SS His World Crashes Last Part Pg9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a SS i am attempting on Sukhis prompt hope u like it and any advice is welcome


Part 1

It had been three months since this contract marriage and things had changed between them they were nicer to each other she had started been respected by him and she was more caring towards him. The family were getting there some squabbles but they were getting closer and nishi was working on her marriage. Nachiket was starting to falling in love again and ragini was starting to see that old nachiket that she had loved and still did. Both of them did not know how to tell the other one how they were feeling but day by day that invisible line they had drawn was disappearing altogether.

Morning
Ragini was in the bathroom he had just got up and was sitting on the bed waiting for her to finish when the door opened and out she came in that beautiful light pink saree he got up and walked past her she looked at him a bit sad that he did not notice her. She went and stood in front of the mirror and he turned and looked at her god she was looking sexy he quickly went in the bathroom otherwise he would not be able to stop himself. She finished and went to get breakfast ready. It been a hour and nachiket still had not cum to have breakfast so she went to look.

Bedroom
Nachiket was on the phone to one of the doctors and trying to do this tie and look at some notes all at the same time and failing. Ragini walked in and saw this and laughed he looked up and she just walked up to him and started doing his tie god she smelled good and looked even more sexy then before oh god he still had that effect on her his smell driving her crazy she quickly did his tie he had finished on the phone by now. I will be late nachiket make sure the kids have their dinner on time and make sure u have breakfast before u leave and off she went.

11pm
She was still not home she was going to be late but not this late he was getting worried. Nachiket cum and have dinner pam shouted its ok pam i will have it later he was waiting for ragini to cum. He rung her no answer it went straight to voicemail he cut the call. He was pacing the room his stomach was churing something was wrong ragini would have rung someone if not him to tell she would be this late. He grabbed his car keys enough was enough he would go to hospital and get her. Just then suhani came in dad a phone call for u.

Living room
Hello is that Mr nachiket khanna yes speaking this is city hospital ur wife has been admitted she has had a accident he dropped the phone and stumbled back everything went blurred his mouth went dry and he could not speak he could see everyone speaking but he could not hear them he stood there for what like hours but in fact only 2 mins he then ran out of the house to the car. He drove as fast as he could all he could think of was his ragini needed him by now he was crying he felt like he could not breathe propely this drive was taking ages he drove faster.

Hospital
He ran into the hospital he just dumped his car and straight to hospital reception "where is my ragini" he asked the receptionist just looked at him he shouted now "where is my ragini" he then realised what he was saying he then said ragini khanna where is she. Operation thearte level 3. He ran up all the stairs up to level 3 he finally got to the thearte and grabbed a nurse and said i need to see the doctor who is opearting on my wife ragini khanna please. A lady doctor came out and went Mr khanna "My wife ragini how is she" your wife has a lot of internal injures we are operating to repair her liver and spleen. He slumped back in the chair and he sat with his head in his hands the tears would not stop he could not lose her he could not live without her he needed her. There was a hand on his shoulder he looked up and it was pam she looked shocked to see nachiket crying she grabbed him and took him into another room. What the hell is wrong nachiket why do u care so much about her this is just a contract marriage u taking the acting a bit far are u not just then nivi came in. She is my wife pam he said no she is not this is just a contract neil not for me he shouted I LOVE HER she is my life
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shabz, this is going on nice. really nice. Hopefully, there will be an update to this part.
Want to know how things will progress now that N has realised how much he loves his R
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Shabz, this is going on nice. really nice. Hopefully, there will be an update to this part.

Want to know how things will progress now that N has realised how much he loves his R


A couple more parts they both need to confess their feelings
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok so now I actually want this to happen in the show as well.
Superb idea it is. Some one please ask NB to do it this way.
Wow Wow
Can't wait for the next part.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was emotional...
I loved it...

I loved the way she did his tie😳 That was SWEET😳

And I loved the way Nachiket was worried and went around shouting where is my ragini
So much love for her😳

This was my favourite part

What the hell is wrong nachiket why do u care so much about her this is just a contract marriage u taking the acting a bit far are u not just then nivi came in. She is my wife pam he said no she is not this is just a contract neil not for me he shouted I LOVE HER she is my life
This was so emotional

Will Ragini be fine again???

Please update soon... Waiting to know what happens next😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@shabz50 Beautifull start! Well written the emotions are so correctly expressed. I literally have no words to say.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Santosh1999

@shabz50 Beautifull start! Well written the emotions are so correctly expressed. I literally have no words to say.


Thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! ❤️
But this was too too short--please update soon! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shabz!
Firstly - thank you so much for writing this on my prompt!! :D

And secondly,
Thanks again for this wonderful piece.. my breath was stuck with him till I scrolled down and read the entire bit about him reaching the hospital and confronting the doctor.. what a big shock and reality check for Nachiket!

Bless you, this is lovely! Please write soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neiralove

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! ❤️

But this was too too short--please update soon! 😊


Thank u. U are tooo kind its not as good as i imagined it

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