JODHA-AKBAR my version,ff,part 24 updated

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

interesting twist suryabhan entry.. continue soon & do pm...

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Rasika29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Nice update...😊

Finally Jalal meets Shaguni...
And Jo liked Surya..😕 Ab hamare hero ka kya hoga...😆

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

part 24

Salima and B.K's home

SALIMA-JAMAINA YEH HAI NAZEEMA BEGUM KE BETE,SURYABHAN...SUR YEH HAIN HAMARI BETI JAMAIMA...

Jamaima and Surya came out of the trance,their locked eyes had send them in...Jamaima had not expected this to happen..she did not want to get married,period...but the attraction she felt on seeing surya was something that was totally unexpected and bizarre for her...

JAMAIMA(to herself)-YEH HUMEIN KYA HO GAYA HAI...AAISA PEHLE HUMNE KABHI MEHSOOS NAHI KIYA...SURYABHAN KO DEKH KAR HAMARE MANN MAIN YEH KAISE BHANVNAYEIN AANI CHALU HO CHUKI HAIN...YEH HAMARE SAATH KYA HO RAHA HAI...HUMEIN KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA...

Salima made jamaima sit besides her facing suryabhan..she could make out that suryabhan could not take his eyes off her daughter..she was relieved that at least the boy likes the girl...now she just has to make her stubborn daughter understand...

SALIMA-AREY KUCH LIJEYE NA NAZEEMA BEGUM...BETA AAP BHI KUCH LO...

NAZEEMA-SHUKRIYA SALIMA BEGUM...VAISE AAPKI BETI BAHUT KHOOBSURAT HAI...HUMEIN BEHAD PASAND AAYI AAPKI BETI...

SALIMA-HUMEIN BHI AAPKA BETA BAHUT ACCHA LAGA HAI NAZEEMA BEGUM

B.K-GALAT MAT SAMAJHIYEGA NAZEEMA BEGUM ,MAGAR HUM APNI BETI KI MARZI KE KHILAF KUCH NAHI KARENGE...HUM JAMAIMA SE BAAT KARKE HI AAPKO KUCH BATA SAKTEIN HAIN...HUMEIN THODI SE MOHALAT DIJEYEGA...

NAZEEMA-AREY BHAAISAHAB...AGAR BACCHE EK DUSRE KO PASAND KARENGE TABHI KUCH HOGA...ACCHA AB HUM CHALTEIN HAIN...AAP HUMEIN ITALAH KAR DIJEYEGA.

nazeeema and suryabhan left for their place and jamaima ran off to her room...

B.K-YEH KYA BAAT HOTI HAI SALIMA...AAISE ACHANAK AAPNE INN LOGON KO BULA LIYA...JAMAIMA KO SOCHNE SAMAJHNE KA MAUKA BHI NAHI DIYA...AUR AB AAP CAHTI HAIN KI BINA JAANCH PARTAAL KIYE HUM APNI BETI KA HAATH KISSI KE BHI HAATH MAIN DE DEIN...

SALIMA-ACCHE LOG HAIN YEH..MAINE PATA LAGVAYA HAI..AAP CHINTA KYUN KARTE HAIN..JAMAIMA KHUSH RAHEGI SURYABHAN KE SAATH...

B.K-NAHI...HUM JAMAIMA KI MARZI KE KHILAF JA KAR KOI BHI FAISLA NAHI LENGE..

JAMAIMA-HUM TAYAAR HAIN ABBAHUZOOR...

B.K and Salima both are shocked

FLASHBACK...

Jamaima ran off to her room ...she needed to clear her head...on one side se dint want to get married now and on the other she had never seen a guy like suryabhan...he is so tall and so good-looking..must be brave also...i know i don't want to get married now but why do i feel like he might be the guy for me...agar main haan car doon toh hamara unse nikaah ho jayega...air agar na car dungi toh woh kiss aur se bhi nikaah kar skate hain...magar kya hum unse mohabbat karte hain...nahi...toh kya hua...ek baar nikaah no jayega toh apne aap mohabbat bhi ho jayegi...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

B.K-YEH KYA KEH RAHI HO JAMAIMA...TUM JANTI KITNA HO USS LADKE KO...

SALIMA-TOH JAAN JAYEGI NIKAAH KE BAAD...ACCHA LADKA HAI...ACCHA GHAR HAI AUR KYA CAHIYE...

JAMAIMA-ABBA AGAR AAPKO KOI AAITRAAZ HAI TOH HUM YEH NIKAAH NAHI KARENGE...HUMEIN LAGA AAP LOG CAHTE HAIN KI HAMARA NIKAAH HO JAYE,ISS LIYE HUMNE HAAN KEH DI...

SALIMA-BETA AAPNE BILKUL SAHI KIYA...SAHI WAQT PAR SAHI FAISLA LENA BAHUT ZAROORI HO JAATA HAI...

