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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

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Shabz, that's so wonderful. I loved reading it.

If only, something this nice happened in the Show



Thank u Rachana the next part is something i really want to see in the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5A


Pam,Aarav and nivi left he turned around to ragini she was still standing there he looked at her the kids were about to go to their room when nachiket said everyone stay where u are. Everyone stayed kids naani sunny tai, dimpy,karan and RK they were all looking at nachiket. He walked up to ragini and and went down on one knee "Nachiket what u doing" he looked up at her "just listen to me ragini please i am sorry for all the hurt i have caused u 18 years ago i walked away when i should have stayed and cleared our MU and then 15 years later when i had the chance to be with u again i made the same mistake again i lied and i lost u again and because of me u lost Aarav and when u needed me the most i turned and ran away again i let my ego get the better of me again and when i came back for nishi all i did was hurt u and blame u for nishi's plight when i was to blame as much i was never there for her or aarav and then worse of all i tried to take aarav away from u and i disrespected u in front of everyone and for that and all my other mistakes i am so sorry and in front of everyone i ask for ur forgiveness and what ever punishment u want to give me i will accept but i can't live without u ragini i love u so much" ragini was crying so was everyone else. "Nachiket please get up i forgive u i have made mistakes too i should have trusted u more and trusted ur love for me please get up". Nachiket got up and stood in front of ragini and wiped her tears "this is a new start for us ragini no more tears i promise". "Mom u have forgiven dad but what about his punishment Aagham asked. "Ur dad has suffered enough this last month aagham ragini said looking at him. "Not fair mom if u will not give punishment then us kids will" ok nachiket said i hurt ur mom i will accept any punishment u kids give "no nachiket this is not right" "mom this is between us and dad now suhani said. We will let u know ur punishment soon dad aagham smirked at his dad.

Bedroom
Ragini was sat on the bed nachiket came and sat down next to and held her hand "nachiket u didn't have to do that" "yes i did ragini i disrespected u in front of everyone so i needed to ask for forgiveness in front of everyone saying this he kissed her on her forehead. "Anyway i told u i loved u and i didn't get a answer from u he looked her she looked away "ragini" "u know my answer nachiket" "do i" yes u know i love u "if u loved me u would not have done what u did" " what did i do" ragini exclaimed "i asked u for punishment and u didn't give me one now the kids are planning something" ragini laughed "u think this is funny ragini here ur husband has got a noose around his neck and u laughing" "well its ur own fault u accepted it" he turned away acting like he was angry. "Nachiket look i am sorry i laughed the kids will not do anything they are just messing with u" he turned around and looked at her and said how sorry are u he moved closer and closer he had his hand on her neck he was just about to kiss her when there was a knock on the door. Nachiket groaned and ragini just looked away he got up and opened the door and aagham was stood outside dad we ready to give ur punishment he smirked. Come on ragini are u coming nachiket said to watch ur husband get his punishment ragini just laughed.

Living Room
Nachiket sat down ragini next to him the kids were standing up naani ans sunny tai were at the kitchen table. "Are u ready dad" aagham asked "just get on with it" "aagham enough masti leave it now" ragini said "we are being serious mum" " ragini let them do what they want" "right dad we have three punishments for u" "three how is that fair" "well u have four kids here so we think three is right ur first punishment is that u have to buy mum a suprise gift every day for a week" nachiket just looked at ragini and smiled "ur next punishment is u have to have eat karela for one week every day" "what!!" Nachiket looked at the kids and "ur last punishment is that u have to take mom away somewhere nice for little break do u accept these punishments dad" aagham said smiling. "Yes i do"


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5B

Nachiket said "is that all are u finished" "yes dad we are finshed dad nishi said "right what is for dinner" nachiket said karela for u aagham said nachiket threw a pillow at him then nishi came i am going mum ragini got up and hugged her "stay for dinner nishi" "no mum i have to" " nishi i will drop u off" nachiket said and i will get dinner on the way back ok.

