FF ~A Midsummer Night's Dream~epilogue pg 45

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Super Kool
Wow...amazing...👏👏👏

things have changed and changed pretty dramatically in 5 years...jalal and jodha have a turbulent relationship...it's emotionally draining and difficuilt for both of them...

Adam khan...🤬Such a creep...

Thank you for the pm...thank you for posting a long update...👍🏼

Thanks a lot😳😳😳Yes within last five years things have dramatically changed and their relationship too.They had a cordial beginning more like chirpy friends but the events that took place in their lives left both of them at this state..With Jodha hating Jalaal...STAY TUNED!!

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: arnav26
Wow!! Thats a very good update👏..loved it😊
You are a very good writter!! continue soon😊
Thanks for the pm and sorry for commenting this late

Thanks so much for the appreciation😳Why sorry 😃Its ok..We all have personal livers too..You appreciated that's what matters to me the most..Thanks once again😳

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever
Awesome update. Sorry for the late response. Very well written update. Thank God Jodha is fine. Cont soon and thankx for the long update and pm

Thanks so much😳Why sorry we all have busy personal lives so you appreciated that's what is more important to me😳 Will try to update really soon😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: -sanaa-
beautifully written...i'm loving this ff more than the show...awesome..

Thanks Sana😳

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-Eris-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

I ended up reading this three times to actually comment.

Love the details you put in be it the way you describe amer the oasis, the rose flavoured drink, or the ghungru of the dancer or the way kartikeya uses l instead of r. He is adorable 😆.
Love the akhda banter from the flashbacks. So jodha is in love with suryabhaan while jalal is mesmerized and Adam khan lusting after her...

Anjuman ki niyat to bahut gandi hai. 😲. . Jalal and jodha were fighting like junglis 😛 pulling hair, pushing, swords .. I wish you shed more light on the reason why jalal attacked amer.

Somewhere you wrote gulal instead of jodha. Does this have a gulal kesar version? Would love to read that. :)

The best part of your updates is they are super long. Do update soon ...

Edited by -Eris- - 12 years ago