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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ZainabSidd

HAMMU😳

WAAH WAAH 🤗

BACCHE KEBAB MAI HADDI😲 UNKO SIDE MAI KAERO JALDI SE
😆😆😆

MUJHE SIRF NEIRA CHAHIYE😉

LOVE YA 😳 HUGSS


hahahaha :D Bachhon ko side pe kardun? thk hai aap kehti hain tou :D
Love you 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Operation: Win Ragini Back is in full effect, I love it!
Looking forward to what else Nachiket has in mind...it would be great to see on the show but since that's unlikely thank you for this :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Ho ho We are getting to see the best of the best IF FF writers!

Zainab, Sanam & now Hamna!

Super work! Looking forward to the next update😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is going to be so much fun! :D
Waiting for the next part.. :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Operation: Win Ragini Back is in full effect, I love it!

Looking forward to what else Nachiket has in mind...it would be great to see on the show but since that's unlikely thank you for this :)


Yeah and let's see if this operation is a success or not
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: loveleen3

This is going to be so much fun! :D
Waiting for the next part.. :D


Hopefully I'll update the next part today
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
So glad you decided to continue😊
This was a lovely update😳👏

Nachiket: Kya ghoor kya rahi ho? Khud nahi khana kya? Har roz sabko serve karti ho khud sabse akkhir mein khati ho, aaj tum betho hum tumhe serve karte hain.
Love Nachiket's concern here😳

But her heart was giving her the answers she was looking for, her heart told her that it is because You Love Him you are not able to forget about it, it is because You Love Him that you couldn't hate him all these years and it is because YOU NEVER STOPPED LOVING HIM, her heart skipped a beat and the reality struck her.
So true... She can never stop loving him❤️

Loved reading this update😳 Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Hamna!

You are new here? If so welcome to the forum!

What an entry you made, a very nice start!

It is indeed high time for Nachiket to fight for his love and bring Ragini back in his life.

Stay active and looking forward to read more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Hello guys, back with the 3rd chapter of my SS. I hope you guys like it the way you

guys liked my previous update, Fingers Crossed...

please ignore the mistakes as I am new to all this writing, and I am really sorry if I

am not able to reply to your comments as I am a Newbie and there is a limit for us

to post, I hope you guys understand

Chapter 3: A new day!

everyone almost finished their breakfast and were about to leave the dining table

when Nachiket ordered everyone to sit, everyone sat down with confused faces

specially Ragini(Now what is he going to do? *she thought*)

Nachiket looked at everyone and asked

Nachiket: Han tou bhui kya plan hai aaj ka? Ya har Sunday ki tarhan ye bhi boring

guzarna hai?

Everyone was surprised as they never saw Nachiket in such a good mood, he

always tried his level best to behave as normally as he could but the kids

somehow always noticed, all this time kids knew what their parents were doing

they always sensed the awkwardness between them but today it was different,

the kids knew that their parents have just reunited for their sake but today they

felt something strange yet amazing, their father was happy, he was genuinely

happy and it was written all over his face...

Aagham: Dad plan ka tou pata nahi par aaj apko kya hogya hai? Aap itne cool,

kabse?

Nachiket: Han tou beta tere dad kab cool nahi thy? Han farq sirf itna hai k apna ye

cool andaaz mai zyada nahi dikhata..

Suhani: Wow dad, Kya hua hai aapko? Kahin mom ka asar tou nahi? *She asked in

a very naughty tone*

Ragini who was smiling watching her kids happy suddenly felt a shiver in her body,

she looked at Nachiket and turned her face away from his gaze to hide her cheeks

which turned crimson red as soon as she heard Suhani took her name, Nachiket

noticed it and laughed looking at Suhani and answered

Nachiket: Han keh sakte ho k ye asar tumhari mom ka he hai *said looking at

Ragini*

Ragini looked at him with surprise because whenever kids tried to joke about

them Nachiket always ordered them to be quiet, but today he answered them...

What is this man up to? *she thought to herself*

Nachiket: Acha choro suno na mai kya keh raha tha, han k kya karna hai aaj? Kahin

chalen? Movie, lunch ya phir shopping?

The kids motioned each other to say no to this plan, as they have some other

plans, they wanted their parents to go alone with each other :P :P

Ranbir: Nahi dad sorry mai kahin nahi jane wala mujhe kuch kaam hai aur wese

bhi aap logon k sath jata hn tou bore hojata hn, I hope you understand...

Agham: Han dad wese Ranbir sahi keh rha hai k aap dono k sath kahin jana matlab

bore hojana.

