COMPLETE|ArShi SS:If I Were You Just For A Day (Sheetal Track)| - Page 9

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

😆😆actually poor writers were struggling with story plots that they adopted some Kuch Kuch Hota hai...Anjali Rahul parts😕😕ASR that too some cheesy chocolate boy😡😡

Arnav is a man obsessed with winning...remember during Payash sangeeth..they made a bet...and Arnav was all set to win the game hook and crook...teasing and enraging khushi...

our feisty girl to replied and accepted challenge...

later we know he let her win☺️☺️(teri meri)

THEY KILLED ASR...🤬

The way you personify Khushi is how it should have been in the show. But alas, importance of women is not realised as such in the Indian society. Women are shown as submissive, and soft spoken, all dolled up bodies. There emotions don't matter until a man backs them.

Hehehee khushi 👍🏼❤️

valid points raised by khushi.

brilliant concept yaar...

u got amazing point of sheetal being kapoor and how aarav become an ASR...

can't wait to read next part...

Marvelous concept yar... Can't wait for next update do pm me

already waing fr next part simiii 😃

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Oh My God!!! This was so so sooo amazing didu

I loved it.

Loved that Khushi raised such a question.

Loved that she asked some questions those went unanswered in the serial and still were being pondered by us in the tiny part of our brains.

Loved that the family at least now had a tinge of guilt in them.

Loved that they did have some shame in them to understand how their khushi betiya felt.

Hated Arnav for getting angry even a second

Loved Arnav for self assessment.

Loved him for knowing that somewhere or to say the every time even he participated equally in making Khushi insecure.

Loved how YOU portrayed everyone's expressions and feelings...

Thank You.. Thank You so much for the update

And sorry for the late reply

Love,

Munchkin

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

The way you personify Khushi is how it should have been in the show. But alas, importance of women is not realised as such in the Indian society. Women are shown as submissive, and soft spoken, all dolled up bodies. There emotions don't matter until a man backs them.

I'm really happy that Khushi spome for herself and made the family realise that who is a t fault and who should be given importance.

I hope in the following chapters the family supports her more andnot Sheetal who ganered all the attention by getting Aarav.

When I glance at the title, it reminds meof the song by Beyonce 'If I were a boy', and it suits the story, if not on the whole but to some extent and if it suits for you but to me.

I'm waiting to read more. Do update soon. Sorry for the late and short reply but life has been hectic but I read your posts first, coz you are my priority baby.

Love,

Saraa :*