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albmum14

@albmum14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#901

NK, here I am!

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And the sadness grows. This is the first time that he addressed his feelings in the past tense. Was it only as a result of the frustration and sadness that the memories showered him in, or a simple slip of the tongue?

One good thing is that he is able to relate to the doctor, where previously NK had made no inroads. There is a pull there, between them. I don't know how I actually feel about it, if it grows into attraction. If she is not his JG, his feelings and guilt might bring him down, before he can really let go of her. It would be too cruel for him. But I am speculating too much in a direction that perhaps the story will not travel into.

My curiosity coupled with anticipation of new updates and not being able to read all the story at once gives more power to my sadness and my odd theories.

Perhaps, this is a good time for me to learn how to be patient.

It was a great chapter, revealing so much, yet adding to our frustration. The time will come when the curtain falls, enabling us to see things clearly.

Edited by albmum14 - 9 years ago

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#902

Hi M, G, Sam, Ruchi di, Mirabell ji

I hope koi bada dhamaka nahi hua ho.

Res

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UnRes

And here it is - The banner change and M's omg. Fingers crossed, reading now.

Is Arnav pretending? I think he knows that Dr Gupta is Khushi, for some odd reason. This is the most randomest thought occuring to me.

Ranjit, a fellow officer - So that's what made NK angry. Most of us thought it involved the trio - Arnav, NK and Choco. Nice twist, Ridz.

NK is a Malhotra? Sorry just reminded of a Ms Briganza all of a sudden. G, Sam - Kuch Kuch Hota Hai, ladies? 😆

Dr Gupta = Khushi, now you wouldn't casually let that slip, there is a catch for sure. The readers know this, what about the characters? I think this is a brilliant skill you have, ensure the mystery remains. 👏

Both of them are unaware of their first names. Khushi knows A's name is Arnav, Dr Gupta addresses him as Mr Raizada. Infering things only gets everyone confused, hence abstaining. 😳

Flashback - Wouldn't say it was unexpected, A does connect with Dr Gupta and Choco. I thought you would use a quote from it as a teaser, that would have been really tough to guess. Munchkin, Aman and Arnav frantically searching for his Jalebi girl - What's there not to like?

Okay last thought for the day - Dr Gupta and Khushi are not the same people. Khushi dies in the blast, there I said it. Dr Gupta becomes his Jalebi girl, at least a part of him wants it to be true, she become his Khushi.

P.S - Is Khushi's last name Gupta? I know I missed something. 😳

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 9 years ago

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@TwilightStar_JP

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#903

Taken

*edited*

Aww .. Couldn't he also mention the cats name? That would have been a lovely thing but I guess story would end too soon :P so let's wait and see how the dots are connected.

Finding munchkin was such a cute part.

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 9 years ago

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#904

Oh only if he mentioned the name Munchkin!!! Guess that would make the story shorter though, so it's ok..

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: boyznaka
omg

What happened ?? 😲

Sometimes I get scared reading Chutki's comments more than I worry whether they would ever meet or not.

Will be back with more later.

Edited by canapoem - 9 years ago

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#906

Ridz,

It has been a while since the updates are based from Arnav's perspective, would we get to know Jalebi girl's version too?

(This time I presume she is alive)

UnResed at the previous page. 😳

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 9 years ago

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#907

It's so sad!! It's like fate was against them everytime. Now that they are close how long till they recognize each other. Makes me wanna cry. And munchkin is still alive??? How sweet... Can't wait for another update that brings them one step closer in rediscovering each other.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#908

so near yet so far..i am asking you again will they ever meet

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Bakergirl

@Bakergirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#909

D importance of 'right moment' is so true for this story!

I loved to hear how Munchikin reached with Arnav...or rather how Arnav met Munchikin...did feel his anguish at losing all visible leads to his JG.

Jus a teeny tiny qtn? I've neva stayed in hostels so I dnt knw...but how come the Warden had no info abt JG...I mean dnt they have records of students who stay in which room..even if prev one passed away...or is it dat d warden didnt want to shell out pvt info to strangers...or maybe years of reading crime fiction has spoiled me rotten😆

Frankly speaking dat banner spooks me everytime it appears...m gonna shut my trap...n let the story unfold...blue may throw any kinda googly at us😉

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#910

There was so much pain in that past moment revealed here. Arnav lossing all the visible ties to connect him to his jalebi girl. But he didn't think she is gone but what about now? Did he still thinks one day he will find her and show her how much he missed her?

Im happy how arnav found munchkin and took him to his olace asthe last connection between him and his love.

Arnav is opening up to Dr. Gupta but he also observes her a lit. Now what did he conclude of her full-sleeves clothing? Is it another result of bombing. Well assuming Dr. Gupta aka Khushi is the jalebi girl.

He said, "Choco reminded of a cat that was very special to someone I loved". Loved... But he still loves her. And that pain, loneliness, emptiness is becoming unbearable to read.

After reading about the past, its apparent how lonely JB was and still is, right? Dr. Gupta is lonely? Right?