A L’il ff of mine - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yaaaaaaayyy!! Another fanfic! 👏 Thanks trident...yaar tumhara naam kya hai??...nahin tho main tumhe "trident trident" hi pukarti rahoongi 😕 😆 😉...vaise woh gum main bhi chabaati hoon 😆 😆...great and interesting fanfic hon...i'm really enjoying it! 😛 😃 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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call me shani and im glad that you enjoy my ff
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow its awesome! And see that your hindi is getting better!And what a beautiful name Shani!Thanks for the awesome fan ficShani! Please continue!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwww what a sweet name yaar...shani!...has a nice ring to it! 😛 😃...and laddoo's right, your hindi IS improving hon 👏 fabulous job! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow Shani...interesting FF......can't wait to read more!😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Armaan turns around and sees Jassi laying on the ground.
He helps jassi up and takes her to a doctor. He waits outside the doctors room and just then doc comes out.
Doc: Mr Suri..
Armaan: Doctor kya hua jassi ko? eyes almost teary.( but not crying i mean hes a man . guys dont cry like dat )
Doc: Kush serious to nahin hai laiken it can get serious.
Armaan: kya mutlab?
Doc: Her blood pressure is very low and needs to stay under our care until. We still need to do another check up. Please be wait Mr. Suri.
Armaan is standing against the wall( not crying)thiking about how much he loves Jassi 😳 (awww poor fellow).The doc comes out and says
Doc: you must leave now visiting hours are over please come tomarrow morning.
Armaan goes to his car and drives away.
He reaches home and sees Vedika playing with their house keeper.
WIthout saying a word he puts her to sleep and also goes to sleep.( He didnt even eat 😭).
Jassi is in the hospital at night night . She wakes up and wonders where she is. She looks around for Armaan.
Jassi:tum kaha ho armaan.(teary)
A nurse comes to see her and tells her that she has an infection in her blood which was caused by low blood pressure( i dont know anything about diseases and dont wanna either soo im just makinng stuff up like blod pressure.)
Armaan gets Vedika ready for school and and gets himself ready and rembers houw Jassi used to tie his tie for himm and morning romance 😉
HE drops her off at her school and goes straight to the hospital.
There he ask the desk person for Jassmeet Suri.
Deskperson: Mr.Suri she is in room 101
Armaan: okay thx
Armaan is wearing a white shirt with jeans and is carrying some flowers that he bought on the way.
he enters Jassi's room and sees Jassi sleeping.
he goes near her and is on his knees beside her bed and goes closer to her and kisses her forehead. Just then Jassi wakes up and is murmming Armaan...Armaan....
Armaan: ha meh hoo jassi.
Jassi(fully awake now): Armaan tum muojhe kahan shord ki gaya thi? Meh tumare begare nahin jee..armaan hushes her by puting his finger on her lips and says I love you Jassi. and they both hug passionalty.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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What happened to poor Jassi! 😭 Please continue! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will write 2 updates in a day about the size of the last update:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: tridentgumlove

i will write 2 updates in a day about the size of the last update:)

OKIEZ!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol despo ladds 😆 what am i saying? i'm despo too! 😳 😆 but don't worrys shani, i won't ask u to write more today...its ur choice yaar. 😛 u should write when u get the time 😉 tension nahin lene ka, sirf dene ka, KYA?? 😆

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