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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Brilliant!
Khushi clean bowled the raizadas, but arnav is still clueless,looks like. Its heights they take khushi for granted. Now atleast they would know to respect her, mainly arnav. Waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: anjs

good one Simi...loved the questions that Khushi asked...and yes hated the Raizada's for comparing Arav to Arnav without thinking about what Khushi would feel...esp when the same family would always be so thoughtful for Anjali and her stupid emotions...

and Arnav, yes he deserves it, he hurt her so much for Shyam, when Shyam was just a ex-fiance...but Arnav had actually dated Shit-all...or its right of Khushi to feel insecure...and i hope atleast here Arnav would do something to make Khushi feel loved...

But to think of it, even in the show, the fact that ASR who was obsessed with revenge from his uncle to make it big in the world, actually had the mind n sense to date someone in harvard, itself seems so illogical...
I mean, i can accept LA as his girlfriend later on, as he needed an arm-candy, but in those learning days, he was a nobody, later his mami gave him jewelery and he built that empire, so during harvard days, he should've have been the angry young man, not interested in anything other then his goals...i wish someone write about it and Arnav tells Khushi how Sheetal was a self-declared girlfriend whom he never corrected and that he didnt have the time and the inclination for a girl friend at that time...


Hi dear!
I totally agree with what you worded above.
I honestly never liked the fact that the family always belittled concerns related to Khushi, whereas with Anjali, they always had an abundance of understanding, concern, and care.

I agree that Anjali was always this dependent female, but dude, she is not a kid. She is ASR's "DI".. And as per that, she is so much older to Khushi if we look at it practically.
Then how can someone undermine Khushi's share of agony so easily?
Arnav, Anjali, Khushi- all three of them have carried heavy baggage from the past, and just because Khushi has always maintained a strong demeanour rather than being a cry baby like Anjali, doesn't mean her emotions r not invaluable and she doesn't need a pillar of strength from her family.

I also second on ur theory that says how can Arnav even have a gf back in his Harvard days? He was way too occupied with his revenge back then and a stoic person when it comes to emotions.
Additionally, I also found it absolutely bizarre when right before the BB match, sheetal n Arnav had this debate in front of the family wherein Arnav tells sheetal out loud: "Tum jeetti thi,that's because main tumhe jeetne deta tha!"

I m like, huh??
ASR allowed someone to win in a BB match?
That too a girl?
That too when he was not even having any emotions, feelings for others?

Character butchering, thou name is IPk!
That's what I thought during that track.
*sigh*

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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

I could have just edited my previous post and penned down my thoughts on Chapter 1 but I love new posts!

Because stupefied is how you will turn out to be,

When the taken for granted raise their voice.

Seriously, first Cruise Adriana poems and now this? What are you? A connoisseur of words! you are just amazing!

Can I say the first step Khushi took to channel her ASR/Arnav avatar was sooo f**king brilliant. The jubiliant yet shy Khushi uses her words to show her happiness and to stay true to her character to bestow happiness to others. But when you mix in ASR's blunt mouth and Khushi together, you have what you just described in Chapter 1; EVERYBODY NOTICED IT! I LOVED IT.

Coz when you decide to voice the same callous statements about what others have said and its coming from a rather 'seemingly' gullible wife of Arnav Sign Raizada, it makes you pause and reflect on how easily words have a power to completely dismantle you.


Thank you so much 😊
I didn't know you have read my other SS: Cruise Adriana as well 😛
And oh the poems, that's kinda my signature way of writing, but I always feel I end up showcasing my literature love in everything (intentionally or unintentionally) 😆
I like the feisty Khushi way more than anything.
The thrashing of the resignation letter on ASR's face, pushing him with accusations in the construction site, giving it back to Arnav whenever needed - - that's the Khushi I fell in love with. Not the clown the CVs turned her into during Sheetal & Mrs. India track.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Super duper update! 👏
Loved this Khushi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: dv19

She did raise her voice in the sly as a fox.
Bful writing.

