ArHi OS l Things That Go Bump In The Night l A Collab with ArchanaMH17 - Page 3

Originally posted by: limoncello

Bookmarked it! 😃

Originally posted by: scrapbooker

Share the Link pls... Good authors/stories are greatly appreciated.

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

First of all... you had me with that stunning banner! Loved it! 👏

ASR, Khushi, lights, camera, New York... hayeee... What a storyline!

First of all let me thank all of you ladies, or shall I say phankis, for conjuring this brilliant idea together! Totally fun filled with a whole lot of masti... I can feel it and can't believe I missed out on Limon's thread!

Ruchi, my love, do you know how excited I am to see you write once again. My eyes were yearning to read your work, and here we are. What a magnificent way to kick this off. Your elegant way with words, your fashion sense comes flashing through. Tom Ford, nothing but the best for our dear ASR. Your narrative has a way of placing me right in the midst of the crowd. I felt as though I was sitting in one of those chairs below the ramp and watching the show all deck out with my formals. I could feel the breeze passing by, then him stop right in front of me. And what the 😡... how did you come up with that juncture to stop?! Really Shit all? You did this to our Arnav, even if it was only a dream... not done, ya?

Archana, Thank you for waking us up from that nightmare! I took a huge sigh of relief... I loved that Khushi was the one to bring him and us back to reality. Back to her. Because we know, its Arnav and Khushi, Hamesha. How did I even doubt that for a second?! And you kept the essences of both of their characters, Khushi snapped initially to accepting what Arnav had to say. With him making sure she knew it was only her in his life. And at the end her making him laugh... something she always had the power to do.

Thank you ladies for sharing, I am smiling ear to ear with this one! Loved it, and love you both! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: scrapbooker

Aha. Aha

Sadists... that's what you guys are... My heart sank... right past the tip of my toes, almost into oblivion before I could reassure it that this was not the end... could not BE the end. Not cool guys... There I was, in a dreamlike mode, as surely as I later find out that Raizada was... The intro energizing me... the first sentence completely ensnaring me in an unapologetic fangirl haze... The 'haughtily raised left eyebrow' making me almost swoon... ready to go on this ride created by exceptional (ly diabolical) writers... Till I almost crashed and burned... You had me... You had me so good... I still have a sour taste in my mouth, courtesy of the tantrum that my stomach almost threw. I am clammier than Raizada probably was when he woke up.

Fabulously written... I might never forgive you for it but it was fantastic. Loved your take of the Ramp scene ( till you destroyed it.. almost... I was serious about not forgiving you... laughing).

This will Go Bump in the Night for me for a long, long time. Fantastic!

P.S. Unbelievable.

P.P.S... Can I say that I immensely thankful to Archana for putting an end to the nightmare and bringing sanity to a world that spun into madness in a nano second... From that point on I was a like a desperate person... desperate to ensure that the reality was what I thought it should be... The interaction between them was reassuringly normal... Perfect! And her presence in the end... bringing the dream to reality... Priceless! Loved it

Originally posted by: limoncello

@ Bold Red: Err! I'm glad you did! That was not a fun thread...until this OS happened impromptu of course! I feel like I'm eternally stuck in an abyss that is these fan wars. I just can't climb out! And it's kind of become a full-time job for Archana to hold me back from losing it. Not something I'd wish on anybody!

This beautiful and fun piece of work did not belong there! It definitely needed a new, loving home. I'm glad it got it! 😊

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

Fan War?!?! 😲 Arrey then for sure I needed to be there and bring out the lady ASR avatar that I'm known for... Ruchi can vouch for it. Next time you let me know I will run right over... No one messes with my friends! Muahhh! 🤗

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

Fan War?!?! 😲 Arrey then for sure I needed to be there and bring out the lady ASR avatar that I'm known for... Ruchi can vouch for it. Next time you let me know I will run right over... No one messes with my friends! Muahhh! 🤗

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Oh I most certainly can! Limon, those er fans won't know what hit them!