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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is continued right after Armaan and Jassi get married and they already have Vedika. This is a lil ff and tell me after you read what you think i noe i still to put more detail in it and fix my hindi but tell me if you want me to continue?

Its a usual day at Gulmohur and Jassi is sitting at her desk in her cabin and is talking to a client on the phone. On the other hand Armaan And Raj(Raj is also back) are talking to eachother about girls 😆
Armaan: Muje lagda hai kay tumme shaadi karne chaiay.
Raj: Laikan koi ladki chaiay.
Armaan: Duniya ka sabsay bada bachelor ko ladki chaiay!
Raj: Yaah man i never ever thought that either before.
Raj: No girl likes me Yaar!
Armaan: aisa kaisa ho sakta.
Armaan: koi to hogi jo tumme pasand karti hogi.
Raj: shud Yaar. Yeh baat shord.
Just then jassi walks in Armaans cabin and says:
Jassi: Armaan you know right? that we have to go early today?
Armaan: kya lainken...

im sorry if you dont understand im not good with hindi sooo sorry but tell me if you want me to continue? & feedback

thx guys love you all
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thats interesting!its really good1Please continue! 😳 😳 😳
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Just continue! You will get better! 😳
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Awsome Effort! I agree - just keep going - hindi apne aap aa jaayegi! (It'll get better)! :)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I will make them longer later but right now im just starting and i need your guys feeedback!!!!!


Jassi: nahin Armaan... tumme pata hai kay yeh party
zoorori hai. Wo lohk tumarai dad kay friends hai.
Raj is looking at their faces as both of them argue about going to the party.
Raj: Muhje lag da hai kay muhje jaana chaia. I should get going nah guys? Wo mere secetery alone feel karti hogi nah soo....
Armaan: Yaar kya tum be tori se to help karday appne yaar ki? 😆
Raj: byyyyeee...!
Raj leaves the cabin in a hurry.
Jassi is sitting on the couch in Armaan's cabin just then her cell rings.
Its a teacher from Vedika's school she is asking for an emergency meeting with Armaan and Jassi.
Jassi gets tensed and looks towards a goofy Armaan trying to stick a spoon on his nose. 😆 .......
tell me if you want me to continue.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thats so funny and good too! Your hindi is awesome! Please continue! 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good job!!! And thanks a lot of rthe effort, but please, Raj ki shaadi zaroor karwa dena 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Jassi asks the teacher what happend and the teacher says im very sorry but i was sussposed to phone another Mr and Mrs. Suri. 😕
Jassi takes a breath of releif and puts her phone down and goes around Armaan and hugs him from the back.
Armaan: Meh vaha nahin jahoon ga.
Jassi: teek hai...mera be maan nahin kar ra hai.
Armaan turns around and and hugs jassi's legs( he is sitting and she is standing)
Jassi starts laughing and forgets to tell Armaan about the phone call earlier.
THey both walk out of the door and go downstairs to where maddy workplace.
MAddy: Armaan!!!!......Jassi!!!...tum lokh yahan..Well armaan ..jassi id like you to meet my new assistant(Ruby mom went on holidays 😆 )Celina. Armaan couldnt stop staring at her she was dressed in a red mini skirt and looked hot. Jassi noticed how Armaan was drooling all over Celina and she asks Celina if she could show her around.
Jassi: Yahan humari seceteries kaam karti. Or yahan humara powder room hai.
Celina: achaacha so mein toh Maddy ki workplace menh kaam karoo.
Jassi: Right or yahan elevator hai.
Celina picks up the news paper artilce in elevator the one about where it says Armaan Suri is back.
They enter Jassi's cabin( the pinkish one)
Jassi: this is my cabin or koi be zoororit hoi yahan ajana. 😊
Celina: Or wo kiska cabin hai? (points to Armaans)
Jassi: Wo meri husband ka Armaan ka. 👏 ( yeah tell her who he is )
Celina: Aaap lokh ki shaadi....or aap ek saath kaam kartai hai?....WoW!
Jassi smailes and replies: yes!
Just the Raj walks out of his Cabin and sees Celina!

Im sorry if you guys dont like it :(
Edited by tridentgumlove - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey, this is good! Do keep going! 😊
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Raj:Jassi.....hi
Jassi: Hi raj......yeh hey Celina....maddy ki assistant.
Raj:ohhhh.........i see.
Raj is drooling all over Celina and cant tak his eyes off her.
Raj:Ummmm...Jassi...armaan?
Jassi: Maddy ki workplace meh hogay
Celina: thank you soo much Jassi Mam apne mere li time nikaala.
Jassi: Celina ..i think you should call me Jassi..
Celina: laiken....
Jassi: Its okay nah...most of the staff calls me Jassi.
Just then Armaan comes up behind and kisses jassi on her cheeck.
In surprise Jassi almost screams. Celina is laughing like crazy and Raj is watching her from behind.
J: Armaan tum bi nah.. mainay tumme kitni bar batia kay office mein yeh saab nahin acha ladta.
Armaan: sooooo....tumara kia matlab?? 😉
Both Armaan jassi go back into Armaans cabin and get their stuff and head to their car
They ride back home and see Vedika outside with a dog(more like a puppy)
Vedika: Mama!...Papa...dheko mere new doggy! 😆
Armaan&Jassi: NEW DOGGY!!!
Armaan: yeh kiska hai?
Vedika: mere 😊
Armaan: tumme pata hai kai Mama alergic to phir?
Jassi is standing behind Armaan sneezing and screaming at Vedika to get the dirty thing out of their lawn.
(kids now a days actually parents now adays)
Vedika grabs the dog and runs inside while singing B-I-N-G-O B-I-N-G-O BINGO was his name ohhhh... 😆
Jassi yells: ARMAAAAAAAAN!!!
Jassi: tumme pata hai kai meh sick ho sakti hew.(get used to my broken hindi)
Just then Jassi faints right on the ground.....

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