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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA



ooopppsss sorryy dear...
padhlo padhlo...

ALL D BEST DEAR...

Free ho kar continue karna...

di exams are over...practicals left...😆
i ll try to update tomorrow or the day after😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA




awww dear...luv u tooo much...
yup i luv d dialogues totally beautiful...bt favr8 one is above one...

ya thats why i put that in the middle of SR...
bcz mostly log during SR bbat nahi karte ,...but i just love dialogues...u know na😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pallavvi!
Tumhe kya hume marne ka irada hai?
Nancy ka SR update in 'Akdha in Jungle' and tumhara yeh vala!
Hayee! ❤️
Itz sPeCtAcUlAr!
Agar Jodha ke jagah Ruqaiya hoti toh voh bhi sharma jati.
Pallu meri jaan!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AriyaBestLover

Pallavvi!
Tumhe kya hume marne ka irada hai?
Nancy ka SR update in 'Akdha in Jungle' and tumhara yeh vala!
Hayee! ❤️
Itz sPeCtAcUlAr!
Agar Jodha ke jagah Ruqaiya hoti toh voh bhi sharma jati.
Pallu meri jaan!

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello friends...
m back ...finally got time to write...
here is the next update...
plz forgive the mistakes as i wrote it in a single stroke...

Chapter 21:-

(it was almost evening and after their long and tiring love making session ...the epic love birds were sleeping peacefully in each other's arms...with jodha resting her head on jalal's bare chest...and jalal's arm around her waist...covered in a blanket...suddenly jodha moved her head in her sleep and rubbed her cheek against his chest...she mistaken it to be pillow...she felt her nose itching and rubbed it against her so called pillow for comfort...jalal smiled with his eyes closed...he was still in the SR mode and was in his own dreamland... )

Jalal:- (smiling) kya kar rahi hai jodha begum...choriye na...hume gudgudi ho rahi hai...(he laughed lightly...)

(with that voice jodha slightly opened her eyes and was shocked to see what she was doing...and her so called pillow to be jalal's chest...she blushed lightly ..bit her tongue...and caressed the place with her hand where she was rubbing her nose and slept again adjusting her head on his broad manly chest...encircling his waist with her arm...)

(After some time jalal woke up from his sleep and what he saw ...left him totally dumbstruck...he found jodha sleeping like an angel on his chest and hugging him...she was looking so innocent just like a little girl...his happiness knew no bounds...he really thanked his allah for taking her in his life...her hairs were slightly covering her face...he raised his hand and ran his fingers on her face putting the thread of hair aside...stared at her lovingly...then slowly moved his head towards her and placed a soft kiss on her forehead...he remembered all the lovely & passionate moments they had together...a lone tear rolled down his eyes... )

(the soft touch of his lips caused jodha to wake up...she opened her eyes and looked at jalal...found him gazing at her without even a blink...)

Jodha:- ese kya dekh rahe hai shenshah...(with a cute smile)😳

Jalal:- kuch nahi...bus apni khushnasibi per yakin karne ki koshish kar rahe the...

(jodha noticed the tears in his eyes...she quickly got up a little and moved towards him...cupped his face with her hands...)

Jodha:- ye kya shenshah...aapki aankhon me aansu...kya hua...humse koi galti ho gayi kya....(she wiped them out with her thumb...)

Jalal:- galti se bhi koi galti nahi ho sakti aapse jodha...aur ye to khushi ke aansu hai...hum bata nahi sakte ke aaj hum kaisa mehsus kar rahe hai...hume yakin hi nahi ho raha ke aaj aap sachmuch puri tarah se humari ho gayi...

Jodha:- to yakin kar lijiye shenshah...kyuki yahi sach hai...hum to usi din aapke ho gaye the jab aapne humse apne dil ki baat kahi thi...ye to sirf ek aupcharikta thi jo aaj puri ho gayi...kintu yadi phir bhi aapko vishwas nahi ho raha hai to...(she bend her head a little and pretend as if going to kiss him...but stayed at some distance for some time...jalal couldn't bear that...he captured her shoulders tight and pulled her towards him...)

