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Last Chapter: A NEW JOURNEY
Nachiket and Ragini went inside the hotel, it was all changed, it was bigger and
better, everything was different and far more organized then it was 23 years ago.
OBVIOUSLY!
Nachiket taking a look at the hotel lounge and said,
Nachiket: Naam ke ilawa sab badal gaya na Ragini?
Ragini: Han, bilkul hamare rishte ki tarhan, pehle jab hum yahan ate thy tou
haalat kuch aur thy ab yahan ayen hain tou haalat badal gaye hain na... (She said
with a straight face without looking at him)
Nachiket felt miserable after hearing what she said he was about to say
something when the hotel manager came and greeted them and showed them
their table
The table was nicely covered with sparkling white cloth with a beautiful flower
bouquet in the center. They sat down and were asked about what they will have.
Nachiket ordered two cocktails and asked the waiter to wait for the proper order.
Nachiket wanted to talk to Ragini but she was not looking at him she was
continuously avoiding his gaze, Nachiket after maintaining some silence said,
Nachiket: Ragini zindgai hamesha aik jesi nahi hoti aur na he wesi hoti hai jese
hum chahte hain, zindagi mein oonch neech hoti rehti hai aur ye hum par hota hai
k hum usey kitni achhi tarhan manage karte, hamari ghalti ye thi ke humne usey
manage karne ki koshish he nahi ki wo jis raaste pe hume legayi hum chalte chale
gaye baghair kuch soche baghair kuch samjhe, jo jisne kaha maan liya par jiski
manni chahye thi uski taraf dihaan bhi nahi diya, tum samajh rahi ho na mai kya
keh raha hun?
The waiter came with two cocktails and placed them on the table.
Nachiket thanked the waiter and waited for Ragini to reply...
Ragini staring at him carefully listening to what he was saying, after hearing what
he said, she finally spoke
Ragini: Han shayad samajh rahi hn, lekin ye sab samajhne se milega kya, kuch thk
nahi hoga humne bht kuch kaha hai aur bht kuch suna hai Nachiket sab kuch
bhulana itna asaan nahi hai. Aur jis raaste pe hum hain mat bhoolo k ye hamare
bachon k liye hai.
Nachiket felt the pain in her eyes and tremble in her voice and decided not to
continue this discussion here as it was not the right place; he knew she would
breakdown easily as she was on the verge of bursting out her emotions, he
sensed it, he knew her so well...
Nachiket: acha thk hai, let's not discuss this right now...
Ragini looked away, controlled her emotions and thought to herself that Thank
God he didn't say anything or else I wouldn't be able to stop myself from crying.
Nachiket: Acha Ragini common now aese mood mat kharab karo itne dino baad
tou aye hain aese hum, phir pata nahi mouqa mile na mile, chalo na common give
me a smile. Please? *He pleaded*
Ragini loved his efforts of making her smile, She thought to herself that this is the
same man I fell in love with 23 years ago, this is the man whose single touch can
send shivers through my body, this is the man I always wanted to spend my life
with, this is the man whose happiness is the most important thing for me, this is
the man who changes my mood from worst to best, this is the man who breaks
my heart but this is the same man who brings it back together, in that single
moment she realized that what a big mistake she was doing by not accepting the
reality, the reality which made her smile instantly and the reality was that She is
still madly, deeply and crazily in love with this man sitting in front of her eyes, her
heart finally won the battle, but she still wanted to see what comes next...
*she gave the sweetest smile to Nachiket and he noticed a difference and he felt
relieved *
Nachiket: han tou ab order karden agar madam ka mood theek hogya hai tou.
Ragini laughed a bit and nodded in a yes.
They ordered the food and after sometime waiter brought their lunch and served
it to them.
Watching the food, Ragini remembered the day when she was angry at Nachiket
because he was late and she was in no mood to eat and Nachiket fed her,
*Flashback*
Ragini was sitting in the same hotel and was waiting for Nachiket to come but he
called and asked her to place the order as he is stuck in the traffic and will join her
shortly, Ragini ordered the food and waited for him, an hour passed by and still
no sign of him, she got upset and was about to leave when she saw Nachiket
coming towards her with a very tired face and as soon as he reached her he
started apologizing, but Ragini was super angry..
Nachiket: Sorry sorry sorry Ragini late hogya na I know em sorry.
Ragini: Late nahi bohat late hogaye ho tum, mai kabse wait kar rhi hn Nachiket,
Nachiket: Han na baba bol tou raha hn sorry aur meri kya ghalti thi, itna traffic tha
mai kese ata?
Ragini: tou tumhe pata nahi hai kya ke yahan kitna traffic hota hai? Us hisaab se
nikalna chahye tha na.
Nachiket: Arey mujhe kese pata hoga k itna traffic hoga, acha chalo baba sorry
aenda pehle nikal jaonga,bas?