Bedroom
Finally they were alone ragini was sat at the dressing table brushing her hair and nachiket came out the bathroom he stood looking at her she saw him looking at her she started blushing she got up walked towards the bed when he grabbed her wrist and turned her towards him. He looked at her and went closer and kissed on her cheek and on her neck. "Nachiket ragini whispered he looked at her "whats wrong nothing its just what ragini "nachiket i still have stiches in" she looked down she had let him down again he lifted her head up "i know ragini but that does not i can't kiss u or hold u right" "i am sorry" "bas ragini no more tears and no more sorrys ok" "and anyway u will have plenty of time to make it up to me once them stiches are out" he winked at her she just stared at him u have not changed at all nachiket shall we sleep now ragini.

Morning
They were all having breakfast when the doorbell rang sunny tai opened it. Aarav and pam stood there nachiket got up and went to them "we have just come u see u we are leaving tonight" pam why u doing this if u want to go in can't stop u but taking aarav nachiket said "papa i want to go" ragini got up and went to aarav and said u want to go we will not stop u we just want u to be happy aarav "papa wants my happiness not u" "aarav bas u want to go go i will not stop u but remember one thing if u don't consider ragini ur mum then i have no relation with u either" pam and aarav left.

Bedroom
Ragini was sat on the bed and she was sobbing she lost aarav. Aagham and ranbir walked in and kneeled down infront of her "mom please don't cry"aagham said she looked up and saw her sons in front of her "look mom me and ranbir are here and aarav will come back and anyway i am ur fav child anyway aggham said "shut up aagham ranbir said "mom we are here u are not alone i am here aswell suhani came in and me nishi was on the phone. They all hugged their mum nachiket was watching this from the doorway. Yeah all your love for ur mom only none for ur dad. Suhani ran up and hugged her dad he smiled ragini looked up and smiled at him.

1Week later
They had all slowly getting used to aarav not been there it had especially tough for ragini. Nachiket had carried out his punishments he only had one to go. Ragini was a lot better her stiches were out. Nachiket was busy planning their secret getaway. Ragini came into the bedroom "nachiket have u rung pam" "no i have not why" will u ring and see how is aarav""ragini" "please nachiket i just want to hear his voice please" he rung pam and put it on speakerphone. "How are u pam and how is aarav" "i am fine thx neil i will get aarav for u" "papa" ragini sat down next to nachiket and held his hand "how are u beta" "i am fine dad how is everyone else" "they are all ok missing u" "i miss u too dad i have to go speak to u soon bye" she whispered bye aswell. Nachiket just hugged her he knew the pain she was going thru.

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Nachiket and Ragini on their way to their secret getaway just the two of them.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Aww Shabz, this is so sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Well read all 5 parts in one go and its an awesome ss. Loved the way ranbir said mom and finally neira planning a secret getaway will be romantic. Hopefully. Just hoping aarav to be back though his presence sometimes is ewwwe. Well the bond between the kids except aarav is nice and sweet. Heres a big 😉 😛 😳 for neira being together. Love them and love you for reuniting neira and their kids.
Just want to read more and more and more. Keep updating.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: tikit

Well read all 5 parts in one go and its an awesome ss. Loved the way ranbir said mom and finally neira planning a secret getaway will be romantic. Hopefully. Just hoping aarav to be back though his presence sometimes is ewwwe. Well the bond between the kids except aarav is nice and sweet. Heres a big 😉 😛 😳 for neira being together. Love them and love you for reuniting neira and their kids.

Just want to read more and more and more. Keep updating.


Just want to see Neira together thats all
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Aww this is so cute! Fantastic job!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Shabz, this is going great! I am so looking forward to the next chapters! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Both the parts were wonderful😃
Finally Nachiket accepted all his faults😳

Aagham is one super cute child of NeiRa😉

The punishments were cute😳

Now I am waiting for their time away together😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: neiralove

Aww this is so cute! Fantastic job!


Thank u

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