Jalal:- hume apni tarah samajhne ki bhul mat kijiyega jodha...hum itne bhi bevkuf nahi ke itna karib aane ke baad aapko yu hi jane dege...(and with that he kissed on her lips most passionately than ever...and captured her waist tight...dunno what was the magic b/w them but one single touch was capable of driving them insane...jalal glided his hands on her bare waist and back and pinned her against the bed...held her hands tight...and continued his passionate smooch...and the atmosphere again turned really intense...finally he broke the kiss and looked in her eyes...still lying on top of her... )

Jalal:- acha jodha...apse ek baat puche ...bura to nahi manegi...

Jodha:- (put her hand on his cheek) hmm...aapki kisi baaat ka bura kaise maan sakte hai hum...puchiye na...

Jalal:- wo hum janna chahte the ke...(he smirked knowingly...) humne aapko nirash to nahi kiya na...

Jodha:- (with a confused expression) matlab...hum kuch samjhe nahi...

Jalal:- are...humara matlab hai ke humare liye to ye koi nayi baat nahi hai...humne to isse pehle bhi kai baar ...begumo ke sath...ahem ahem(he said it purposely as he wanted to see jodha's reaction...that if she feel jealous or not...)...magar aapke liye to ye pehla anubhav hoga na...to hum janna chahte the ke kahin humse aapki khatirdari me koi kami to nahi reh gayi...hume ummid hai ke humne apki har ummid ko pura kiya hoga...kyu...esa hai na jodha begum...(smirked)😉

(this made jodha really irritated and annoyed...she pushed him , got up and sat on the bed...facing away from him...she was feeling way too jealous...fumed in anger with folded hands...)

(jalal smirked to the core at her gesture...he understood that how possessive she is for him...he slowly moved near her and hugged her from behind...with both of his hands around her arms ... below her chest...he decided to tease her a bit because it was the best thing to do for him...he was enjoying her jealousy to the core... )

Jalal:- jodha begum...aap rasoi me kuch khula chorker to nahi chali aayi thi na...hume kuch boo si aa rahi hai...lagta hai kisi ka dil jal rha hai....(giggled...she tried to get off his arms but he tightened his grip further...)...aapne humare sawal ka jawab nahi diya...sab kuch thik se kiya na humne...

Jodha:-(fuming in anger) choriye hume...hath hatayiye...humse kyu puch rahe hai...jayiye apni aur begumo se puchiye na...jinke sath aapne...ahem ahem... kiya hai...hume shama kijiye aap...(and she applied all her strength to move him away...)

Jalal:- (smirking) ya khuda...itna gussa...shant meri khunkhar baaghin shant...hahah...aap khamkha hi gussa kar rahi hai jodha...waise ek baat kahe...aapka ye hunar bhi kaabil-e-tariff hai...baki begumo me itna taab hi kaha... jo humari baaghin ke samne tik paaye... Manna padega...magar is mamle me bhi aapne un sabko maat de di hai...(jodha dint respond to his flattering...she had become really serious as she never liked anyone comparing her with others...she remained silent...jalal understood that he went too far in teasing her...he held her shoulders and turned her to him...jodha has lowered her sight...)

Jalal:- are...aap to bura maan gayi...hum to sirf mazak kar rahe the jodha...(he cupped her face in his hands and made her look in his eyes...)...maaf ker dijiye hume...(she dint respond...)...acha baba...lijiye kaan pakadte hai hum...(he pulled his ears with both of his hands and made a puppy like face...)..dobara kabhi esi baat nahi karege...ab to muaff ker dijiye hume...plzzz...(jodha smiled a bit at his gesture...she raised her hands and held jalal's hands with hers...and put them down...)

Jodha:- itne bade ho gaye hai lekin bachpana nahi gaya aapka...ye sab karne ki koi aavshyakta nahi hai...hum krodhit nahi hai aapse...kintu shenshah phir kabhi kisi se tulna mat kijiyega humari...hume acha nahi lagta...

