FF ~A Midsummer Night's Dream~epilogue pg 45

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SonyaBlade

@SonyaBlade

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

I'm speechless. Your FF is amazing and so beautifully written. You can really understand both Jodha and Jalal, it all feels so real when reading it.

I just read the entire story now...every scene is just breathtaking...i cant' grasp all of the hindi..probably understand abotu 90% of it, but it is surreal, everything about your FF.

Please do continue, and your long updates definitely do satisfy our appetite for more! Can'\t wait for many more chapters to come...

BTW : How do you include a link the way you have it wwritten in your first...Id like to do that for my FF to if you can PM me how...

Thanks,

Sonya

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kushboo

@-Khush-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Wonderful update again, Piu ! 👏
This one was even better with Jalal showing his attitude to her in a gentle way ! 😎 😆
And lol how just when jodha was abt to dream of surya Jalal disturbed it even though asleep! U saved us from high sugar in your FF ! 🤣
Update VERY soon !

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Aww piu u can call me Vibha/Vibz... I am the laziest of your readers but trust me I always feel like doing a detailed review when i read the chapters and you deserve it after all you work very hard with the lengthy lengthy updates... 😛

Res for now...

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les-miserables

@les-miserables

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Trust me when I say that you are an amazing writer! 👏

The mother-daughter talk was very well written :)

My heart was filled with joy when Anjuman's heart was burning with jealousy.
She deserved it. When she smeared her makeup I was like -- 🤣 😆

Husna is cute, I fully enjoy her teasing and bubbly nature.
I wonder why she sounded sad at the mention of her house.
I am also curious to know that is she aware of her Bhabhi's illicit desires?

I loved the part where Jalal had a little heart to heart and a strong bond with Kartikeya. Hoping to see more in future.

The last scene was described beautifully. I feel sad for both of them.
I hearty wish that Jodha gives Jalal a chance to love.

Can't wait to see what you do next :)

Thank you so much for the long chapter and pm!

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Suvarna

@Super Kool

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Such a beautiful update...jalal and jodha are fighting their own battles...leaving them emotionally wrecked...nobody is to be blamed...the night is so long and dark for them...but, the flicker of hope is always there...last scens was so beautifully written...❤️

Kudos..!!!!

Thank you for the pm...

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: riyya6
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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Beautiful update.

Originally posted by: daisydee425
amazing update
thnks forpm

Originally posted by: 123pritha
wonderful👏

Thank you guys🤗

Edited by manzilmukul - 11 years ago

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
Aww Poor Jodha She Still Hates Jalal. She Has Every Right To.

Yes she certainly does but slowly they will fall in love😳

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FrozenRain

@FrozenRain

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

beautifully written...even though i'm not watching this show bt love to read ur ff...it's refreshing to read it every time...

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

hey dear

wow, that was a long and beautiful update

lovedd it😃

whatever little hindi i know, i can understand what is going on (about 90% 😆)

i feel so sorry for jalal 😭... the way u describe his pain is amazing ⭐️. i can feel it, even for jodha as well.

i really loved the bonding between jalal and jodha's small brother.. its so sweet😳

i hope jodha softens towards him soon..😒

btw please tell me if im on the right track...

anjuman is jalal's sis-in law and adham's wife who is in love with jalal?

jodha thinks jalal killed her dad? she mentioned that to her mother as well in this update but she didnt seem shocked or anything. did jalal really do that?

im going to read the story from the begining again..😆

thanks for the pm hun

really looking forward to the next part

take care