OS 'Because, you're you and I'm me!' - That DARK night at the FOREST - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: prejudiced

Lovely!

Came to the phorum to see if there was a new promo and stumbled across this.
Provided for a fantastic read on a otherwise dull Sunday afternoon...
Nice! Jalal giving Jodha food for thought ...
Lets see how the actual scene emerges, if the creative can recreate even part of what u have here, am a happy soul!


awww thank you prejudiced..😳 (hmmm what an interesting choice of id)

The highlighted was a truly remarkable compliment...I'm flattered..

Originally posted by: mandyg

Oh my my lashy! main to teri phan ban gayee..what a brilliant writer u r..the cvz need to learn something from u..beautiful piece of writing🤗


mandy my dear... hey ... you are quite good at expressing yourself too and I love to read your posts...thank you so much once again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Omg this was so beautiful, with suspense in every line, my heart started beating faster after reading this, that's how amazing this was, please do continue, I can't wait till you write the next part, fantastic job!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Kesha...

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Lash in fun mood... type away friend. It was beautiful and pink. Jangal, Jodha aur Jalal! What else do we want.


Yes...yes...I have gone a little bonkers lately thanks to RT, PS and the historical fiction Ekta is trying to conjure...😆

Originally posted by: baubles

Hey,beautiful writing...!!!👏 Was superb...wish atleast something close to this would happen in d show..😳


Awww...I hope so too..some other tangent...some other setting...but still something fiery hot please...!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
The is exactly the scene I would luv to watch in the show...☺️ ...great job dear...👏👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smile.sara


what a wonderful piece of writing...
lashy ..u r zabardast..🤗🤗


Thank you sara...🤗 I love you too...

❤️ to you and
❤️ to your better half Mohan😛

Originally posted by: aranu

lovely...very well written!

Thank you dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

I keep on reading your OS.. I can't wait anymore
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awww, you do? Now ^^^ THAT has to be the best compliment I've ever received 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Awww, you do? Now ^^^ THAT has to be the best compliment I've ever received 😭


Arey 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have to keep writing more Lashy, such good imagination along with perfect dialog. I doubt the actual scene will be even slightly as pleasing as yours.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: phibi

Thanks.you are a terrific writer.keep it up.

I would like to suggest please write their conversation in Hindi,it feels like we are watching the show

I want this to happen...😊

Thanks yaar...however, I'm not fluent in the language therefore can't write in Hindi...also personally, I find it difficult to read Hindi in English...that's why I might be unable to write so...
However, I do try and keep avoid the more 'modern' terminolgies in the the English I use...😳

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