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The first part is in first person view then you diverted to third person right? I kinda liked it from first person view for a change. It's really hard to execute form first person view but you did it very nicely. Coming to the story, I'm confused! Siddarth is a psychopath 😕 He loved someone who died and its definitely not Roshni Am I right 😕 I know you are gonna reveal anything now. But I think it's someone else and the girl he saw is Roshni. I'm excited to read how you develop the story. It's really interesting 😊 Will wait for the next part!
yes song part I wrote generally, coz lyrics depicted his emotions! it's difficult to write first person.. I may keep changing depending on situations.. psychopath 😆 Lets see whether ur right or wrong 😉 thanks a lot Paru... 😊