B.K-MAGAR HUM USS LADKE KE BAARE MAIN BINA KUCH BHI PATA KIYE APNI BETI KA HAATH USKE HAATH MAIN NAHI DENGE...YEH HAMARA AAKHRI FAISLA HAI..

SALIMA-THEEK HAI,JAISA AAP CAHEIN...BAS AB JALDI SE SAB KIJEYE TAKI HUM APNI BETI KA NIKAAH DHOOM DHAAM SE KAR SAKEIN(salima hugs jamaima)

there is another knock on the door...B.K goes to open it and finds a royal messenger there summoning him to the palace...

"AAPKO SHEHZADI RUQAIIYYA NE BULAYA HAI BAIRAM KHAN JI..."

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at Kaali maa's temple in the jungle...

S.B-HAAN SHEHZADE HUM HI HAIN SHAGUNI BAI,

JALAL-AAP HAIN SHAGUNI BAI...HUM AAPKO KAB SE DHOOND RAHE HAIN...

S.B-HUM JANTE HAIN..AUR YEH BHI KI AAP HUMEIN KYUN MILNA CAHTE THEE...

JALAL-AGAR AAP SAB JANTI HAIN TOH HAMARI MUSHKIL KA HAL BHI JANTI HONGI...J..J..JODHA...

S.B-AAP RAJKUMARI JODHA KO DHOONDNE AAYE HAIN YEHI BOLNA CAHTE HAIN NA..

JALAL-AAP TOH SAB JANTI HAIN SHAGUNI BAI...BATAEYE HUMEIN KI JODHA HUMEIN KAHAN MILEGI...

S.B-ITNE SAAL SABR KIYA HAI TOH THODE DEER AUR SAHI SHEHZADE..

JALAL-NAHI SHAGUNI BAI..HUMSE AB YEH SABR NAHI HOGA...ITNE SAALON TAK HUMEIN JODHA KE BAARE MAIN PATA BHI NAHI THA..MAGAR AB CHAL CHUKA HAI...WOH HAMARE BADE ABBU AUR AMMI KE AULAAD HAIN...AMEER KI SHEHZADI...AUR HAMRI HONI WAALI BEGUM...AB HAMARE SABR KA BANDH TOOT CHUKA HAI SHAGUNI BAI...AAPKO HUMEIN BATANA HOGA KI JODHA KAHAN HAI...

S.B-SHANT HO JAEYE SHEHZADE,AUR YAHAN HAMARE SAMNE BAITHEYE...ITNE UTEEJIT HONA THEEK NAHI HAI...AUR SABR TOH AAPKO RAKHNA HOGA...KYUNKI RAJKUMARI ITNI JALDI AAPKO NAHI MILEGI SHEHZADE...

JALAL-AAPKA MATLAB KYA HAI...KYA AAP NAHI JANTI KI JODHA KAHAN HAIN?

S.B-YAHIN HAIN RAJKUMARI JODHA...MALWA MAIN...MAGAR KAHAN YEH HUM APKO NAHI BATA SAKTE...UNHE KHUD AAPKE SAMAKSH AANA HOGA...

JALAL-YEH KYA BAAT HUI..HUMEIN TOH YEH BHI NAHI PATA KI WOH DIKHTI KAISI HAIN..HUM UNHE KAISE PEHCHANEIN GE?

S.B-RAJKUMARI KHUD APNE AAP KO NAHI PEHCHANTI TOH AAP UNHE KAISE PEHCHANENGEIN...UNHE TOH KHUD EHSAAS NAHI HAI KI WOH EK RAJKUMARI HAIN...

JALAL-CAHE KUCH BHI HO JAYE SHAGUNI BAI...HUM JODHA KO PA KAR RAHENGE...USSE DHOOND KAR RAHENGE...AAPKO HAMARI MADAD KARNI HOGI SHAGUNI BAI.

S.B-NIYATI NE APNA DAAV KHEL LIYA HAI SHEHZADE...JITNA AASAAN AAP SAMAJHTEIN HAIN UTNA HAI NAHI...KHAIR...EK UPAYE AAPKO BATATI HOON...AMEER SE...UNKE PARIVAAR SE KISSI KO YAHAN MALWA BULA LIJEYI SHEHZADE...KHOON KHOON KO PEHCHANTA HAI...EK BAAR RAJKUMARI APNE KHOON KO PEHCHAN GAYI TOH UNHE APNI PEHCHAAN JANNE MAIN SAMAY NAHI LAGEGA...AB JAYEYE...

when jalal had still not gone for sometime...shaguni bai gave him and enquiring look...

S.B-KUCH AUR BHI POOCHNA THA AAPKO SHEHZADE...

JALAL-JI,HAMARE DOST ABDUL KAHAN HAI...

