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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#911

Ridz,

Still very saddened to see Arnav's grief, an almost tangible part of who he is. Thank you for filling us up on how he reached Munchkin and family. The other details paled...yes Dr Gupta does not seem to have too much of a memory of him...or them...is this really his Jalebi girl after all...loved the companionship NK provides Arnav...he is such an all weather friend. True blue! I am left with a strange up yearning after this letter to Jalebi. Ache din Kab aayenge?!

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vinovember

@vinovember

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#912

Loved the update!! A little glimpse into the past!! I like how arnav connects with dr Gupta and can be honest with her! Arnav saying" choco reminding him about a cat owned by someone he loved" this just broke my heart a bit!! I still can't guarantee if dr Gupta is our jalebi girl for sure!
Very well written 👏

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#913

Simply beautiful.

Love
Anna👏

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#914

I wish he had mentioned Munchkin's name.Now that the ice has thawed, they'll slowly know more about each other and probably the tale of A and Jalebi will be told. I just wish for a happy ending, it's been a long time coming.

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v5a1s6

@v5a1s6

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#915

Enjoyed the update :)

This update again makes me think how come he could reach her old hostel and yet could not find out her name? He must have taken help from the coordinator/administrator of their penpal thing, right? Or he could even have used her cell phone number to track down her identity? It makes me wonder whether him coming across a cellphone flashing "A calling" was a cruel coincidence and it did not belong to our Khushi at all...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#916

Fabulous.

It is so painful to read about past. He lose all hope of finding her. He even went where she lived before.

Dr. Gupta wear long, is her hands wounded too in that blast?

I didn't like this sadness at all. Make them meet soon.

And on top of it, his letters to jelabi make me cry.😕

But loved this update. Thanks for PM too.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#917

awesome.. Arnav is missing his jalebi too too much.. past was so painful.. he brought munchkin home.. wow.. munchkin and choco will unite them.. what about Khushi? want to have insight in Khushi's thoughts and what she went through and how she landed where she is? loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