Aarav: Han papa aap log har cheez pe mana kardete ho k ye na kro wo na kro, is

liye mai bhi nahi jane wala aap logon k sath.

Suhani: Han dad I agree, mai bhi nahi jaongi aap logon k sath...

*Ragini silently observed everyone*

Nachiket: Arey ye kya baat hui, matlab tum log hamare sath kahin nah jaoge? Itne

bhhi bore nahi hain yar hum, kyun Ragini sahi keh raha hn na mai?

Ragini: Han sahi keh rahe ho, hum itne bhi bore nahi hain.

Ranbir: Han tou agar aap logon ko lagta hai k aap log bore nahi hai tou aap dono

jayen na akele bahar, aur wese bhi kitne din hogaye aap log akele nahi gaye kahin

har baar humey sath lejate ho aap log bore karne, is baar aap dono apas mein aik

dosre ko bore Karen, humme nahi... *Ranbir winked at Aarav and Suhani*

Ragini: Areyy aese kese tum log...

*Aagham cuts her In the middle*

Aagham: Han mom dad aap log jayen na bahar thore fresh bhi hojayenge,

Nachiket: Han wese ye idea bhi bura nahi hai, Kyun Ragini chalna hai? *He winked

at her*

Ragini: Han Nachiket lekin bachhon k baghair kese?

All the kids shouted arey Mom hum thk rahenge, humey jab koi problem nahi hai

tou aap kyun itni fikar kar rhe ho, jaao maa Ranbir said smiling, Ragini looked at

everyone and then look towards Nachiket whose eyes were asking her to say yes

and she just couldn't say no to his beautiful eyes, she uttered OK in the most

gentle way ever. And smiled, this made Nachiket very happy; he thought to

himself that finally a day all alone with her, this is all I could ever ask for.

This time kids ordered their parents to go and get ready as they have to leave for

their day out...

Nachiket and Ragini got up and went inside their room. Both of them started to

select what to wear for the special day, both of them were very happy and it was

clearly visible on their faces, Ragini selected a light blue saree which was covered

with small embroidered flowers in a very light pink color, while Nachiket selected

a sparkling white shirt with blue jeans.

Ragini asked him if she could change in the room as she had to wear a saree,

while he could use the bathroom. He smiled and said anything you want' with a

cute face, and Ragini without reacting turned away and asked him to go inside the

bathroom, he obeyed her and went inside. Ragini was standing motionless and

was smiling like a teenage girl, *she asked herself that what is wrong with me why

am I behaving like a new bride who smiles on everything her husband does?*

but then she kept her thoughts aside and started to get ready.

She was almost ready and Nachiket knocked at the bathroom door to ask if he

could enter the room and she replied in a yes so he came in.

The scene which he saw in front of his eyes was so gorgeous that he couldn't take

his eyes off.

Ragini noticed him looking at her with a smile on his handsome face, she got

confused and the bangles which she was holding in her hands fell down, and

Nachiket started helping her in picking up the bangles, they both stood up and

Nachiket took the bangles from Ragini's hand and held her hand firmly and

started sliding the bangles into her wrist, Nachiket came closer and now they

were standing as in Ragini's head was almost touching Nachiket's rock like chest,

she could hear his uneven heartbeats which made her unable to stand, she

wanted to through her arms around him but she didn't had a reason to do so. Her

brain still believed that they came together once again just because of their

children but her heart was telling another story...

Nachiket looked into her eyes which were continuously gazing him without even

realizing, he cleared his throat and Ragini came back to her senses and looked

away, Nachiket still holding her hand asked her if they should leave?

She nodded in yes!

They came out of their room and all the kids were standing in front of them just

to see how they look.

Suhani: waah mom aaj tou aap bohat ache lag rahe ho.

Aagham: han tou meri mom hai achhi nahi lagegi kya?

Aarav: kya hogya bhui ye meri mom hai.

*Ranbir coming forward and putting her arm around Ragini's neck & said*

Ranbir: Oh hello, ye meri mom hai tum logon ki nahi, Kyun mom?

*Ragini putting her hand on his face with a broad smile*

Nachiket: Arey bhui sab mom k bachhe ho tou mera kaun hai? Abhi Nishi hoti na

yahan tou meri side leti, tum log ki tarhan nahi, *Nachiket said making a childish

*Ragini chuckled at his childish behavior*

Aarav, Aagham and Suhani came running towards Nachiket and wrapped their

arms around him, Nachiket kissed their foreheads and winked at Ragini showing

her the love he just got and said,

Nachiket: Han Ragini ab bolo

Ranbir: tou kya hua mai sabse bara hun sab pe bhari hn, haina maa?

