OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Thanks peachesandcream, sps1234, baubles, vincyanne and nandini ...

Thank you all so much for your encouragement...it means a lot 🤗

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Suvarna

@Super Kool

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Lashy dear...loads of hugs for you...🤗The story has ended on such a high...not a word spoken between the two...yet message conveyed...Ahhh...I loved this story...❤️❤️You are an amazing storyteller...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Super Kool
Lashy dear...loads of hugs for you...🤗The story has ended on such a high...not a word spoken between the two...yet message conveyed...Ahhh...I loved this story...❤️❤️You are an amazing storyteller...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

awww thank you my dearest friend for your regular comments and uplifting words...really makes my day go -> ⭐️

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Hey there,

I was reading this during my break and I absolutely adore this work. Just the right amount of sexual tension but no where near d class. You maintained the charm and tone of your style throughout and most importantly, you had a real story to tell. Nothing holds up fiction more than a substantial plot and might I add, I am amazed. Keep doing what you do boo. Normally a technical person, I did not dare look into such things. I was too busy enjoying the writing and laughing along at the punch lines. Great work!

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leelu

@leelu0001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

what a sweet ending really enjoyed reading ur fanfic

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meghanajain

@meghanajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Lashy - this is the best SS I have read on JA. You are so creative, the dialogs between Akdha were so mischievous. The way Jodha responded by wearing his dress, huge applaud. I loved the way you described their restlessness also, just beautiful story. Hope you write many more stories!

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dlip

@dlip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Perhaps creative minds think alike.

Jalal's comment after second option is same as per your story.

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preeti

@teletubby

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

oh wow lashy..awesome story 👏

u write so well...⭐️

keep writing...loved ur akdha!😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey
Hey there,
I was reading this during my break and I absolutely adore this work. Just the right amount of sexual tension but no where near d class. You maintained the charm and tone of your style throughout and most importantly, you had a real story to tell. Nothing holds up fiction more than a substantial plot and might I add, I am amazed. Keep doing what you do boo. Normally a technical person, I did not dare look into such things. I was too busy enjoying the writing and laughing along at the punch lines. Great work!

Wow what words to receive as compliments from a magnificent writer as yourself...so glad you enjoyed it...I can't even begin to tell you how much these words mean to this humble writer-wannabe! 😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Thanks leelu for your lovely compliments..🤗

Originally posted by: maanluvsgeet
wow awesome

Thank you yaar 😳

Originally posted by: meghanajain
Lashy - this is the best SS I have read on JA. You are so creative, the dialogs between Akdha were so mischievous. The way Jodha responded by wearing his dress, huge applaud. I loved the way you described their restlessness also, just beautiful story. Hope you write many more stories!

Awww thank you so much Megha...it means so much more coming from friend and one thats a good writer like yourself...🤗

Thanks a lot once again...

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago