowly she feels

breaths on her neck... And turns around just to find Jalal there... Ohhh he is
so close to her... Seeing something on laptop! Her breath becomes fast!
Jodha however manages to complete her work and shouts in

joy DONE!

Ya aalah! Finally now Just get out of my office..

Jodha turns to leave... Jalal looks at her and smirks!

You are looking beautiful in this short dress! He

thinks... and leaves...

Jodha is walking alone on the road...Since she is unable

to find any auto-rickshaw at this point of night time..Jalal comes in his
Lamborghini... and asks Jodha...

Jalal- I think you shuld come with me!

Jodha-why?

Jalal- Toofan aane wala hai! Bhigne ka iraada hai kya?

Jodha- I am not suppose to obey you outside the office!

Jalal- Ohhh really! Mr. Bharmal ka call aaya tha!

Jodha suddenly looks at him with a WHAT look!

Yes! And he ask me to drop you at home...

Jodha-Really! Agar papa ne kaha hai toh...She thinks and says Ok!

Jalal smirks as she sits in the car...

They are on their way when it stars raining... heavy

raining... And Jalal turn on the radio... song playing is

All I seee
in hersszzz Touch
Wats d fun? Ah ah
do u know wht i mean it isz?Mmm
Sup sup
Ooo
Can i get ya
Ooo
Can i touch ya
Ooo
Can i get ya
Ooo
Can i touch ya
Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah zara zara .. Ooo ooo ooo
Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Ooo ooo ooo
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum (Race 2008)

And Jalal starts dancing in car... And almost falls on Jodha

Jodha looks at him angrily! Sir please drive slowly... I

am scared...

Jalal- So! You want to spend more time with me! Hmmm...

In this short dress! And looks at her thighs... Lustfully...

Jodha- Jodha feels

shy... Ohhh maaa ambe save me!

Jalal- Don't worry I m not going to do anything with you!

By the way hame Mr. Bharmal ka koi call nahi aaya tha!

Jodha- What?

Jalal-Yes! Hamne joke kiya! Comes closer to her and whispers in her you are l0ooking really HOT AND SEXY! SWEETHEART! ! Aur agar tum aise dress mein chalke ghar

jati toh pata nahi kya...

Jodha gives him an angry look... Shut upp!

By the time they reach her home... People in her

society looks at Jodha with questioned eyes! Bharmal and Maina feel
embarrassing... Jodha too... People start gossiping...
Jalal smiles and leaves!

**Jodha's home**

Maina in angry tone- Kya jarurat thi beta unke saath aane ki? Dekha nahi log kaise

dekh rahe the!!

Jodha- Sorry mumma but barish ki vajah se!

Bharmal- Maina don't take tension... He is a good

man! Unhone hamare beti ki madad hi toh ki na... Otherwise Jodha ko itni raat ko
akele aana padta...

Aur tum toh janti ho aaj kal ka jamana kharab

hai!

Maina- Ya! I know par phir bhi... Jodha... Kal se

aisa nahi chalega...Now go and get fresh...
Jodha- Ok mumma... (Leaves)

Maina- Suniye jee mujhe lagta hai ki hume Jodha

ko nayi scooty lekar deni chahiye... Jisse who ghar aa sake aur kisiki madad bhi
na leni pade

Bharmal- Yes! You are right... We will book a

scooty for her

**Jalal's house**

Jalal calls Ruqs

Ruq- Hi jaan!

Jalal- Hi! Tum aaj aayi nahi? I was waiting for

you

Ruq-Yes! Sorry Jalal... Hamara tumhare plan mein

help karne ka mann tha but my mom is really serious... so that I have to go to
London at least for a month

Jalal- What? Tumne bataya kyu nahi?

Ruq- Sorry dear but I thought...

Jalal- OK don't worry! Take care of her! And I

will take care of Ms.Anarkali!

Ruqs- Sure! Bye!

Jalal-Bye Darling!!

Ms.Jodha...Or should I say Miss sexy

Anarkali! I'm waiting for tomorrow! Just for tomorrow! Haaahhhahhahah

Precap: Jodha throws coffee on Jalal

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Part 6- page 8

part 7- page 12

Part 8- page 18

Part 9- page 25

Part 10- page 36

Part 11- page 46

part 12- page 51

Part 13- page 56

Part 14- page 64

Part 15- page 69

Part 16- page 75

Part 17- page 82

Part 18 - page 90

Part 19- page 98

Part 20- page 108

Part 21- page 117

Part 22- page 130
Part 23- page 135 Part 24- page 145

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Superb Update👍🏼
wht is Jalal up toOo..

Continue sOon...lOoking forward to read next chap.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

😊😊😊Lovely!! A much needed story line!! Very nice.. Loved it the core. You doing a great job on this story!😊😊 The song was wow..and really very sexy😃👏👏👏👏👏👏Whole scene was so hot and sexy...uff.. cant wait for next update😊😊⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 11 years ago

How much I wish this becomes true! Brilliantly written! Amazing.. Babes u made it so hot.. I loved this part the most
Jodha looks at him angrily! Sir please drive slowly... I am scared...
Jalal- So! You want to spend more time with me! Hmmm... In this short dress! And looks at her thighs... Lustfully...

Hayye! Kya update Tha.. Jalal will lose control.. Ruqqu out. Yippe!!

Amazing! Yaar update soon..

18+de do n update plz 🤣

Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 11 years ago