Ragini: Han sahi keh rahe ho

Aagham, Aarav and Suhani slowly let go off Nachiket and he looked at them with

a confused face,

Suhani: Dad hum tou sirf aapko mana rahe thy, hum hain tou mom k bachhe hi

All of them walked towards Ragini and hugged her. Ragini and all of them laughed

looking at Nachiket's face.

He just tried to walk away and said

Nachiket: Ragini mai neeche jaraha hn, tum ajana.

Ragini held his hand as soon as he strated walking, after holding his hand she

realized what she just did but she couldn't back out now so she politely said

Ragini: Mazaq kar rahe hain Nachiket serious kyun horahe ho?

Nachiket rushed towards her and stood right in front of her, she got nervous but

didn't move back.

Nachiket: Tum kehti ho tou maan leta hn *Looking straight into her eyes*

she just looked at him surprised, without responding.

All the kids smiled at each other and said don't you guys have to go?

Ragini: han han, Nachiket chalo. *and moved towards the door motioning him to

follow her.

Nachiket looked at his kids, smiled and said bye to all of them.

as soon as they left all of them laughed as they were able to send their parents to

spend some time alone...

*In the car*

Nachiket looked at Ragini who was looking outside the window, she looks

beautiful *he thought to himself* as her hair flew from the wind and fell on her

face, she slowly tucked them behind her ear...

While Ragini on the other hand was thinking about all the things happened since

this morning, she wasn't able to decide whether to go with her heart or with her

stupid brain, she wanted to hold his hand in hers, she wanted to look at him with

all the rights, she wanted to be in his arms, but her brain was misguiding her with

all the things he said to her. She knew she won't be able to live her whole life

being with him but live like strangers.

She understood that he's taking few steps towards her and she should also help

him with their relation, but she was not sure how?

Nachiket: Kya soch rahi ho Ragini? Tum khush nahi ho kya aese mere sath akele

ane mein?

Ragini: Nahi aesi baat nahi hai, bas bachon k baghair itne dino baad nikle hain tou

shayad is liye.

Nachiket: Ragini bachhon ne khud he bheja hai na humme tum kyun tension leti

Ragini: Han shayad tum theek keh rahe ho, humme bachhon se hat k bhi kuch

sochna chahye.

Nachiket: Han Ragini, humne jab bhi kuch kiya hai bachon k liye kiya hai wo alag

bat hai k pehle wo mante nahi thy, par ab cheezen badal gayi hain sab thk hai ab

humme apne bare mein sochna chahye, hamare bare mein sochna chahye...

*Ragini's eyes glistened after hearing what he said but she changed the topic*

Ragini: hum ja kahan rahe hain?

Nachiket: Hmph hum wahin jayenge jahan hum jana chahte hain Ragini, ab hum

halat k raste par nahi chalenge warna uska bas chale tou phir aesi jaga pohancha

de jahan se wapsi k raaste mein srf andhera hota aur wapis ate ate cheezen bht

bigar gayi hoti hain, ab hum sirf apne raste par chalenge aik dosre k SAATH...

Ragini: Matlab? Kehna kya chahte ho?

Nachiket: mai jo kehna chahta hn bht jald samjha donga tumhe, sabar rakhho.

*he said smiling at her*

Ragini: Thk hai, par mai nai poocha tha hum ja kahan rahe hain Nachiket uspe

tumne itna bara lecture dediya.

*while Ragini was talking Nachiket stopped the car and pointed at a hotel*

Ragini looked at the hotel and she remembered the hotel, it was the same hotel

in which they used to come on their dates before their marriage.

Nachiket: Yaad hai ye hotel? Pehle kitna chota sa hota than na jab hum yahan ate

thy shadi se pehle?

Ragini without thinking what she was saying, said

Ragini: han yaad hai sab yaad hai, kuch nahi bholi...

Nachiket smiled broadly because he knew he'll soon win her heart AGAIN,

Nachiket acha ab chalen ya yahin bethna hai?

Ragini: Han chalo, *taking off her seatbelt.*

Nachiket rushed towards the other door, held it open for her, she smiled and

they both went inside the hotel...

to be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: metoyou

Hamna!


You are new here? If so welcome to the forum!

What an entry you made, a very nice start!

It is indeed high time for Nachiket to fight for his love and bring Ragini back in his life.

Stay active and looking forward to read more :)


HI. ya I am new, well not exactly new as I was a silent reader but all the writers in this forum inspired me to write, so this is just a try..
I am glad you like it, and thank you 😃

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