JAJ SS Dil Kya karein *part 11,Pg-34* updated!! *new part up* - Page 6

Originally posted by: JAJfan_Inshifan

wow amazing update loved

and u did right that u added sukirti becouse i am a big fan

yup shama.. I'm a huge fan of Suku as well, specially Kasu. I love ur dp. Armaan looks so cutee in there!

thank you for ur sweet comment. Glad u liked🤗

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hi -Priyam-😃 How r u?

Very nice banner.👍🏼

pg 6

Yay new ch 😃 Love the dialogues. Some are so funny.😆

Aww Shizo's past is sad.

Hehe there's a character name Prem :P but sad he is no ore.

Same name in a show I watched and one of my fav characters. I kinda blinked and looked you also wrote in ur story.😆 It was nice.

So the war starts in next ch? Shizo has friends support. That's fab. Pari and his convo are touching.

I'm sorry to hear you had trouble updating.

Ty and keep rocking.

Want to know what's next.

Hey Athi. that's not a banner😆 But thanks.😃 I was just assigning characters, so that we know what r the imp characters in this SS. Thanks so much for ur lovely reply. I'm glad u took out your time to type out such a long n sweet feedback. That really means so much🤗❤️
Well Prem isn't dead. I can bring him back in coming chaps, ya know magic😆 I'm planning to turn this SS/FF into an adventure/quest with a touch of romance. I hope you'll enjoy the nxt part as well.
thank you🤗

Originally posted by: -Priyam-

yup shama.. I'm a huge fan of Suku as well, specially Kasu. I love ur dp. Armaan looks so cutee in there!

thank you for ur sweet comment. Glad u liked🤗

yeah i know

Note:

Regarding the hindi dialogues...

Some might prefer hindi n some english. I'm confused as to which one to opt. I've always been writing in Hindi so far.. If someone needs translation I will add dem too..

Lemme know. Thanks for all ur love n support❤️

Athi..🤗 thank you so much for the quick reply. I'm glad you're following my story n you liked it. Means so much... About Prem yes! He isn't dead so he might come around.😉

I like adventures too, specially fantasy filled ones. N I'm glad u r ok with both the languages... Thank you n have a great time🤗

Aww so nice update priyam😳 You are an amazing writer 👏
I am in love with the ff. Do update soon :)

@Afss-

Aww thank you dear! Thanks so much. My ff bagged a new reader who's also my friend. Thanks yar🤗 Glad u liked😊❤️

Part Six

dint recheck. You guys dunno how lazy I am. So sorry abt mistakes if any😳

The following morning

7am:

Vicky descends the stairs after waking up.

"Jeannie! Oh Jeanniee..."

He finds there is no one. He calls again. But in vain. He goes to his dining table where he finds a note placed along with breakfast. What is inside? May be an apology for her behaviour the previous day! He smiles.

Juju.. please dont wait for me. Me and Didu are off to Shizo's place. He needs my help. We'll reach office from there together..

Something hit him hard in his stomach that's what he felt at least. Jeannie didn't even wish him good morning. Jus because Shizo needed her help?

xxx

7:10 AM: Shizo's place:

Shizo is ready to leave the place with a bag in his hand when he hears Jhonny speaking.

Jhonny: Kaha ja raha hai tu?😡

Shizo: Woh Jhonny.. 😕

Another set of voices question him.

"Kaha jaarahe ho Shizo?"

Shizo is shocked.

Shizo: Jeannie? Jia? Aap log yaha? kaise?" 😲

Jia: Jhonny ne bulaaya..😛

Jeannie: Jaa kaha rahe the?😉

Shizo: Kahi bhi.. but yaha se door jaunga main. Mere paas hone se aap logo ko khatra hai!

Jhonny: shut up Shizo! Tum kahi nahi jaaoge!😊

Shizo: "Guys! Aap log mujhse door nahi jaana chahte tho main hi jaraha hu. And leave me alone! 😡

Jhonny: "Come on Shizo. Tumhare peeche dusht jinn log pade hai. Aur tum chahte ho ki hum tujhe akela chod de?" 🤢

Shizo: "Guys.Yeh meri ladaai hai-Tum log mat uljho iss mein. I know you want to help..."😭

Jeannie & Jia & Jhonny: "Then let us help you..."😊

Shizo: But this is my battle guys. I don't want to risk all of your lives for me!"😭

Jia: Shizo yeh jung ithni aasaan nahi hai. Tum akele kabhi jeet nahi paaoge. 😊

Jeannie: Aur woh kehte hai na ek se behtar do. Waise bhi kitni ladaayi lad chuke hai hum log. Hum tumhare kaam aayenge.😛

Shizo: "Jeannie. Woh ladaai alag hai. Yeh alag. Yeh log bohot hi khatarnak jinn hai. Unn se ladna matlab jaan se khelna. Meri jaan chale jaaye tho thik hai par-"

At that moment Jhonny knocked Shizo down almost crushed him.

