OS 'Because, you're you and I'm me!' - That DARK night at the FOREST - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: jennylives85

Phenomenal writing lashy👏...totally love the way you get into the minds of the characters...this scene was hot stuff indeed 😉...I've read an SS of yours previously; have you written anything else? Is there a link to your other writings?? Please do let me know and if possible PM me in the future.


awww thanks yaar...so sweet...previous works were a long time ago and the essence of it must be lost now...but will endeavour to keep writing...at least till the serial holds my fascination😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have already read it for at least 10 times, or may be ,more. now plz give some more or new. i just keep searching if what u have written. don't make us wait more, dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Shreya, Pkaps, pramila 🤗

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

wonderful post, absolutely enjoyed reading it wishing more more.

Well done and certainly looking forward to more👍🏼

Thanks yaar..
thank you all sooo sooo much for the support 🤗

@ Diksha...I've nearly been writing something or the other on a daily basis now...😆
But, I shall take your sweet sweet words as a lovely compliment...😳

Originally posted by: Jaisoif

Omg this was so beautiful, with suspense in every line, my heart started beating faster after reading this, that's how amazing this was, please do continue, I can't wait till you write the next part, fantastic job!


Thank you jaisof...your words were very encouraging indeed...there isn't intended to be a next part to this sweetie...its a one-shot...but, I'll try and write something else this weekend...
Posted: 11 years ago
#64
OMG!!
i can't believe i missed this!! the best OS and i loved it ...every word! 😛

my fav part:

He almost slapped his forehead 'Oh! An Ameri speciality, is it? No wonder it stings!'🤣

this is the best line ever!👏

She stopped there for a moment - staring agape, while he pursued with his rant 'If Begum Ruqaiyya was here, she'd have known precisely what to do! I don't know what got into me when I thought of taking you along...'

'Then you should have brought HER along Shehenshah...why did you drag me along here when you knew 'I' had no interest...' she sounded almost bitter there


i was expecting this conversation b/w AkDha. Jalal is so used to Ruqaiya that at some point he would feel the striking difference between the two!

thanks! Lashy! you should seriously think of writing a book you can very well be the next big woman author of our times! 😎 (now! don't bring up the little boys... it's the lack of time that usually brings out the best creativity and inspiration!)

Since, we have noticed CVs had copied few of your OS scenes i am so hoping the lift the entire sequence this time! ☺️ though the latter bit ...of him grabbing her by the waist is too soon in the serial but we can have it after few months!

you made my day! thank you!!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os lovely, hope the CVs show something like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghanajain

You have to keep writing more Lashy, such good imagination along with perfect dialog. I doubt the actual scene will be even slightly as pleasing as yours.


Awww thanks meghana...that's so sweet of you dear...btw..kyaa hua you sound a bit disappointed...wasn't yesterday's episode just fantastic in its own way...had a lot of different yet compelling scenes ...
Thanks once again dear...🤗

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

The is exactly the scene I would luv to watch in the show...☺️ ...great job dear...👏👍🏼

Thanks neha...thank you so so so much...😃

Thanks leelu for your support...thank you all...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Kai
OMG!!
i can't believe i missed this!! the best OS and i loved it ...every word! 😛 my fav part:
Thank you thank you thank you 😃

He almost slapped his forehead 'Oh! An Ameri speciality, is it? No wonder it stings!'🤣
this is the best line ever!👏
Awww ... 😳

She stopped there for a moment - staring agape, while he pursued with his rant 'If Begum Ruqaiyya was here, she'd have known precisely what to do! I don't know what got into me when I thought of taking you along...'

'Then you should have brought HER along Shehenshah...why did you drag me along here when you knew 'I' had no interest...' she sounded almost bitter there

i was expecting this conversation b/w AkDha. Jalal is so used to Ruqaiya that at some point he would feel the striking difference between the two!
😃

thanks! Lashy! you should seriously think of writing a book you can very well be the next big woman author of our times! 😎 (now! don't bring up the little boys... it's the lack of time that usually brings out the best creativity and inspiration!)
Hmmm what strange reasoning is that dear?Anyway, I like it😛

Since, we have noticed CVs had copied few of your OS scenes i am so hoping the lift the entire sequence this time! ☺️
☺️☺️☺️ thanks dearie

though the latter bit ...of him grabbing her by the waist is too soon in the serial but we can have it after few months!
He's already grabbed her by her waist...(as in when she's going to trip) it only sounds more explicit when described (than when seen) as we write the inner-workings of the mind too...if I had to write on their upcoming scene tomorrow- where he grabs her dupatta...it'd start sounding more like a 15+ 😆

you made my day! thank you!!🤗
Awww thank you honey...my pleasure...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy


Awww thanks meghana...that's so sweet of you dear...btw..kyaa hua you sound a bit disappointed...wasn't yesterday's episode just fantastic in its own way...had a lot of different yet compelling scenes ...
Thanks once again dear...🤗

Thanks neha...thank you so so so much...😃

Thanks leelu for your support...thank you all...🤗

The CVs have been giving us good episodes, no complains there. But, they have not yet developed Jodha's character in positive way. Hence I doubt that the actual scene will be even slightly as pleasing as yours. I would like to see a SS from you on the snake precap, please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghanajain

The CVs have been giving us good episodes, no complains there. But, they have not yet developed Jodha's character in positive way. Hence I doubt that the actual scene will be even slightly as pleasing as yours. I would like to see a SS from you on the snake precap, please!

An SS on the snake? Loool...seeing how they've directed it - by the time I describe it, its going to push it well and truly into the 15+ category 😆

Jodha will turn positive after Mohan...I'm confident of that😊...anyway, once she does turn positive..all this thrill and anticipation will dissipate...it'll become more straightforward with concentration on politics and what not (maybe a few MUs too!) so savour all of this while it lasts...cos there's no looking back after..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Lashy" I Love you yaar!

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