SS His World Crashes Last Part Pg9 - Page 3

Shabz,

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Shabz,

I meant to comment on this earlier but was cut off on my posts for the day...

This is fantastic - all the emotions that N is feeling because his R is hurt - so raw and yet this is the catalyst they need to be honest with themselves finally. It is all so overwhelming but you explore it wonderfully.

And WOHOOO to N finally telling Pam and Nivi where they can stick their contract!! 👍🏼

PS. R fixing N's tie had me

@shabz50 I'm astonished by this story. It broke my heart . This was absolutely wonderful. This is how it should have been emotional and filled with love. Thanks for writting this you're a brilliant writer.

Shabz!

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Shabz!

Part 2 broke my heart.. so intense and real!

Can feel that caged feeling he must be going through, just waiting for her smile to get him out of his misery... sigh - wish she comes back to consciousness and him soon...

Please write more soon..

this is lovely!

2 Weeks later
It had been 2 weeks and ragini was still in a coma. Nachiket had not left her bedside he was there night and day he had got doctors from USA to assess Ragini and all they had said was it will take time but how much time. The kids had found out about the contract nivi had told them they were angry but nachiket had sat them down and explained everything to them and how he had realised how much he loved ragini and now if ragini gave him the chance we would be her husband for real everyone undrstood execpt for aarav but nachiket did not have the energy or time to make him understand at the moment. His first priorty was Ragini.

Hospital
Nachiket was sat talking to Ragini telling her that nishi had decided to give jignesh another chance and she was just waiting for her mum to wake up so she can go to her in-laws. Sunny tai came in "Saab pam wants to talk to u outside" nachiket got up and went outside pam was stood there with nivi the kids were there aswell. "Yes pam what is it" "neil i have got u something to sign" "what is it" "divorce papers" he looked at her he was seething with angry the kids stood with their mouths open. "What the hell are u playing at pam""neil i am doing this for u sign these and we can go back to USA" "pam is right neil" "shut up both of u i am not signing this because i love ragini and want stay with her and our family" "she does not love u neil u know that pam said i know my ragini she loves me like i love her i am just waiting for her wake up. "Neil" i don't want to hear anymore just go.

6PM
Nachiket was sat outside raginis room with the kids pam and nivi had gone aswell as aarav. "Dad mom will wake up its been 2 weeks nishi said" he put his arm around her and hugged her "nothing will happen to her i will not let anything happen to her" suddenly the nurse came running out shouting for the doctor nachiket got up whats wrong we need the doctor i am a doctor nachiket said the doctor came and told all of them to wait outside. Nachiket was pacing so was ranbir he had changed these two weeks he was less bitter towards ragini and more understanding. The doctor came out Mr Khanna ur wife has woken up nachiket was soo happy to hear those words can i see her please. Mr khanna ur wife is very weak she needs rest and it is going to be a diffcult road to recovery don't worry doctor my ragini will get better very soon. I need u sign some papers please mr khanna ok kids u go in to see ur mom.

Raginis room
The nurse had helped her sit up. U can only stay 5 mins the nurse said. The kids were so happy to see their mum even ranbir she looked around he was not there the one person she wanted to see. Mom dad went to sign some papers he will be back in a min suhani said ragini just smiled. The nurse came back and told them to leave now ragini needed her rest they all said bye and went out.

Corridor
Nachiket came back and suhani and nishi hugged him dad mom is ok they were so happy. U all go home now came back in the morning dad u i am staying here go u lot "dad i will stay with u"ranbir said. Since the accident the kids had taken to taking in turns staying at the hospital with their dad. Nachiket did not know this. "Ok ranbir i will go see ur mum.

Raginis Room
Nachiket walked in the nurse stopped him she is not allowed anymore vistors please i am her husband the nurse let nachiket in. He walked in and stopped ragini was sitting up and she looked at him she had tears in her eyes he went and sat on the bed held her hand and just looked at her. "Nachiket" shush ragini u do not have to say anything just get better and we will talk when u are home he kissed her forehead and got up to leave she pulled him back i am only outside i am not leaving she smiled just rest ragini.

Corrider
Dad naani left some food have some its ok ranbir u have it i will have it later. Ranbir stared at his dad whats wrong ranbir u are staring at me nothing dad its the first in 2 weeks u are smiling thats because my ragini is awake and going to be ok. When can mum come home ranbir asked.

Oh gosh...I'm so glad our Ragini is ok! And Nachiket refusing to budge from her side, even giving it back to Pam and Nivedita in order to stay with her was so perfect. ❤️

But the absolute best part was Ranbir calling Ragini "mum." 😊 Finally they're on better terms! Thanks for the quick and lovely update Shabz!

Wow... You have written his love for her beautifully👏

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Wow... You have written his love for her beautifully👏

I loved that he loves her so much that he refused to leave her😊

Pam and Nivi😡 They will never change😡 I am glad that he answered them back rudely... Must be a tight slap on their faces

Ranbir finally realizing that Ragini is his mum was sweet😳

And I loved how Ragini whispered Nachiket and he silenced her😳

I wish we see such a caring Nachiket in the show...

Loved it😳