Jalal:- sach maniye jodha...hum sirf mazak ker rahe the...humara maksad aapke dil ko thes pahuchana bilkul bhi nahi tha...hume muaaff kar dijiye...

Jodha:- are humne kaha na...koi baat nahi...ab baar baar shama mangker hume sharminda mat kijiye...

Jalal:- (cupping her face in his hands...)hum aapse kuch kehna chahte hai jodha...aur is baar hum mazak nahi kar rahe...humne ek faisla kiya hai...

Jodha:- nirnay...kaisa nirnay shenshah...

Jalal:- jodha,...humne faisla kiya hai ke...(he stopped for a second...)... aaj ke baad hum aapke alava kisi aur ke sath ...kisi bhi tarah ka jismani rishta kayam nahi karege...humare dil per...humari rooh per...humare jism per sirf aur sirf aapka haq hai...aur ab ye haq hum kisi aur ke sath nahi baatege...

Jodha:-(shocked) ye ...ye aap kya keh rahe hai shenshah...aap esa kaise kar sakte hai...ye to anyay hoga...aap esa nahi ker sakte...

Jalal:-(amazed at her reply...he thought she would be happy after listening this...)...kyu nahi kar sakte jodha...ye humari zindagi hai...aur hume apni zindagi kiske sath guzarani hai ye faisla humara hona chahiye...hum apse mohabbat karte hai jodha...pehle ki baat aur thi...pehle humare sine me dhadkan nahi hua karti thi...mohaabat or zazbat ke mayno se anjaan the hum...magar ab halat badal chuke hai...hum kisi se beintehaan mohabbat karne lage hai...humare sine me dil dhadkne laga hai jo jazbaato ko mehsus ker sakta hai...jo sirf aur sirf ek hi shaqs ke liye hai...aur wo aap hai jodha...hum chahker bhi ye mohabbat kisi aur ke sath baatne ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakte...humara dil iske liye kabhi gawahi nahi dega hume...aapke alava kisi aur ko chuna...nahi jodha...humara faisla bilkul sahi hai...

Jodha:- nahi shenshah...aapka ye sochna...ye sahi nahi hai shenshah...hum akele vyakti nahi hai aapke jivan me...aapne un sab se vivah kiya hai...aur wo sab aapki zimmedari hai...humari hi tarah har stri ki apne pati se kuch aashaye hoti hai ...kuch swapn hote hai...aur jab wo aashayen puri nahi hoti to bahut kashat pahuchta hai man ko shenshah...aur hum kisi ke kasht ka karan nahi banna chahte...wo sab bhi to aapke jivan ka hi ek hissa hai na...phir aap unke sath esa kaise kar sakte hai...

Jalal:- beshak wo humari zindagi me hai...per yaha baat zindagi ki nahi humare dil ki ho rahi hai...jisme sirf or sirf aap basti hai...humari choriye jodha...kya aap hume kisi dusri aurat ki bahon me dekh sakti hai....(he held her shoulders tight...)......hume kisi aur ke sath humbister hote bardasht kar payegi aap haan...??...boliye... (he shook her shoulders).....jawab dijiye hume...

Jodha:- (she closed her eyes...she couldn't even bear this thought...not able to say anything...she just hugged him tight...a lone tear rolled down her eyes that touched jalal's shoulder...he could sense her pain...and also her feelings)😭

Jalal:- hume aapka jawab mil gaya jodha...nahi dekh sakti na aap...jiske bare me aapko sochna tak gavara nahi...aap hume wo karne ko kaise keh sakti hai jodha...kyu galat thehra rahi hai humare faisle ko aap...

Jodha:- (broke the hug and placed her hand on his cheek...) kyuki satya chahe kitna bhi katu kyu na ho...use swikar karna hi padta hai shenshah...ek apne sukh ke liye... hum auron ke dukh ka karan nahi ban sakte...unka adhikar unse nahi chin sakte...aur aap humari chinta mat kijiye...(now she took his face completely in her hands and joined his head to hers...)...aapka itna sochna hi bahut hai humare liye ...hum samhal lege swayam ko...kyuki hum bhali bhanti jante hai...aap chahe kisi ke bhi paas rahe ...prem to sadaiv humse hi karege na...humara sthan koi nahi le sakta...hume aap per pura vishwas hai shenshah...aap kabhi bhi hume dhoka nahi de sakte...aur mat bhuliye ke humare pati hone ke sath sath aap ek shenshah bhi hai...aur ek shenshah apne kartvyo se mukh mod le ye use shobha nahi deta...

