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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

This is very nice...😊

I loved the flash back and how in the end he knew:
At that very moment he decided that from now on it is not only about his kids, it is about his love, it is about HIS Ragini, it is about winning her back, it is about bringing back all the days which they missed being in each others arms , it is about giving her the love she deserve and it is about ending that painful awkwardness which they share.
Loved these lines

And also how he said You complete me Ragini I am nothing without you...

Please write more soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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your comments are very special because I love the way you point something out and talk about it,
Ok i'll try to write some more
Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hamna19khan


your comments are very special because I love the way you point something out and talk about it,
Ok i'll try to write some more
Thank you 😳


You keep writing and I'll keep commenting😉🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Tiana...


You keep writing and I'll keep commenting😉🤗


Done Deal 😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hamna!
So happy you have started writing :D This was truly enjoyable... but I really request you to not keep this as a OS but extend this and write it as a full story.. please write more..

Their memory and his recollection is so sweet... beautiful! <3 :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written Hamna...keep it up... n Thank u for writing... now I'm waiting for ur next story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Hamna Super Work.

Keep writing, waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was awesome! Once Nachiket himself decides to win Ragini back, no one can stop him. Not even Ragini..!
Just loved it! Please write more ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: MAK56



Wow Hamna Super Work.

Keep writing, waiting for next update


Thanks Mak bro :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is nice, Hamna.
Some mature and serious thinking by Nachiket ... 😊 Looking forward to where this story takes us to ...
Please do continue

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