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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Hammuu 😳
Superb baby

Aaj se I love ranbir, kaash Iknmp mai bhi sudhar jaata...
but iss update mai he is awesome...

and
and

Neira toh 😳
super exicted for you next update.. Neira akele waahh 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Very nice update love how all the kids want their parents together and how ranbir is showing his mom love. Can't wait to see what nachiket has planned now he has ragini on her own.
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Awww!!
Very very very sweet this was, Hamna... the parents being awkward in front of the kids and not being able to hold back their admiration for the other, specially dressing up for this occasion and finally thinking about each other as spouses and not just parents :)

Lovely!!

Please continue soon! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
A sweet update once again😊👏 The kids are so sweet😳
I specially loved these lines

Suhani: Wow dad, Kya hua hai aapko? Kahin mom ka asar tou nahi?
So true... She brings a change in him😳

ab hum sirf apne raste par chalenge aik dosre k SAATH..
I love how Nachiket wants them to be together... It's so sweet of him😳

she wasn't able to decide whether to go with her heart or with her stupid brain, she wanted to hold his hand in hers, she wanted to look at him with all the rights, she wanted to be in his arms, but her brain was misguiding her with all the things he said to her.
This is typical Ragini... Her mind and heart war is so nicely described😊

Lovely update😊Please update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Awww super sweet Hamna! Finally they're getting a break from being parents and can finally be husband and wife 😉

I loved how the kids sided with Ragini; they are all really such Mama's children! 😆
Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Great work.. Hamna!😛

Best update with such a cute script!😃

Keep it coming😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
These kids are adorable (and also quite chalu!) I enjoyed reading about them together as a family.

Hopefully Nachiket is able to convince Ragini...looking forward to the next update! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Amazing update. I absolutely loved this chapter. My favorite scene was the children's bond with Ragini. The children teasing their dad by siding with their mother was adorable. Ranbir's new avatar was lovely as well. I am very fond of this story and I cannot wait for you to continue. The Neira scenes were a treat and I must say it is very creative of you to incorporate places that once were memorable to them in the story in an effort to show their process of rebuilding their relationship. The new advances they make towards each other after finally being together just leaves the audience to wonder what would happen in the show once they begin to live under the same roof! Delightful chapter and I'm anticipating the next update eagerly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: JB-US

Amazing update. I absolutely loved this chapter. My favorite scene was the children's bond with Ragini. The children teasing their dad by siding with their mother was adorable. Ranbir's new avatar was lovely as well. I am very fond of this story and I cannot wait for you to continue. The Neira scenes were a treat and I must say it is very creative of you to incorporate places that once were memorable to them in the story in an effort to show their process of rebuilding their relationship. The new advances they make towards each other after finally being together just leaves the audience to wonder what would happen in the show once they begin to live under the same roof! Delightful chapter and I'm anticipating the next update eagerly.


Thank you so much for commenting, I am a big fan of your FF it's amazing, everything perfectly described, so well written..
there's a lack of bonding between Rags and the kids so just got an idea to portray it through this story :) I am glad u liked it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Awww!!

Very very very sweet this was, Hamna... the parents being awkward in front of the kids and not being able to hold back their admiration for the other, specially dressing up for this occasion and finally thinking about each other as spouses and not just parents :)

Lovely!!

Please continue soon! :D


Thankss : ) I am glad u guys are enjoying my work :)
I'll surely continue soon

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