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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

I could have just edited my previous post and penned down my thoughts on Chapter 1 but I love new posts!

Because stupefied is how you will turn out to be,

When the taken for granted raise their voice.

Seriously, first Cruise Adriana poems and now this? What are you? A connoisseur of words! you are just amazing!

Can I say the first step Khushi took to channel her ASR/Arnav avatar was sooo f**king brilliant. The jubiliant yet shy Khushi uses her words to show her happiness and to stay true to her character to bestow happiness to others. But when you mix in ASR's blunt mouth and Khushi together, you have what you just described in Chapter 1; EVERYBODY NOTICED IT! I LOVED IT.

Coz when you decide to voice the same callous statements about what others have said and its coming from a rather 'seemingly' gullible wife of Arnav Sign Raizada, it makes you pause and reflect on how easily words have a power to completely dismantle you.

Edited by AllSmiles86 - 9 years ago

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Wow...
Superb..
Very different n fresh...
Loved this kushi..
Noe hope that arnav too gain some sense..
Plz update soon

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crazyweird

@crazyweird

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Very nice- like the take you took on it

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Awesome and fantastic update

I was laughing reading the expressions of Raizada family after Khushi ingenious and smart conversation. WOW! Khushi was awesome.

Sheetal as a sheddy character, good going Khushiji.

Can't wait to read next part.

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aps.roy

@aps.roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

awesum update <3 <3

simply luved it...

now every1 wud realize how bad khushi was feeling

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

kushi clean bowled the raizadas

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Savera84

@Savera84

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

How many more variations can we come up with this show? Most of them are good and each one is delivering some thing special. Hats off to the writers including you.

Cheers...

Edited by Savera84 - 9 years ago

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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Can I please just give khushi a big big around of applause for what she just did brvooo I'm really looking forward to this

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anjs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

good one Simi...loved the questions that Khushi asked...and yes hated the Raizada's for comparing Arav to Arnav without thinking about what Khushi would feel...esp when the same family would always be so thoughtful for Anjali and her stupid emotions...

and Arnav, yes he deserves it, he hurt her so much for Shyam, when Shyam was just a ex-fiance...but Arnav had actually dated Shit-all...or its right of Khushi to feel insecure...and i hope atleast here Arnav would do something to make Khushi feel loved...

But to think of it, even in the show, the fact that ASR who was obsessed with revenge from his uncle to make it big in the world, actually had the mind n sense to date someone in harvard, itself seems so illogical...

I mean, i can accept LA as his girlfriend later on, as he needed an arm-candy, but in those learning days, he was a nobody, later his mami gave him jewelery and he built that empire, so during harvard days, he should've have been the angry young man, not interested in anything other then his goals...i wish someone write about it and Arnav tells Khushi how Sheetal was a self-declared girlfriend whom he never corrected and that he didnt have the time and the inclination for a girl friend at that time...