My comment for Adrian is due. Will comment asap.

Busy with ad.

I read Adrian completely.

Marvellous.


Hi dear 🤗
Delighted to see your comment!
Hope u enjoy this story :)

And yeah, I will certainly await your feedback on Cruise Adriana as well..
Gosh, can't even believe that story is already finished 😲😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: lechuarshi


I want to hug this khushi...
she pour some commonsense in those Raizadas...lol i love the way u described their reaction...Bahu asking total awkward questions..😆😆 and Arnav and Arav similarities...
that way their dimaag ki bathi jali😆...
oh so ASR ko gussa aa raha hai??😡😡..he is the one who openly mistrust her regarding shyam...and why always khushi needed to prove herself...
here khushi can doubt Arnav..he didnt believe in love and commitment b4..Sheetal was his EX..and the kid in question with ASR name...
it is very natural to doubt...instead of dealing with her insecurities..he is acting lyk an ASS..

basketball part was just after DNA scenes...he did avoid her after that...he knew about her insecurities but just added fuel to it by screaming awesome threesome slogans...


My feisty girl is back...i am happy...waiting for nxt⭐️⭐️


Won't say much here.
I love you. Bas. 🤗
Lenin haan, love your GIFs slightly zyada 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ranogill

they always show wives on indian tv either to submissive or too brash but never an intelligent woman...they also showed khushi a clown like woman. an eldest raizada bahu but an 7 year old boy could make fun of her ...same woman when she was unmarried was chosen to teach asr's girlfriend some indian culture...By reading your khushi its like a balm to our bruised souls... What a simple thing to point out about arnav and aarav.because even real father and son can not be that much match...waiting for next part eagerly


Thanks a lot dear.
Glad to know your POV on this and I totally second what u said here. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Simi1711


Hi dear!
I totally agree with what you worded above.
I honestly never liked the fact that the family always belittled concerns related to Khushi, whereas with Anjali, they always had an abundance of understanding, concern, and care.

I agree that Anjali was always this dependent female, but dude, she is not a kid. She is ASR's "DI".. And as per that, she is so much older to Khushi if we look at it practically.
Then how can someone undermine Khushi's share of agony so easily?
Arnav, Anjali, Khushi- all three of them have carried heavy baggage from the past, and just because Khushi has always maintained a strong demeanour rather than being a cry baby like Anjali, doesn't mean her emotions r not invaluable and she doesn't need a pillar of strength from her family.

I also second on ur theory that says how can Arnav even have a gf back in his Harvard days? He was way too occupied with his revenge back then and a stoic person when it comes to emotions.
Additionally, I also found it absolutely bizarre when right before the BB match, sheetal n Arnav had this debate in front of the family wherein Arnav tells sheetal out loud: "Tum jeetti thi,that's because main tumhe jeetne deta tha!"

I m like, huh??
ASR allowed someone to win in a BB match?
That too a girl?
That too when he was not even having any emotions, feelings for others?

Character butchering, thou name is IPk!
That's what I thought during that track.
*sigh*

😆😆actually poor writers were struggling with story plots that they adopted some Kuch Kuch Hota hai...Anjali Rahul parts😕😕ASR that too some cheesy chocolate boy😡😡

Arnav is a man obsessed with winning...remember during Payash sangeeth..they made a bet...and Arnav was all set to win the game hook and crook...teasing and enraging khushi...
our feisty girl to replied and accepted challenge...
later we know he let her win☺️☺️(teri meri)

THEY KILLED ASR...🤬

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
this is truly a very apt way of dealing with the entire scenario that has been so badly and wrongly manhandled upto now ... great going 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Outstanding!
Oh, it was like giving the Raizadas a reality check.

And Arnav a suggestion for you, Ahem! don't poke the wounded tigress. You might get bitten.

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