S.B-YAHIN HAIN AAPKE DOST...AAP CHINTA MAT KIJEYE...KAL SUBAH AAP UNSE MIL SAKENGE...AB JAKAR AAGE KI TAYARI KIJEYE SHEHZADE...

JALAL-EK AUR BAAT...WOH JO BAAGH BAHAR THEE...UNHE TOH SUBAH HUMNE QATAL KAR DIYA THA...PHIR WOH...

S.B-ZINDA KAISE HAI...HAHAHAHAHAHAH...CHAUNK GAYE NA...YEH JAGAH HI AAISI HAI SHEHZADE...YAHAN AATE HI SAARE ZAKHM BHAR JATE HAIN...UNN BAAGON KI JAAN LENA ITNA AASAAN NAHI...WOH KAALI MAA KE PUTRA SAMAAN HAIN...UNHONE AAP PAR HAMALA ZAROOR KIYA MAGAR AAPKO MAARA NAHI...KYUNKI YEH MAA KI MARZI THI...AAPKE ANDAR UNHE EK ACCHAI NAZAR AAYI HOGI...KHAIR YEH SAB JAAANE DIJEYE...JAYEE AUR AARAM KIJEYE...ABHI BAHUT IMTEHAANO SE GUZARNA HAI...JAI MAA KAALI...

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

last two chapter ke liye res... I didn't know you have updated chapter 23... oh god... can't wait to read their meeting...

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

lot more twists are there it seems...awesome update continue soon & do pm

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anshita priyadarshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Awesome blossom di
This ff is truly amazing i loved it to the core now update fast
Love u di
Regards
Anshita

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Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Aanchal I am catching up with your story atm... I will finish reading and leave u a review soon!!! Love you❤️

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Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Oh my word I cannot believe what I have just read!!! 😲👏😲👏This is literally one of the best stories that I have ever come across not only in FF but in general!! ⭐️👏⭐️👏Aanchal my angel you have simply outdone yourself. 🤗Sweety you have created so much of suspense that despite reading so many chapters in one go I am yearning for more!!! This story is simply brilliant and I love the fact that it takes place in an alternate reality where the relationships and the story are different. You have created a world of Jodha Akbar where the essence of the characters remain the same but their relation ships with each other have changed to such an extent that it creates unbelievable suspense and brings out such powerful nuances in your writing.⭐️⭐️ Your dialogues are the best of any writer I have ever read of JA ff.👏👏👏 Humayun and Bharmal's relationship continues to warm my heart and I was worried for a second when Jalal had said that he wanted to get married but when he said that he would only get married to Jodha I couldn't help smiling with pride at your brilliance.😳😳😳 Jalal's respect for his father's promise tells me that he will become a magnificent Shehensha and even though he is called Jalal in your story, he is definitely AKBAR. Your Jodha is so gosh-darn cute!!😛😛 She is mischievous and charming and wins your heart immediately 😳but I was most excited when the valiant Suryabhan and the lustful evil Ruqaiyya entered the story. They will make for some interesting action as they play kebab mein haddi between our akhda!!😉 My fave scene was when Jalal was telling Abdul about his determination to win Jodha over. Wow yaar!! Kya baat hai!! You are simply a master blaster!!❤️ Ab jaldi update dijiye na!! I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE you brilliant writer you😳😳

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: Az3003
Oh my word I cannot believe what I have just read!!! 👏This is literally one of the best stories that I have ever come across not only in FF but in general!! 👏Aanchal my angel you have simply outdone yourself. 🤗Sweety you have created so much of suspense that despite reading so many chapters in one go I am yearning for more!!! This story is simply brilliant and I love the fact that it takes place in an alternate reality where the relationships and the story are different. You have created a world of Jodha Akbar where the essence of the characters remain the same but their relation ships with each other have changed to such an extent that it creates unbelievable suspense and brings out such powerful nuances in your writing.⭐️⭐️ Your dialogues are the best of any writer I have ever read of JA ff.👏👏👏 Humayun and Bharmal's relationship continues to warm my heart and I was worried for a second when Jalal had said that he wanted to get married but when he said that he would only get married to Jodha I couldn't help smiling with pride at your brilliance.😳😳😳 Jalal's respect for his father's promise tells me that he will become a magnificent Shehensha and even though he is called Jalal in your story, he is definitely AKBAR. Your Jodha is so gosh-darn cute!!😛😛 She is mischievous and charming and wins your heart immediately 😳but I was most excited when the valiant Suryabhan and the lustful evil Ruqaiyya entered the story. They will make for some interesting action as they play kebab mein haddi between our akhda!!😉 My fave scene was when Jalal was telling Abdul about his determination to win Jodha over. Wow yaar!! Kya baat hai!! You are simply a master blaster!!❤️ Ab jaldi update dijiye na!! I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE you brilliant writer you😳😳

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