OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Really beautiful story. I wish we get to see something of this sort onscreen. The ending was fantastic and charming. If you even have the slightest inclination to continue, please do.

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jennylives85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Dear lashy! That has got to be the most enticing SS Ive ever read. Kept me drooling for more..your turn of phrase and ability to articulate the thoughts of J and J is fantastic. Please do write more. I just read all your chapters at one go now. Doff my hat to you.

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Shraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Awww aanchal how sweet is that of you...

I'll try and see if I can do it...but will not be possible for me for the next few weeks at least since I'm in the process of shifting into a new house...and its in an absolute mess...so actually next couple of weeks, I'd not be able to visit forum as much as I've been...

but can try and rummage my brains after that to see if I can come with something to follow up...😳

Your words are all very kind!

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peachesandcream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Very nicely written. They way you write is just amazing and a pleasure to read.

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Shraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Thanks barbie, udayamanyata, dilip and kb_war

Your encouragement means a lot

Originally posted by: ashpat
lashy, WHy? Why did u have to end this ss especially the way u ended? It was so beautifully written. I actually felt like i was watching last exchange of silent dialogues live.
Awww that was so sweet of you to say...😳 I was wondering if it had the effect it should have had...because I had a scene in my mind and was not sure if I'd be able to capture the same essence while writing it down...😃

this was much mroe than satisfying read but u could make this into ff, pleassseee or at least give us a new ss or ff. But, i think it would be awesome if you can make this into ff by continuing it where u left off.
I will try ashpat...I will try ...not for the next month or so..but maybe later...

Thank you so much for this beautiful and amazing ss.👏👏😃

Thanks dearie 🤗

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Hie,Im new here...read ur entire SS and loved it,you write really well!! Do write more...👏👍🏼

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Omg...beautiful ending 👏 loved the way you ended the story.
Jodha-jalal silent conversation is just awesome. Looking forward to read more from you

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Shraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Beautiful write up😛 so J & J are conversing through gestures now!!

Yup...after all she's on top of the terrace and he somewhere in the palace gardens down...me thought gestures a better bet than loudspeakers...😆

The CVs should take a page from your SS...this is the kind of story development we need. Slowly and steadily they are getting to know about either other through their banter.

Thank you☺️

I loved the below line of Jalal's😎

With a subtle smile on his lips, he studied her for a moment 'I needed to return to Agra urgently and your health wasn't showing signs of recovery...I was wondering if your Gods were angry since I'd not permitted you to visit last time...' he shrugged casually 'Better not to displease them, I thought...'

Oh..🤔

It was sad to see Jalal leave for his conquest and the ending of your SS!!😔 I had something interesting to look forward to during the weekends!

Awww why sweetie...he's left on a high note...what with Jodha having worn the dress he gave her...and having said bye bye so nicely...😛aap chinta na karein...those two hate-love birds will have a good time once he's back

Anyways, thanks Lashy🤗🤗

Thank you sweetheart for being there..🤗

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Wow .. U r good .. Looking forward for ur future SS.. Also if possible plz PM ... Thx

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Shraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: juggaad
Really beautiful story. I wish we get to see something of this sort onscreen. The ending was fantastic and charming. If you even have the slightest inclination to continue, please do.

Awww that was soo sweet thank you😳

Originally posted by: jennylives85
Dear lashy! That has got to be the most enticing SS Ive ever read. Kept me drooling for more..your turn of phrase and ability to articulate the thoughts of J and J is fantastic. Please do write more. I just read all your chapters at one go now. Doff my hat to you.

Oh wow... thank you so much...they were very uplifting words indeed...haven't seen you around in the forum...hope to see you around more...😳

will try and come up with something in a few weeks time if my imagination permits...😃