SS: DO YOU LOVE ME (new update on page 8) - Page 3

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi

Very well written Hamna...keep it up... n Thank u for writing... now I'm waiting for ur next story...

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

This was awesome! Once Nachiket himself decides to win Ragini back, no one can stop him. Not even Ragini..!

Just loved it! Please write more ;)

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Hamna!

So happy you have started writing :D This was truly enjoyable... but I really request you to not keep this as a OS but extend this and write it as a full story.. please write more..

Their memory and his recollection is so sweet... beautiful! <3 :)

Originally posted by: poetic

This is nice, Hamna.

Some mature and serious thinking by Nachiket ... 😊 Looking forward to where this story takes us to ...

Please do continue

Hi guys, as some of you requested me to continue my OS Do You Love Me so I've decided to write what happens next and how Nachiket wins Ragini back, so here I am with a SS about the further happenings. I'll divide this SS into chapters, here is the second chapter of Do You Love Me hope you like it...

CHAPTER : 2
Winning Her Back
It was early morning when Nachiket woke up next to his lady love who was sleeping with a lot of peace as in all of her worries were vanished, or it was him looking at her like this for the first time in almost a month , she looked like an angel came down from Heaven just for him, her hair tickling her face making her uncomfortable (Oh my my she looks like a Goddess *Nachiket said to himself* and a small smile came up on his face) he wanted to kiss her but it was not the right time he wanted her to allow him for doing whatever he wants to and for that he have to wait J
so he gently tucked the stray strand of hair behind her ear in which he touched her cheek unintentionally with his fingers which made her smile in her sleep, he realizes that how even today his touch effected Ragini, which made him happy. J
He finally got up from the bed and went into the bathroom he looked at himself in the mirror and he chuckled looking at his face glowing with hope to win her back, he came out of the bathroom after taking a shower, meanwhile Ragini woke up and was sitting on the bed tying her hair when she saw Nachiket coming out of the bathroom , he came out with only his trousers on, a towel wrapped around his neck and small droplets of water rolling down his bare chest, making him look divine (Oh God why does he have to look this hot every time *Ragini thought to herself* with a straight face not wanting to express what she was feeling)

Nachiket noticed her looking at him, he smiled and came closer to her until they could feel their rough breathes and fast heartbeats and said Good Morning to Ragini *with a very pleasant husky voice* and walked up to the mirror without looking at her.

She replied in a very surprised manner as she didn't understand what she just saw (what just happened? Was it real or am I dreaming? *she thought to herself* with a confused look on her face)
Nachiket looked at her from the mirror and said,

Nachiket : What happened Mrs. Khanna? *with a playful smile on his face*

Ragini: *Coming back to her senses listening to his voice* Han? Han, wo nahi kuch nahi, mai fresh hoke ati hn...

Nachiket saw her walking into the bathroom, he loved this morning and Ragini's uneasiness, he was enjoying each and every moment...

*Few minutes later*

Ragini came out of the bathroom and she couldn't believe her eyes, the room which was a big mess few moments ago was now perfect as if nobody has used it since a long time, she looked around the room to find anything which was not In its place but she failed.
She felt happy as she knew who did all this but at the same time she didn't knew what was going on in his mind.
She then tried to search for Nachiket but the room was empty, she stepped out of the room and saw Nachiket making coffee, she didn't realized but she was smiling as if she was a kid and she just got a new doll which she always wanted.

Nachiket turn around with two mugs of coffee in his hand and saw her smiling at him and asked

Nachiket: Kya baat hai? Bohat khush lag rahi ho, sab theek hai na? *with a silly smile*

Ragini: Han? Kuch kaha tumne?

Nachiket: Ohoo tou aaj Mrs. Khanna bohat khoi khoi hain, thik ho?

*Ragini went into the kitchen and stood beside him*
Ragini: Han sab thk hai, kyun mujhe kya hone laga. *she exclaimed*

*Nachiket this time laughed a bit, surprising her and handed a cup of to her, she accepted the cup while he sipped his coffee*

Ragini: Has kyun rahe ho Nachiket kya hogya?

Nachiket: Nahi nahi kuch nahi hua bas dil kar rha tha hasne ko. Kyun tumhe koi aetraz hai?

Ragini: Nahi mujhe kyun hone laga aetraz haso jitna hasna hai, wese tumhe aaj hospital nahi jana kya 9:00 baj rahe hain..

Nachiket: Waah Mrs. Khanna aap tou Sunday ko bhi apne PATI DEV ko hospital bhejna chahti hain, aaj off hai na madam.

Ragini: Arey haan aaj tou Sunday hai, mere dimagh se nikal gaya.