Ragini: Nahi mujhe nahi karni tumse baat.
Ragini was enjoying it thoroughly, she wanted more of it, meanwhile waiter
brought their food and left.
Nachiket: Acha chalo ab khana tou khalo.
Ragini: Nahi mujhe nahi khana bhook nahi hai.
Nachiket: arey tou tum mujhse naraz ho na khane ka kya qasoor hai?
Ragini: mai nai keh diya na nahi khana.
Nachiket knew exactly what she was doing and he wanted more of it, so he
behaved as if he doesn't care...
Nachiket: Theek hai tumhe nahi khana mat khao mujhe tou bht bhook lagi hai mai
tou khaonga, and started eating
Nachiket: Hmmm kya khana hai waah, itna maze ka tou kabhi nahi laga aaj ki
shayad baat he alag hai, par tumhe kyun bata raha hn mai tumhe tou bhook he
nahi lagi na, hmm tch tch...
Ragini couldn't believe that he is eating without her and said
Ragini: Nachiket tumhe sharam nahi arahi na? mere baghair kha rahe ho.
Nachiket: han tou meri kya ghalti hai tumhe he nahi khana tha mai kya karun,
Ragini: Nachiket I can't believe it matlab itna late khud aye mai nai tumhare
intezar mein kuch khaya bhi nahi k sath khayenge aur tum ho k mujhe chira rahe
Nachiket started laughing uncontrollably, Ragini was coming back to normal
watching him laugh, she loved his smile, she always called it a sexy smile...
Ragini: has kyun rahe ho ab tum, mai nai koi joke nahi bola hai.
Nachiket: Meri jaan tumhari har baat mujhe khushi deti hai zaroori nahi hai k tum
joke marogi mai tab he hasunga,
Ragini: Sachh?
Nachiket came close to her, now they were just a few inches away he smiled and
Nachiket: Han sachh, tumhari qasam
Ragini couldn't hide her blush, she smiled and looked down, Nachiket's gaze
followed her, she looked at him and saw him looking at her with all the love for
her in his eyes, his eyes can't lie *She thought to herself*
Ragini: achha bas bhi karo ab dekhna.
Nachiket: Arey mohabbat se dekh raha hn yar, itna bhi haq nahi hai kya?
Ragini: sare haq sirf aur sirf tumhe he hain.
Nachiket smiled and gave a small peck on her cheek, she turned red as there were
other people as well, but she saw nobody witnessed what just happened.
Nachiket noticed her blushing and said
Nachiket: itna bhi mat sharmao Ragini I've just kissed your cheek warna you know
na I've got a lot of more options *He winked at her* making her blush even more.
He then tried to make things easy for her, he said
Nachiket: achaa chalo moo kholo mai khilati hn tumhe.
Ragini agreed because this is what she wanted...
*Present time*
Nachiket noticed her not paying attention to the food and was just moving the
fork on the plate, he knew what she was thinking, and he wanted her to reminisce
their good times so that it would be easier for him to win her over...
Nachiket: Ragini?
Ragini suddenly came back to her senses and said
Ragini: han kuch kaha?
Nachiket: Han Ragini khana thanda horha hai, khana nahi hai kya?
Ragini: Han khati hn...
They silently finished their food and later Nachiket called out for the bill, he paid
the bill and they both left the hotel. Weather was very pleasant and it was
drizzling outside.They walked towards the car and settled their selves, Nachiket
asked her,
Nachiket: Ab?
Ragini: Ab kya?
Nachiket: matlab ab kya karna hai? Ghar chalen kyun k agr ye halki barish agr tez
hogyi tou masla hoga.
Ragini: Nahi ghar nahi jana mujhe Nachiket
Nachiket was happy to hear that she doesn't want to go back home. So he asked
Nachiket: ghar nahi jana tou phir yahin bethna hai kya?
Ragini: Drive pe le chalo? Mai khamoshi se ye halki bearish dekhna chahti hn, ye
thandi hawa mehsoos karna chahti hn, Please?
Nachiket's heart was literally dancing with joy, this day was better than he
thought it would be... He agreed to what she said...
Nachiket took his car on the way to Puna, he wanted to spend as much time as he
could with the woman he love, sitting next to him with one hand out of the car
window feeling the small droplets of rain and laying back on the car seat in the
most relaxing way possible.
Nachiket didn't say a word the whole time he just quietly noticed her beauty and
admired it.
On the other hand Ragini was thinking about Nachiket, his dark eyes, his sexy
smile and everything he did for her since this morning, she wanted to thank him
but didn't, she was waiting for him to clearly talk about their relationship and she
knew he will. After some time she realized it was quite late and they should go
back so she said
Ragini: Nachiket kaafi der hogayi hai bachhe akele honge din bhi dhalne wala hai,
chalo ghar chalen.
