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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

I can't live without her he said god it felt good to say that out a loud. Nivi came and grabbed him u said it was a contract neil u married for the kids yes i did but i have only loved ragini and these three months have reminded me of that love and the fact that she is my life. Pam stood there shocked her plan had backfired. I have to go see her and nachiket left.

Operation thearte
Nachiket sat outside it had been 3 hours since this operation was going on to nachiket it felt longer ever since that call his world had stopped he could not think or breathe propely his heart was aching all he wanted was to see raginis smile like she did this morning and hear her laugther. The kids where there and naani and sunny tai but he still felt alone the one person who could take away his lonliness away was in that operation room. 5 hours it had been when finally the doctor came out and nachiket stood up and the doctor spoke. "Mr Khanna ur wife had a lot of internal injures we have repaired her liver and spleen but she has lost a lot of blood and is in a coma at the minute she is critical we are shifting her to icu." nachiket looked at the doctor and then stumbled back aagham tried to get hold of his dad but nachiket pushed him back he had to get out of the hospital he could not breathe his chest was tighting he had to get out. He walked out onto the road and started walking all he could hear was "she is critical" the only thing going around his head. He wandered around aimless for hours he finally came back to the hospital it was 9am now he was hoping this was a nightmare and he would wake up really soon.

ICU
He went to the icu the kids were there and naani aagham ran to his "dad u ok" he did not answer suhani and nishi were crying he looked at aagham and just said "Ragini" no change dad. He stared at him but no words came out. I want to see her i will ask the nurse aagham went. Nachiket was allowed in. He walked in and saw Ragini lieing there hooked to a ventialtor and other machines he could not move his legs were frozen to the spot he dragged himself closer and sat down next to her. Her hand looked so frail and he took her hand her skin was so smooth and lovely he kissed her hand and stroked it no response from her. "Ragini i love u please wake up i can't live without u I let u go 18 years ago and i have regretted ever since please wake up i need u please" just then the nurse came in and told nachiket to go out she needed to change raginis tube. He went out and straight to the temple they have in the hospital. He sat there on his kness and hand folded he didn't really believe but for ragini he would do anything and she believed he begged god to give him his ragini back please he would do anything to have this ragini back. He had been in the temple a couple of hours when ranbir came to get him. "Dad the doctors want to speak to u" he got up and went ranbir had never see his dad so broken and crying in his life. "Mr khanna i am afraid there is not much progess from last night but it has only been a few hours since the operation we need u to keep talking to her and we will see if that helps her come out of the coma" nachiket just nodded he was like a zombie at the moment nothing made sense he was just going thru the motions of life all he wanted was ragini to wake up. He told the kids to go in and see their mom they went in he sat outside he had no energy he could not see his ragini like that for the first time in his life he was scared to death of losing the most precious thing in his life His Ragini the person who taught him how to live and who had given him the most happiness had given him his family. Ranbir came sat next to his dad and gave him some coffee "dad have some please u have not eaten anything since yesterday please dad" he took a sip but it stuck in his thorat he gave the coffee back to ranbir "dad" ranbir what am i going to do if i lose ragini? For the first time ever ranbir saw how much his dad loved ragini patel and why did it hurt ranbir to see her like this he just sat with his dad thinking.

2 weeks later
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Shabz!

Firstly - thank you so much for writing this on my prompt!! :D

And secondly,
Thanks again for this wonderful piece.. my breath was stuck with him till I scrolled down and read the entire bit about him reaching the hospital and confronting the doctor.. what a big shock and reality check for Nachiket!

Bless you, this is lovely! Please write soon :)


Thank u Sukhi and u are welcome hope i can do ur prompt justice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shabo!

This is very nice! She means the world to him and good he told Pam that he loves her. He is going crazy without her. Hope Ragini will be fine soon!

Good going! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou

Shabo!


This is very nice! She means the world to him and good he told Pam that he loves her. He is going crazy without her. Hope Ragini will be fine soon!

Good going! :)


Thank u and finally he admitted to pam he loves her and to nivi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabz50


Thank u Sukhi and u are welcome hope i can do ur prompt justice


YOU ARE AWESOME!!!

Part two is up too!!!

*greedily goes to read*

😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Lovely emotional update

So sad Poor Ragini
He loves her very muchPoor Nachiket

What is going to happen to her???

Please update soon... I just can't wait to know what is going to happen next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the quick update Shabz! 😊 My poor babies...I hope Ragini is ok and Nachiket is able to confess his love for her 😳

2 weeks in the ICU
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Shabz,
This is nice indeed. The story has picked up such an alluring pace. Now waiting for the 3rd part. 🤗Liked how you dealt with N's feelings for R
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neiralove

Thanks for the quick update Shabz! 😊 My poor babies...I hope Ragini is ok and Nachiket is able to confess his love for her 😳

2 weeks in the ICU


Thank u its bad for a bit but will get better
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: poetic

Shabz,

This is nice indeed. The story has picked up such an alluring pace. Now waiting for the 3rd part. 🤗Liked how you dealt with N's feelings for R


Thank u 3rd part working on it

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