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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello everyone...😊

sorry for the delay...here is the next chapter😃

Enjoy...if it's good...nahi to kauno zabardasti nahi hai😆

Chapter 7:-

(It was midnight and both jodha and jalal were sleeping peacefully...jodha turns in her sleep and slowly opens her eyes to confirm if jalal is there or not...she sees jalal sleeping peacefully w/o any expression looking divine and innocent just like a child...she thinks)

Jodha(to herself):- dekho kitne masum laga rahe hai is samay...parantu uthte hi jallad ban jate hai...ammi jaan ne soch samajh ker hi naam rakha hai...khadus shenshah jallal...jallad kahin ke ...aap ese masum dikhker hume rijha nahi sakte...hum aapko bilkul pasand nahi karte...huh...

(she laughs lightly...and is amazed too at her thought of jalal looking innocent...but jodha's smile vanishes and a really afraid and worried expression takes place on her face when she sees a snake crawling near jalal's leg...and jalal sleeping unaware of that)

Jodha:-shenshah...(worried)

(jalal dint listen as he was in deep sleep...jodha quickly moves towards jalal and catches the snake and throws it away from jalal as it was about to bite him)

(in this process, jodha's duppatta stuck in her feet and she looses her balance and as a result her duppata goes up flying and she falls on top of jalal with a bang...jalal immediately wakes up and as an instant reaction his arms goes around jodha's waist and the dupatta falls over them covering them with it completely )

*akdha background soft*😳

(their condition is like...both of jodha's hand are on jalal's chest and her hairs are covering jalal's face...jalal's hands on her bare waist...with his one hand...jalal slowly removes jodha's hairs from his face and put them aside...other hand still on its position)

*ishq hai wo jazbaat...ishq hai wo ehsaas...bg*

bg starts...saiyaan *kailash kher*

*hire moti mai na chahu...mai to chahu sangam tera...

main to teri saiyaan...tu hai mera*

(both are lost in each others' eyes...continuously gazing without even a blink or any expression covered in the transparent yellow dupatta... It seems like god has himself choosen them for each other...jodha looking into jalal's eyes ...how intense they are...jalal feels blessed as he is watching the most divine and internal beauty so close to him...her eyes so innocent...her lips just like a rose pettel...her cheeks going red with the color of blush... for the first time jalal was feeling that jodha is not ashamed of her being touched by him...she is touching him willingly...there is so much care and softness in her touch...it's so soothing...making him lost in her beauty more and more...)

*saiyaan...saiyaan...*

*ban ke mala prem ki tere tan pe jhar jhar jau*

*baithu naiya prem ki sansaar se tar jau...mai tere pyar me kho jau*

(suddenly there is thunder and lightning...with the huge sound...jodha at once hides her face in jalals chest...hugs him tightly out of fear...this works as an anesthesia to jalal...now he is really unable to hold his emotions and he hugs her back by putting his one hand around her shoulders and other around her waist...he is not able to believe that it is really happening...dunno y but he is feeling really happy )

*saiyaan...saiyaaannn*

(after some time jodha raise her head and again looks into jalal's eyes...there is a different spark in his eyes...she doesn't realize that they are in each other's embrace...)

Jodha:- kya hua?? Aap hume ese kyu dekh rahe hai...aap thik to hai na

Jalal:- ab to sirf dekh hi sakte hai jodha begum...kyuki kuch bolne ke to humare halat nahi hai filhal....(smirks)😆

Jodha:-kya arth hai aapka??

Jalal:-matlab to aap hi zyada ache se samajh sakti hai...kyuki harkat to aapki hai ye...hum to sirf mausam or halat ka lutf utha rahe hai...😉

(now, jodha notices their position...she quickly tries to get depart.. but falls again because of the dupatta...she struggles with her dupatta to get out of it...jalal watches her smiling... )

Jalal:- rukiye...are rukiye begum sahiba...aap se nahi hoga hum kuch karte hai...

Jodha:- nahi hum kar lege...(in an angry tone...and she continues her attempt)

Jalal:-shhh...bus...(he tightly captures her shoulders to stop her...he rolls at once and now jalal is on top of jodha...and the dupatta lying under her...she gets scared...)

Jodha:- ye aap kya??(jalal stops her in mid by putting his index finger on jodha's lips...*AKDHA EYELOCK*) ghabraiye mat...

(and he gets up from her...and offers his hand to jodha...but she stands by herself)

Jodha:- (adjusting her dupatta...) aapko lazza nahi aati...itni badi saltanat ke shehnshah hoker kya apko ye shobha deta hai...

Jalal:- are wah...ek to chori upper se sinazori...hum to chain se so rahe the...aapko hi hum per girne ka shauk hua tha...dekhiye hum kitna ghabra gaye😆...aur aap hume hi kasurwaar thehra rahi hai...ye to jayaz nahi hai jodha begum...

