ArHi OS l Things That Go Bump In The Night l A Collab with ArchanaMH17 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: limoncello



Arrey, baap re! Sachi? You, Drool Ji and I will make a fab team then! 😆



Yes, yes... The more the merrier... Umm I didn't mean this bromance( I don't know the sister version of it.. Laughing )... I meant the fan wars... Jalti pe tale dalne ka kaam achcha kar laitain hain hum... Just saying.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Come on over, then! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: limoncello



Can you believe they sprang this on us on Valentine's Day? As if me sulking about the ensuing fan wars and the Contract Marriage Anniversary was not enough!! Sadism at its best, really, I tell ya!


All I can say is that DH is eternally grateful this was not released on Valentine's Day on unsuspecting public. Valentine's Day would never have been the same again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maybe I am not as big a pankhee as I thought I was ... or as big a pankhee as you girls, when I read about NYFW and ASR...I laughed..of course in a good way. Frankly though, I would have never connected the two...so, you girls beat me by leaps and bounds when it comes to fandom :)

Sheetal, ASR and Hamesha ..what!

Of course, it had to be a dream. But it was ASR's dream and Khushi was understanding. She is growing up huh :D

Cute OS. Enjoyed reading, girls :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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This OS was a delight to read.

When I started reading the story, I was like "What the !!". How can you give the Sambhaliya, Hamesha Sambhalthi rahoongi dialogue to Sheetal. 😒

And Sheetal is Arnav's wife. 😲

No, No what is happening !!!! 😲

And sigh, I took a deep breath of relief to know that it was a dream, sorry a nightmare. 😃

What did Khushi do with the picture finally? Burn it and flush the ashes down the toilet. 😉😆

Ruchi and Archana, enjoyed reading the OS.👏

I hope you girls write more and more.


Edited by canapoem - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlueMystique



You two are so cute...thinking you got me with that post-hanger. Well, joke's on you cause I knew! Of course it was going to be a nightmare. Not only on IF, there is no world in which Arnav would marry Sheetal. Sheetal, of all people. Maybe if you had said Lavanya, I would have believed you :P

Valiant effort, nonetheless. 😛

Other than that, what can I say but that I enjoyed it immensely, especially the banter in the latter part. I love the attention to detail you pay, Ruchi. You build an image in front of my eyes, and I always enjoy that about your writing. And Archana, I love the simple effectiveness in yours. All in all, makes for a brilliant pairing.


Are you showing off Blue? I mean that is not at all attractive and very spirit-dampening to those who are not as smart... And I am NOT talking about myself here.

Other than that minor disagreement, we are in full accord. Loved Ruchi's build up (now that I think of it...YOU are a prankster as well... aren't ya 'Return To Sender'?... Guess it takes one to know one)... and loved Archana's interpretation of their reality. And my favorite part of their reality... He knew then, what Khushi had meant by her query regarding his wishful thinking. Unquote. Sweet!

And last but not the least...

The cameras had not captured a laughing Arnav Singh Raizada ever before.

Yep I fell in love there...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aha. Aha

Sadists... that's what you guys are... My heart sank... right past the tip of my toes, almost into oblivion before I could reassure it that this was not the end... could not BE the end. Not cool guys... There I was, in a dreamlike mode, as surely as I later find out that Raizada was... The intro energizing me... the first sentence completely ensnaring me in an unapologetic fangirl haze... The 'haughtily raised left eyebrow' making me almost swoon... ready to go on this ride created by exceptional (ly diabolical) writers... Till I almost crashed and burned... You had me... You had me so good... I still have a sour taste in my mouth, courtesy of the tantrum that my stomach almost threw. I am clammier than Raizada probably was when he woke up.

Fabulously written... I might never forgive you for it but it was fantastic. Loved your take of the Ramp scene ( till you destroyed it.. almost... I was serious about not forgiving you... laughing).

This will Go Bump in the Night for me for a long, long time. Fantastic!

P.S. Unbelievable.

P.P.S... Can I say that I immensely thankful to Archana for putting an end to the nightmare and bringing sanity to a world that spun into madness in a nano second... From that point on I was a like a desperate person... desperate to ensure that the reality was what I thought it should be... The interaction between them was reassuringly normal... Perfect! And her presence in the end... bringing the dream to reality... Priceless! Loved it.

P.P.P.S... Archana do you have more stories? Pls pardon my ignorance. I would appreciate a link if you have and index or stories. Thx

Hello.
It may or may not have a tacky name.😆
And, thank you for such a kind comment. Will respond to all later. Have to rush. Shouldn't even be online right now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was definitely a nightmare when Shit-All said she and Arnav were married! You had me there. Archana, thank you for the "real end". My heart almost stopped at the nightmarish end by Ruchi and was about to shout a dramatic "Nahiii" 😆
Overall, it was fun reading the OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pehle kyu nahi bataya 😆 will be back after reading it 😛

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