Jalal:-(way to surprised by her words...how could she be so selfless...so pure...he cupped her face in his hands with immense affection...looked deep down in her eyes...his throat became a bit glitch...and his voice a bit husky )...kaise jodha...inti masum kaise ho sakti hai aap...itna saaf kaise ho sakta hai aapka dil jisme kisi ke liye koi gurez nahi...itni nek dil kaise ho sakti hai aap jodha...kitni alag hai aap un sab se...harem ki dusri begumeen jahan humesha is koshish me lagi rehti hai ke kaise...kaise hume aur begumo se dur rakh sake...unhe humari nazro me niche gira sake...humara sara waqt apne naam kar sake...wahin ek aap hai...jo kabhi khud ke bare me nahi sochti...apni khushiyo ke bare me nahi sochti...apne jazbaato ke bare me nahi sochti...humesha...humesha sirf aur sirf dusro ki khushi...unki sahuliyat ke liye fikrmand rehti hai...khud se itni berukhi kyu jodha...kyu...'

Jodha:- (smiles faintly with tears in her eyes...)...aap jo hai humari chinta karne ke liye shenshah...phir hume kya aavshyakta hai apne bare me sochne ki...aap hai na humara khayaal rakhne ke liye...aap humare liye sab kuch hai shenshah...humara sukh...humara dukh...humari aasha...humara jivan..sab kuch...

(jalal...unable to control himself...pulled her towards him by shoulder...hugs her tightly out of happiness...tears started flowing from his eyes...)

Jalal:- oh...jodha...sachmuch...lavz nahi hai humare paas...samajh nahi aata kaise us khuda ka shukriya ada kare...jisne aapko farishta banaker humari zindagi me bheja...sachmuch...aapne humari adhuri zindagi ko pura kar diya jodha...humari berang zindagi ko khushiyo ke rango se sarabor kar diya aapne...humse kabhi dur mat jayiyega jodha...hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai...hum ji nahi payege ...bilkul bhi nahi...aaj hum aapse ek wada karte hai...ke hum aaj ke baad koi bhi nikaah nahi karege...jalal sirf aapka hai aur humesha aapka hi rahega...sirf aur sirf aapka...

(And they again get lost in each other ...hugging each other with tremendous love and passion...)

(Scene shifted to the terrace...where hamida was sitting with jiji anga and gulbadan begum... ..Discussing about her journey to Ajmer Sharif...)

Jiji anga:- lekin hamida begum...achanak ye ajmer sharif jane ka khayaal kaise aaya aapke zehen me...

Hamida:- baat hi esi hai jiji anga...magar hum aapko abhi bta nahi sakte...hume kuch bahut zaruri kaam yaad aa gaya...hume ijazat dijiye...khuda hafiz...

(hamida was about to leave...when moti came to her running...she was way too flabbergasted ...gasping hard...hamida got really worried seeing her condition...)

Hamida:-(worried) kya hua moti...tum itni ghabrayi hui kyu ho...kya hua??

Moti:-(gasping hard) wo ...wo mallika-e-aazam...jodha...(her breath rate was too fast to speak...hamida got even more tensed)

Hamida:- jodha...kya hua hua jodha ko...wo thik to hai na ...ya khuda...kahin use kuch...nahi nahi...saaf saaf bolo...kya baat hai...(she held her shoulders...)

Moti:-wo...jodha ka kahin kuch pata nahi chal raha mallika e aazam...humne pure mehel me khoja...har jagah dekha...kintu wo kahin bhi nahi hai...dopher se sandhya hone ko aayi hai...aur unka kuch pata nahi hai...

Hamida:- ya allah...ye tum kya keh rahi ho moti...tumne thik se to dekha tha na...