Jhonny: Bohot hogaya yar! Humari soch hi humari taaqat hai. Tu hai ki kuch bhi sochta hai. Think positive! We will win for sure! 😃 aur kya! tu mujhe manaa kar raha hai? Akele Dabangg banke ladega kya?

Shizo: (falls on the floor) Oww Jhonny utho mere upar se! Yaar ok ok.. I'll take your help. Thanks yar. oww chod mere ko!😆

Finally Jhonny stops, Shizo gets up.

Jeannie: (pleading eyes) "Shizo. Hum bas tumhare saat saat chalna chahte hai. Yahi tho dosti hai na?" 😊

Shizo: wow.. Kya dost ho tum log yar! I mean. Awesome. Thank you..⭐️

Shizo smiled while hugging Jhonny.

Jeannie: Tho aaj se we are a team. One for all. All for one.⭐️

Everybody smile.

Shizo: Sure guys. pata nahi kaise aagaya main iss mod pe. Ab meri zindgi k saat saat woh log aap k zindgi se bhi khelenge."😭

Jeannie: aisa mat kaho shizo. sab thik hojayega.⭐️

Jia: haan sab thik hoga.⭐️

Shizo: I hope so jia..😊

Jeannie: Hume himmat nahi haarni chahiye. Warna hum iss ladayi mei kabhi jeet nahi payenge! Tho ab smile karo n jaane ka plan cancel kardo.

Jhonny: Say yes shizo..

Shizo: Yes..

*Group hug*

Shizo: I'm nothing with out you my friends! *smiles* I promise. I'll never leave this place again. Thank you Jin Lord. Ithne acche dost diye hai aap ne.

Jhonny: Bohot Senti hogaya yar! Rulaayehga kya?😆

Jeannie: Jhonny!

Jhonny: Kidding

Shizo: OK guys. tho iss kushi mei. Lets have a mini size party

All: yayyy!!!😆

xxx

PA office 9am:

vicky is in his cabin. He is still lost in thoughts.Priya enters the cabin with an angry face.

Jeannie Jia kaha reh gaye? Ab jab se Shizo aaya hai sab uss k peeche pad gaye! Specially Jeannie! I cant believe.

Priya: Vicky main do ghante se coffe shop mei wait kar rahi thi. Aur tum yaha ho? Tumahara mobile off kyu hai?

Vicky: Baby? coffe shop? babby what- ooohhh

He was angry that Jeannie left him that way. So he decided he'd not eat what she made but go out with Priya. But something happened as Shizo, Jeannie's image flashed in his head and he forgot about that! oops..

Vicky: Sorry baby. Woh..

Priya: Yaad aaya kuch? kya sorry? Call kia hi kyu! Ki milke breakfast karenge? I hate you Vicky! Maine humesha socha tum mere liye perfect ho. Iss liye humare rishte ko haa kaha. Ek Tum ho ki kitne-

Vicky: Bas karo! Bas Priya. Tumhe kya lagta hai? Perfect hona aasaan hai? Kabhi socha hai? Main kaisa feel karta hu? Tang aagaya hu main tumhare tantrums se. Baat baat pe gussa, jhagdaa. Tum meri boss ki beti ho tho kya real life mei meri boss ho? Listen. Problems sirf tumhe nahi mujhe bhi hai. Aur iss sab k bare mei maine kabhi complain kiya hai? Nahi! Par tum-

Priya: Enough Vicky! Main jaa rahi hu. Aur tum kabhi mujhe apna shakal mat dikhaana..😭

Teary eyed she leaves his cabin. Reality dawns on to him as he thinks back to what he spoke.

Oh god! yeh maine kya kardiya? 😲kisi aur pe gussa iss pe nikaal di? tu tho gaya Vicky!

Vicky: Babe wait!!

Priya: Tum tho kuch bolo hi mat..😡

n she is gone..

xxx

9:10 AM: Cafeteria

Jhonny finds an upset Priya sitting in the cafeteria.