Nachiket: Koi baat nahi Mrs.Khanna

Ragini: Ye tum baar baar Mrs. Khanna kya bole jarahe ho, mera naam bhool gaye ho tou yaad dila dun k mai Ragini hn. (She loved his attitude but because she is Ragini Devi she decided to show a bit of irritation)

Nachiket: Han han mai janta hn tum Ragini ho, tumhe bhool sakta hu kya mai? Aur jo bhi ho tum ho tou Mrs.Khanna he na (He said playfully) aur jahan tak mujhe yaad parta hai tumhe tou bohat pasand tha mera tumhe Mrs. Khanna kehna, ab kya hua?

Ragini: ab haalat badal gaye hain Nachiket aur ye baat tum bhi jaante ho.

Nachiket: Ragini haalat nahi badalte logon k nazarye badalte hain aur mai janta hn k yahan kuch bhi nahi badla hai, bas waqt ka asar hai jo dheere dheere utar jayega.

*Ragini was surprised by what she just heard, she tried to say something but was stopped by Nachiket in midway.*

Ragini: Ya, but...

Nachiket: Aaa aa let it be, kuch mat bolo tum sirf breakfast banao bohat bhook lagi hai jab tak mai bachon ko uthata hn, phir kahin bahar chalenge. Kahin movie dekhne ya phir jahan bachhe kahenge, (he suddenly came closer to her) ya agar aap kahen to yahin ruk jaate hain kahin nahi jate sirf bachon ko bhej dete hain :D and walked away to wake the kids up..

Ragini standing still watching him saying all of this, she was happy yet confused at the same time because she was not getting the point for him to do all this, as she knew the kids are not around and they don't have to act, she wondered why is he behaving so normal as if nothing has happened and they were never separated, as if they reunited for themselves but not just for their kids, all of this made her happy but she didn't knew how to react. (She thought about all of this in just a moment; her brain was working faster than her heartbeats)

She shrugged all of her thoughts and started preparing breakfast for her kids and for the man who always left her speechless and made her fall in love with him all over again...

*after sometime Nachiket came in the dining room with Aarav, Suhani, Aagham and Ranbir.

Everyone greeted Ragini Good morning, and sat down on the dining table, Ragini replied by smiling widely.

Ragini served breakfast to the kids and after serving them she walked towards Nachiket and started serving him but he stopped her by holding her wrist and made her sit on the seat next to him still holding her wrist, all the kids noticed it and smiled looking at each other, while Ragini kept on looking into his eyes which were gazing her and she tried really hard to
hide her blush but Nachiket caught it and it made her nervous, she asked him what is he doing through her glittering eyes.
Nachiket understood what she was saying and he said,
Nachiket: Kya ghoor kya rahi ho? Khud nahi khana kya? Har roz sabko serve karti ho khud sabse akkhir mein khati ho, aaj tum betho hum tumhe serve karte hain.

By saying this he left her hand and stood up for serving her some breakfast, Suhani and Agham joined their father.

Ragini just couldn't take her eyes off Nachiket, who was doing all this for her, she asked herself that why does this man still effect me so much? Why can't I just hate him after all of the things we've been through? Why can't I forget about all the moments I've spend with him being in his arms?
Her brain was chanting Why Ragini Why? But her heart was giving her the answers she was looking for, her heart told her that it is because You Love Him you are not able to forget about it, it is because You Love Him that you couldn't hate him all these years and it is because YOU NEVER STOPPED LOVING HIM, her heart skipped a beat and the reality struck her. She now knew that She loves him but she didn't express it through her expressions, she didn't wanted him to know about it, though her heart was continuously telling her to talk to him, but she did the opposite.
She lowered her eyes and wiped a lone tear which was hanging on her eye lids.

After serving her breakfast everyone took their seats, Nachiket sat next to her and noticed that she was thinking something and not paying attention to the food.
He patted on her shoulder and asked her,

Nachiket: Kya hua? (With a worried face)

Ragini: nahi Kuch nahi.

Nachiket: tou phir khao na bethi kyun ho?

Ragini: Han leti hn. (And smiled)

Nachiket knew something is not right but he thought that this is not the right time so he smiled back at her and started his breakfast, and decided to talk about it later.

To be continued...

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Wah wah kya baat hai Hamna!! :D

What is Nachiketa's plan? Poor Ragiin has absolutely no clue.. thanks for putting up this update so fast.. what's bothering Ragini now? Has she become emotional about something again? Awww poor soul!

I wish Nachiket can take care of everything as usual :D

Write soon!

Originally posted by: shabz50

Love how nachiket is going to win his ragini back can't wait till ur next update