Nachiket: bas hogya shoq pura? Chalo as you say. He turned the car back to the
They were heading back home when the drizzling turned into heavy rain and the
roads were hardly visible, they kept moving but after few kilometers the road was
blocked due to rain and there was no way they can get back home...
Nachiket: Ab kya Karen? *in a worried tone*
Ragini: Nachiket koi tou raasta hoga na jis se wapis jasakte hain. Koshish karo na
Nachiket: Nahi jasakte Ragini, raasta band hai dekh tou rahi ho tum
Ragini: tou ab kya Karen? Aese he bethe rahenge kya? Bachhe bhi akele hain.
Nachiket: Bachon ko call kardeta hn, *He took out his phone but there was no
network* Shit!!!
Ragini: Kya hua?
Nachiket: yaar network bhi nahi hai.
Ragini: ab kya Karen Nachiket? *with a tensed look at her face*
Nachiket searched for a place from where he could make a call to the kids, after
sometime he pointed at a small house, said
Nachiket: Ragini wo dekho shayad kisi ka ghar hai, hosakta hai wahan phone ho ya
dekhta hn Utarta hn gaari se shayad mil jaye network.
Ragini: Pagal ho kya, beemar parna hai? Itni tez barish horhi hai, pohancho ge
kese wahan?
Nachiket: Ragini lekin aese bethe bhi tou nahi reh sakte na kuch tou karna he
parega, tum meri tension mat lo tum betho mai dekhta hn.
Ragini: nahi mai sath mein aongi agr tum gaye tou aese akele nahi jane dongi mai
Nachiket: Nahi Ragini tum betho mai dekhta hn na,
Ragini: mai sath mein ane wali hn, bas final hogya, ab zyada time waste mat karo
jaldi utro.
Nachiket: Acha baba thk hai,
They both stepped out of the car, he held Ragini's hand and rushed towards the
house sprinting, they reached the house only to find that it was locked and there
was no one in the house.
Nachiket: Shit shit shit...
Ragini was breathing heavily and was extremely angry with all the happenings,
she started blaming Nachiket,
Ragini: Ye sab tumhari waja se hua hai
Nachiket: Mmmeri waja se? meri waja se kese mai nai kya kiya? *with a confused
Ragini: kyun leke aye tum drive pe?
Nachiket: Matlab? Shayd tum bhool rahi ho lekin drive pe aane ka idea tumhara
tha aue mai nai tou kaha bhi tha k agar barish tez hogyi tou masla hoga. *getting a
bit irked*
Ragini: Han tou mai jo kahungi wohi karoge kya? Aur wese bhi subha se pata nahi
tumhe kya hogya hai ajeeb behave kar rhe ho, bachhon k samne tou samajh ata
hai aese akele mein itna drama karne ki kya zaroorat hai... *she couldn't believe
what she was saying she realized it only after she said all of it*
Nachiket: Kya hogya matlab? Tumhe dikhai nahi deraha mai ye sab hamare liye
kar raha hn, tumhare liye kar raha hn aur tum keh rhi ho kya hogya hai, Drama
kyun kar rahe ho, tumhe kya hogya hai Ragini?
He shouted with anger as he could not believe that she is asking him about what
he was doing though he was quiet clear about his behavior today and he thought
she understood, but...
Ragini: Hamare liye kya Nachiket hamare liye kya? Hamara rishta tum jante ho, ye
qadam humne sirf apne bachhon k liye barhaya tha shayad bhool gaye ho tum.
*She said in a trembling voice trying to be strong but deep down her soul was
questioning her about what was she was him as she knew what he was doing*
Nachiket: Ragini har baar bachhon ka kya nahi hota yaar, hamara kya, hamara kya
Ragini? Hum kahan hain is sab mein?
*this time he didn't control his emotions his eyes turned red and there were tears
ready to roll down his cheeks*
Ragini: Hum? Hum tou kabhi thy he nahi Nachiket, Tum tum thy aur mai mai thi
ye Hum wala rishta 18 saal pehle he khatam hogya tha, ab tou sirf is rishte ko
hamare bachhon ne thama hua hai warna is mein karvahat aur Nafrat k ilawa hai
*she said crying uncontrollably*
Nachiket came closer to her, held her by her shoulders, pulled her closer, his
touch made her shiver from inside... He leaned closer said in a very low voice,
Nachiket: Ragini jab 15 saal ki doori hamare beech nafrat nahi paida kar payi tou
ye chand mahine kya kar sakte hain?
Tumhare alfaaz tumse jhoot bol sakte hain, mujhse jhoot bol sakte hain, par
tumhari ye ankhen mujhse kabhi jhoot nahi bol skti.
Tum keh rahi ho na is rishte mein kuch nahi hai sivaye nafrat k aur karvahat k, tou
agar itni he nafrat aur karvahat hai tou phir ye pyar bhare ansoo kyun Ragini?