Jhonny: Hii suman ji..

Priya: Hi..

he takes a chair to sit beside her.

Priya: Jhonny tum jaao. mujhe tum se koi baat nhi karni hai..

Jhonny: arey. kyu? maine kya kia?

Priya: tum se nahi kisi se bhi baat nahi karne ka mann hai just go!

she's teary.

Jhonny: Matlab aap ka mood upset hai. koi baat nahi chaliye uthiye!

Priya: Kya? Jaao Jhonny pareshan mat karo!

Jhonny: uthiye..

Priya: par!

she gets up.

Jhonny: apna haat mujhe dijiye.

Priya: Kya kyu..

Jhonny: aur music...

Priya: yeh sab kya hai..

Jhonny: aap ka mood thik karna hai na. tho dance with me..😆

A song begins to play. *Badtameez dil * He dances for a while. In the end pulls her along twirling her around, humming some lyrics. few moments later they burst out laughing.

Priya: Jhonny tum.. stop! mujhe chakkar aaraha hai.😆

Jhonny: dekha. 😛hogai na mood ek dum thik! Ab mera maaniye. Pareshaani chodiye aur smile kijiye. Kyu ki aapki smile kuch zyada hi precious hai kuch logo k liye..

Priya: thank you Jhonny!😊 tum humesha khud khush rehte ho aur dusron ko bhi khush karte ho. I like it..

Jhonny: thanks.😳 Waise main zyadatar udaas nahi hota agar hua tho. aap mujhe cheer up karengi na?😉

Priya: of course mujhse ho saka tho. zarur karungi. Uss k liye mujhe dance karna padega kya?😆

Jhonny: Nahi nahi. Aap ko dance karne ki kya zarurat hai? Aap ka chehra dekhne se hi mera mood thik hojaata hai.."

Priya: thank you. Waise ithna kuch kisi ne mereliye nahi kiya. Aur na hi ithni pyari batein kisi ne sunaayi.😳

Jhonny: vicky ne bhi nahi?😉

she frowns n becomes upset suddenly. he diverts the topic.

Jhonny: chaliye chodiye. kuch khaalete hai. Fir kaam shuru karenge..

Priya: Ok. (smiles)

Vicky who's been observing the duo for quite a while walks off with out talking to priya.

Mera dimaag kharaab ho raha hai. restroom jakar fresh hojaata hu..

xxx

Rest room:

Jeannie is trying to cheer up Shizo who's a little tensed.

"Jeannie k hote kaiku rote? Come on shizo smile karo.."

She begins to tickle him.

"Jeannu chor mujhe pareshan mat kar ok? oh- hahaha. I'm warning you Jeannu. Hahaha stop!! YOU!"

He laughs hard collapsing onto the sofa. After catching his breath for a second he begins to tickle her all of a sudden.

"hahaha. arey yeh thik baat nahi hai Shizoo.. oh god shizo! bas karo.."

He stops and pulls her into a friendly hug. This obviously pisses Vicky and he leaves towards his cabin in a hurry.

xxx

Rahul's cabin:

Jia rushes into his cabin.

"Kyu aaye aap yaha? Aap bhi humara mazak udaayengi? ki hume angrezi bolna nahi aata..."

"Nahin.. Dost kabhi dost ka mazak udaata hai kya?"

'Dost? Hum dost tho nahi?"

"Par ban sakte hai na?"

"You please go. Me no dosti. Hum baalbrahmachari hai. So leave!"

Jia leaves with a heavy heart. Rahul's eyes find the book she left behind. 30 days to learn english..

xxx

Outside Shizo's place:

A woman clad in a thick black cloak appears floating in mid air.

"Tho yeh hai woh jagah jahaa woh Jinn rehta hai. Heheheee! Bachoo ab tera khel khatm!"

And she vanishes to god knows where...

xxx

A/N: Uff! A longgg update. Had a rough day. Had to clear my head. So sat down writing this... so, How was that? Do let me know friends.😊

Sumi, Athi, Shama, Afss... thank you soo much for supporting me n my story. Love ya all. 🤗Hope u liked this part at least a bit :)

Aww I feel bad for poor Vicky n Jia. Action begins in next part. So plz lemme know what u liked or what u did not..

thx for reading :)

xxx

Next Part___

Some more cutee moments. Danger lurks around. Ladaai begins :D

Have a nice weekend guys.. :)