Jodha:- ye aapka bhram hai...wo to hum... kahir jaane dijyye aapko samjhana apna hi samay vyartha karna hai...or wese bhi hume koi shauk nahi hai aapke nikat aane ka...(and she moves away from him but feels dizzy...her head starts spinning...and she was about to fall when jalal catches her again by waist...he thinks that she again tumbled... )

Jalal:- dekha jodha begum...ab batayiye kaun sahi tha...hum ya...(he notices that jodha is fainting and drops of sweat has covered her face completely...continuously blinking her eyes ...now he gets worried...) jodha begum...(he sits down holding her in his lap...pats her cheek)

Jalal:-jodha...jodha...ye kya ho raha hai aapko...aap thik to hai na ...jodha(really worried)

(then jalal notices that jodha's hand is turning blue...he gets more tensed now...he quickly checks her hand...it was a snake bite...in the process of throwing the snake away...jodha dint noticed till now...but the snake has bitten on her hand while saving jalal )

Jalal:- jodha ye kya ...(jalal sees a snake crawling outside the gate...and understands the whole scenario that what jodha did for saving his life...)

Jalal:-jodha aapne...humare liye...lekin kyu...aap to humse nafrat karti hai...shuru se hi humara kata hua sir dekhna chahti thi aap to...is baar to mauka bhi tha aapke paas...koi shak bhi nhi karta aap per...phir kyu kiya aapne esa...kyu humari jaan bachayi...boliye...aakhir kyu...😭

Jodha(in a low voice): -aapne kyu raksha ki thi humare prano ki...aapne bhi to nahi bataya hume...

Jalal:- wo to humara farz tha...aap mogul saltanat ki begum hai...

Jodha:- to bus...humne bhi wohi kiya hai...ek patni or rani hone ka kartavya nirvah kiya hai...ek patni hone ke nate apne pati ko aur ek rajya ki rani hone ke nate uske shenshah ko apni aakhon ke samaksh pran tyagte kaise dekh sakte the hum...

Jalal:- aap fikr mat kariye jodha begum...hum aapko kuch nahi hone dege...kuch nahi hoga aapko...

(and he tores a piece of cloth from jodha's dupatta and ties it tightly on jodha's hand to prevent the poision to move further in her body...and picks up the khanjar from his pocket and makes a medium cut on the place where the snake has bitten jodha...so that the poisonous blood can come out more fastly...he starts sucking the poision out from the cut...and spitting it away...he is doing it so fast as he is doing this to save his own life...and indeed it was about his life...his jodha...jodha tries to stop him...)

Jodha:- shenshah rukiye...kya kar rahe hai aap...ye aapke liye hanikarak ho sakta hai...

Jalal:-humare liye kya sahi hai or kya galat ye hum achi tarah samajhte hai...aapki salah nahi maangi thi humne...chupchap leti rahiye...hum jante hai ke hum kya kar rahe hai....(and he continues...within no time...he sucks all the poisonous blood out...jodha feels much relieved now...)

(jalal takes her in his arms...lifts her and put her on his bed...slowly makes her lie comfortably...and also applies some crused leaves*herbs* so as to heal her wound...places his hand on her forehead)

Jalal:-ab aap so jayiye...apko aram ki sakht zarurat hai...aur hum yehi letege aapke pass (jodha gives him a confused look)😕

(jalal smiles) pareshan mat hoyiye...hum fayda nahi uthaye aapka...chuyege bhi nahi aapko...bus aapki hifazat karege har khtre se...(jodha feels relieved ...smiles and closes her eyes...jalal also lies down beside jodha...maintaining a distance in their bodies facing her...he looks at her lovingly and thankx his allah that he saves her at the right time...closes his eyes)

Precap:- Adham attacking jalal in jungle😡...akdha fighting together against adham😊

Thanku friends...

Don't forget to like and comment😊⭐️

Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
is it me ...nany??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neetu_sultan

Loved ur post ! Amazingly written...can actually visualize it !

I just love ur version of JA stories...they are actually better than the real episodes... ! 😊
Way to go girl ! 😊

"Aur ek bat kahe bura to nahi manegi...agar hume yahi karma hota to humari mohabbt ke 2-3 nazrane abhi tak aapki god me khel rahe hote.. " that was hilarious ! 🤣 🤣


thankx yar...
glad you like it😊
Pallavvi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey please read again...edited...added a song😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice One... Update soon please... :)👏
Nany thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

only for u dear...for such a nyc update...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nany


only for u dear...for such a nyc update...

thanku nany...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update pallu...
Jodhajalal love eachother bt dont undestand ther feeling to eachother...
Love it...
Thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely post .
Akadha vs Adham seems exciting
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow- thank u so much for giving us a very delightful scenarios of snake.It would have been nice if they had used this as snake scene in the show.
thank u for the pm. plzz update soon

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