FF ~A Midsummer Night's Dream~epilogue pg 45 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

Awesome and long update. Every part of ur update was awesome .its so beautifully written. Jodha's reactions and Jalal's feeling everything was just wow. I really like the bond that kartikeya and Jalal share. Jalal loves Jodha so much. Very well written update. I'm very pleased and I hope u update soon dear with the same awesome writing

Originally posted by: SonyaBlade

I'm speechless. Your FF is amazing and so beautifully written. You can really understand both Jodha and Jalal, it all feels so real when reading it.

I just read the entire story now...every scene is just breathtaking...i cant' grasp all of the hindi..probably understand abotu 90% of it, but it is surreal, everything about your FF.

Please do continue, and your long updates definitely do satisfy our appetite for more! Can'\t wait for many more chapters to come...

BTW : How do you include a link the way you have it wwritten in your first...Id like to do that for my FF to if you can PM me how...

Thanks,

Sonya

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

Hey girl when r ya gonna update? Eagerly waiting

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Aww m so sorry to disappoint you but haven't managed to finish it yet...So sorry Hopefully by Wednesday I will manage one..🤗 Choory</font>

Originally posted by: -Khush-

Wonderful update again, Piu ! 👏
This one was even better with Jalal showing his attitude to her in a gentle way ! 😎 😆
And lol how just when jodha was abt to dream of surya Jalal disturbed it even though asleep! U saved us from high sugar in your FF ! 🤣
Update VERY soon !

Originally posted by: les-miserables

Trust me when I say that you are an amazing writer! 👏

The mother-daughter talk was very well written :)
Ahh Thanks for the wonderful words of appreciation HUGS🤗 I am glad that it could touch you😊

My heart was filled with joy when Anjuman's heart was burning with jealousy.
She deserved it. When she smeared her makeup I was like -- 🤣 😆

🤣🤣🤣Yup LOl

Husna is cute, I fully enjoy her teasing and bubbly nature.
I wonder why she sounded sad at the mention of her house.
I am also curious to know that is she aware of her Bhabhi's illicit desires?
Aww for the sake of curiosity I am going to keep my mouth shut at this point of time😆

I loved the part where Jalal had a little heart to heart and a strong bond with Kartikeya. Hoping to see more in future.
It will come for sure😳

The last scene was described beautifully. I feel sad for both of them.
I hearty wish that Jodha gives Jalal a chance to love.
Thanks both of them are a victim to the harsh hands of destiny one cannot blame anyone its just them

Can't wait to see what you do next :)

Thank you so much for the long chapter and pm!