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ghalibmirza

@ghalibmirza

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Oh my my lashy! main to teri phan ban gayee..what a brilliant writer u r..the cvz need to learn something from u..beautiful piece of writing🤗

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Sara

@smile.sara

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

what a wonderful piece of writing...

lashy ..u r zabardast..🤗🤗

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phibi

@phibi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Thanks.you are a terrific writer.keep it up.

I would like to suggest please write their conversation in Hindi,it feels like we are watching the show

I want this to happen...😊

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jennylives85

@jennylives85

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Phenomenal writing lashy👏...totally love the way you get into the minds of the characters...this scene was hot stuff indeed 😉...I've read an SS of yours previously; have you written anything else? Is there a link to your other writings?? Please do let me know and if possible PM me in the future.

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shreya roy

@munni_rajatfan

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

wonderful writing yaar. loved it.👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: pari_pooja
loved it dear
it's awesome

thanks yaar... 😳

Originally posted by: Clumsy_Wings
Where the hell is the second part ?😡I rarely read O.S., and u can't do this to me.😡

ore baba itna gussa... 😛

this is an OS na...so haven't thought about continuing this, but will write regularly when I get time...😊

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Prim_123

@Prim_123

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

wow very nice.. loved it👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Az3003
Wow wonderful story!! I just saw ur comment above... So glad you decided to lengthen it👏👏👏

I look forward to see what you come up with!!
Keep it up
Lotsa Love
Az🤗

Hi Az...no I didn't say I was planning to continue with it...😆 I said it's an OS...so will write something else next week...

nevertheless, you're very sweet yaar...🤗

Originally posted by: sweet_tania
Lovely OS 👏... mere heartbeat fast ho gaye the...😉

Awww thank you tania😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Khush-
Lashy ! 👏 please do write more ! I'm always welcome to such hotness ! 🤣 damn it ! Now I want this sometime in the show ! Yes it may be not as subtle as Jalal is shown here and mostly it is to scare the heroine than tease her ! Lol but most shows do show such scenes where the male is grey/ passionate ! Cheers to this wish ! 😎 awesome again ! Pleaseee write more ! 🤗

awww thank you khush...🤗

As I said to Sunny, if not this hope they show something else...but something that helps tap the 'hotness' potential of our leads...