Kyun aaj bhi jab tum kehti ho k tumhe mujhse pyar nhi hai tou tumhari awaaz
kyun kanpti hai?
Kyun aaj bhi jab mai tumhare qareeb ata hn, tumhe choota hn tou kyun tumhari
ankhen sharam se jhuk jati hain?
Kyun Ragini Kyun?
Ragini without speaking looked into his eyes who were screaming about how
much he loves her, how honest he was with his feelings, but what was she doing?
Why was she hiding her emotions when she knew he already understand her
feelings? Why was she not letting out her heart to him?
*Ragini was scared that what if she tells him everything, they start to live happily
and then one day something happens and he leaves as she thought happiness is
not for her. She didn't want to lose him at least he was in front of her eyes, but
this time she wanted to express all of her feelings.
Nachiket: Bolo Ragini dekh kya rahi ho? He demanded for the answers but after
hearing nothing from her he sneered and said
Nachiket: kya hua nahi hai na jawab? Janta tha mai bohat achi tarhan se janta tha
mai, *he left her and turned around wiping his tears*
Ragini: Nachiket! DO YOU LOVE ME?
Nachiket turned around, looked into her eyes with a surprise but then he
understood what she wanted, he came closer to her again and stood right in front
Ragini: Bolo na Nachiket, DO YOU LOVE ME?
He kept his hands on her shoulders and replied to her question in the same way
he did 18 years back which made her smile and she threw herself in his arms,
breaking all the walls she built around herself, he wrapped his arms around her,
placing his chin on her head and closed his eyes as if he got everything he ever
wished for...
Ragini felt on top of the world being in his arms, she always wanted to be there,
earlier she had no reason but today she had every reason to be there in his arms...
She murmured I LOVE YOU NACHIKET
Nachiket: Shhh, I know... he smiled in the most peaceful manner.
Ragini broke the hug and looked at him; he wiped her tears and kissed her
forehead.
Nachiket: Bas Ragini ab in ankhon mein kabhi ansoo nahi ayenge, mai waada karta
hn tumhe wo sari khushiyan donga jo tum deserve karti ho, jo hum deserve karte
hain, bohat hua ye rona dhona ab bas khushiyan he khushiyan hongi... *He said
hopefully*
Ragini: Nachiket mai nai tumhe bht dukh diye hai na?
Nachiket: agr tumne dukh diye hain tou mai nai bhi kuch kam nahi diye. Lekin aik
ajeeb baat note ki hai Ragini, hamare saare dukh saari pareshaniyan sirf aik hug se
khatam hojati hain, kaash hum aik aesa he hug 18 saal pehle karlete tou shayad
aaj is mor pe na khare hote, par choro ab jo hogaya wo hogaya ab bas hum
peeche mur k nahi dekhenge, ab sirf agey dekhenge aur jo bhi mushkil ayegi usey
milke solve karenge. Hmm?
Ragini: Han thk keh rahe ho hum jitni jaldi aik dosre se naraz hote hain utni he
jaldi maan bhi jate hain, aur Nachiket jab hum alag thy tou hamari zindagiyan kitni
bikhri hui si thien, hum apne bachon ko thk se samjh nahi pa rahe thy par jab hum
aik hue bhale bachon ko dikhane k liye hi sahi par sath milke har cheez sambhali
tou sab thk hogya Nachiket, iska matlab samajhte ho? Iska matlab hai k hum aik
dosre k baghair kuch nahi hain...
They both smiled at each other then Nachiket cupped her face, leaned forward
and they were inches away, he tilted his head, closed his eyes and was about to
kiss her when she said
Ragini: Nachiket dekho barish ruk gayi, *she tried to annoy him*
Nachiket opened his eyes looked at her in surprise and said
Nachiket: Ragini mai yahan romantic horaha hn aur tumhe barish ki pari hai..
Ragini: Nachiket bht late hogya hai bache pareshan horhe honge na, aur ab tak
tou road bhi khul gayi hogi, chalo na please... *She said making a cute face*
Nachiket chuckled and said
Nachiket: Ragini tumhe romance se allergy hai na?
Ragini laughed and replied
Ragini: Jab pata hai tou der mat karo, chalo *and started walking towards the
Nachiket jogged a bit to reach her and said
Nachiket: Koi baat nahi Mrs.Khanna abhi nahi tou baad mein sahi lekin aapki
romance ki allergy ko tou mai khatam karke he rahunga, ab tou aap mujhe rok bhi
nahi sakti. *He wincked at her making her blush*
Ragini: Han thk hai dekhte hain...
They sat in the car and drove back home. It was a start of a new journey which
they always longed for...
After that day they never looked back and just lived their lives happily with
numerous fights, beautiful family moments and lots and lots of Romance...
THE END which leads to A NEW START...
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