Moti:- haan...mallika...kahan kahan nahi dhunda humne...per wo kahin nahi mili...

(hamida clapped her hands twice to call the soldiers...and ordered them to search jodha everywhere...and mentioned that she want results at any cost...suddenly a thought came in her mind...)

Hamida:- zara ek pal thehro moti...tumne jalal se pucha...shayad use kuch malum ho...

Moti:- ji...hum gaye the shenshah se milne...kintu unke sainiko ne hume bhent nahi karne di...keh rahe the ke shenshah ka aadesh hai... ke jab tak wo na chahe unse koi na mile...

Hamida:- ye kaisa hukam diya hai jalal ne...esa to kabhi nahi karte wo...kahin unke aur jodha ke bich koi galatfehmi to nahi ho gayi fir se...tum chalo humare sath...

Moti:- kintu kahan mallika e aazam...

Hamida:- jalal ke paas...ab wohi batayega ke jodha kahan hai...agar is baar usne jodha ko koi chot pahuchayi hogi to hum use kabhi muaff nahi karege...

Moti:- kintu mallika...unhone to kisi se bhi milne se mana kiya hai...

Hamida:- un kisi me hum shaamil nahi hai moti baai...hum marium makani hai...uski waalida...aur hume apne bte se milne se koi nahi rok sakta...khud wo bhi nahi...chalo humare sath...

(and she left for jalal's room with moti...she reached to there but soldiers tried to stop her as it was jalal's order...hamida was already in high rage...she busted out on the soldiers...)

Hamida:- badtammez... tumhe ilm bhi hai ke tum kisse mukhatib ho...ammi hai hum uski...aur uska koi bhi hukum hum per lagu nahi hota...ab hato humare raste se...😡

(And she made his way to jalal's room)

(on the other hand jalal and jodha...both were completely lost in each other's arms unaware of the storm coming towards them...jalal was sitting on the bed... resting his back on the wall behind the bed...and jodha was lying over him...her back touching his front body and her head was placed on jalal's chest...with jalal's one hand around her neck and other around her waist...holding each other's hand lovingly...jalal playing with her fingers with his meanwhile...)😳

Jodha:- shenshah....(softly...)

Jalal:- (eyes closed...smiling) hmm...

Jodha:- kafi der ho gayi hai...ab hume chalna chahiye...humne kisi ko suchna bhi nahi di thi humare yaha aane ki...hum jaaye...

Jalal:- (still with closed eyes...) hmm...bus kuch der aur... ...

(hamida quickly made her way to the entrance...and what she saw gave her utter amazement...she found all the curtains of jalal's room closed...jalal never did that before...so she understood that there is something wrong...so before entering into his room she thought of calling up for jalal first...)

Hamida:- (in a loud voice...) jalal...jalal...

(inside the room...jodha still in trance...)

Jodha:- shenshah...koi bula raha hai aapko...

Jalal:- hmmm...ammijaan hai shayad...

Jodha:- hmmm....(suddenly jodha opened her eyes as she snap out of her trance and so as jalal...they both looked at each other with their eyes and mouth wide open in shock...)😲

Jodha and Jalal:-(simultaneously) ammi jaan...(shocked)

Thanku friends...😃

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but plz like zarur kar dena😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Super se bhi uper tha yeh chapter😳 totally loved it... enjoyed reading it...
lol hamida jab dekhengi jodha ko bahar aate hue... hahah☺️ isssh

update soon..
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wow nice episode👏
plz update soon
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Pallavi Pallavi Pallavi ❤️
Mind blowing update! ❤️
It was so cute! I must say that I am deeply in love with ur FF and if I keep in writing like this.. Someday I will be deeply in love with u 🤣

Jodha is so sensible! Jalal is so nice! I love. This Hamida Bano!

Such an embarrassing moment for Jalal and Jodha 🤣

Update plzzz 🤣
Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 11 years ago
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Very nice chapter ! update soon 👏
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amazing update...kyo khatam ho gyi😡..i ws really enjoying..

loved it to d core...plz continue soon

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