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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#921

Hello :-)friend
Lovely update.
Feels sad for the these lovebirds, what a twist in their love story.
So the long sleeves dresses, humm, so khushi got injured,in the bomb blast that's got conformed.
Loved the update.
Thanks

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#922

Aaaww arnav... U always makes me sad r emotional at end of each updt of dis ff from few days.. :-( :-( :-(

I wonder khushi also write letters still just like arnav...!!
Want to read khushi's pov tooo..

Loved it..

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#923

I was eagerly waiting for this update ridz and Iam very happy to read it
Lovely update
Loved the memories of munchkin - munchkin will definitely recognize dr.gupta - Iam waiting for it to happen

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#924

Finally a glimpse into the past... he had gone to the hostel searching but couldn't get any information and munchkin is the only thing left which is connected to her...

But you haven't revealed anything about our dr.gupta 😕

waiting to read how this story is going to progress. ..

no drama, no emotional atyachaar but this is making me emotional ridz 😭

brilliant story telling skills you have ridz 👏 waiting for the next update

thanks for the pm 😊

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#925

Awesome chapter blue :) They are so close yet so far!! they are opening up to each other :) i wish they got to know each other soon but i know it will happen but on right time:)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#926

I so hope the cats pay a role in uniting them ...

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jasbin

@jasbin

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#927

that was an awesome update

y do i feel that khushi was also thinking of Munchkin

also i think she has kind an idea who is Mr.Raizada

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#928

At last all caught up...

I am only glad that I did not read the Interlude on the day you posted, as I would not have survived the suspense and dhak dhak (for all the wrong reasons) for a week...

But that interlude was a good stepping stone for the new direction ITM is taking... A's POV and his daily letters... full of hope and faith that reminds me of...

Love, Hope, And Faith - by Rusty (Ed) Gibson

We live tomorrow
the dreams of today
Our hopes of the future
gives us faith along the way

Love is the river
of this wakened state
Its never out of time
its never too late

It gives us life
as it flows through our lives
It tears through confusion
loneliness and strife

Love cuts a clear path
through the test of time
You can see where it has been
and watch it unwind

Free as a river
that you can't control
You can't even say
where it might flow

Hope is a power
that cant be taken away
It can pull you through
even the toughest of days

Hope can keep you going
when everything else fails
It keeps you company
on the loneliest of trails

Faith is ever daring
in the face of defeat
It can bring you courage
that nothing can beat

Faith is never doubting
in yourself or your beliefs
Holding on to what you know
when content is just a dream

Faith can give you strength
to face what the future brings
Combined with hope and love
you only need the three of these

Love is like a River
Hope is like a dream
Faith is just believing
with nothing to be seen

So dream of tomorrow
and Love for today
Hope with all your heart
Let Faith show you the way

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: Bakergirl
D importance of 'right moment' is so true for this story!
I loved to hear how Munchikin reached with Arnav...or rather how Arnav met Munchikin...did feel his anguish at losing all visible leads to his JG.

Jus a teeny tiny qtn? I've neva stayed in hostels so I dnt knw...but how come the Warden had no info abt JG...I mean dnt they have records of students who stay in which room..even if prev one passed away...or is it dat d warden didnt want to shell out pvt info to strangers...or maybe years of reading crime fiction has spoiled me rotten😆

Frankly speaking dat banner spooks me everytime it appears...m gonna shut my trap...n let the story unfold...blue may throw any kinda googly at us😉

Hi Baker ji,

Hostel wardens normally don't reveal information unless it's a relative. Or maybe Khushi is/was at that moment, a missing person? So sorry to be a spoil sport.

He did get in touch with Munchkin, I am sure the phone would help him pick up another clue. He found the hostel, right? Right, Blue?

@Bold - 😆, true. Always try to use that as a clue to deduce the tone of the update.

Also, I think v5 ji has a better way of putting things into perspective,

Originally posted by: v5a1s6
Enjoyed the update :)
This update again makes me think how come he could reach her old hostel and yet could not find out her name? He must have taken help from the coordinator/administrator of their penpal thing, right? Or he could even have used her cell phone number to track down her identity? It makes me wonder whether him coming across a cellphone flashing "A calling" was a cruel coincidence and it did not belong to our Khushi at all...

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 9 years ago

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albmum14

@albmum14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#930

Have there been any technical glitches in IF lately?

Where is your pm with the preview of the update for me? 😕

I was the only one to issue a call for Munchkin in my guesses and look at that, he appeared in A's memories. Well, maybe I didn't deserve the full update, but at least half of it?

Yet, I didn't receive anything. I am so hurt, that unlike A, this will leave a scar...🥺

Talking about scars, it seems that he has other scars. From his missions or from the bomb blast? So that "Oh" that Dr. Gupta uttered, when she first read his file, might not have been about his diabetes, but the injuries described in the bomb blast.

How lonely was Jalebi girk; no friends, none to be reminded of her and be able to tell him her name. Just a cat, the only connection between him and her.

How cold is in Hisar? Are they all wearing long sleeve clothes, or just her?

I want to comment further, but this feeling of hurt from the teaser is not letting me.

I will go to a dark place surrounded by sad poems of hurt and betrayal and wait for...some redemption 😉

Edited by albmum14 - 9 years ago