ArHi OS l Things That Go Bump In The Night l A Collab with ArchanaMH17

Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello dear readers, a few words as to how this OS came about before you, hopefully, delve in :)


T'was the night before the beginning of New York fashion week. And much was silent on IF, other than a few rumblings about IPK Season 2. A few of us were indulging in hushed, whispered conversations about its likelihood, when cherrybloom1 said NYFW reminded her of ASR ... a perfectly logical word association for us die hard pankhis. This, of course, got us all hyperventilating about the sheer beauty of Mr Raizada's chiselled planes and I succumbed to the compelling need to jot something down about it. So outraged was Archana by my "sadistic" effort, that she thankfully "neutralised" it with great aplomb. Our cheerleader in chief through it all was limoncello, merrily egging us on. All complaints of inanity and what_the may therefore be directed at her ;)


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ASR stepped out on the ramp sheathed in his signature Tom Ford. A haughtily raised left eyebrow the only visible sign of acknowledgement of the accolades raining down on him from all sides. The calls of Bravo' and the sound of whistles echoed all around as he sauntered forward, flanked by models draped in his consummately impeccable designs.



The room at MOMA was a smoldering cauldron of competitors, full of envy at this so called arriviste, and of fashionistas, worshipping at the altar of his genius. Well, his drop dead, Greek God looks weren't exactly a hindrance either.



Deliberately keeping his eyes straight ahead, he continued towards the centre of the hall, ignoring the clamour of the photographers asking him to look their way. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a gentle gust swirled around him brushing his immaculately coiffed hair forward. Raising an arm to brush the errant fringe back, he felt a strange sensation prickle at him, compelling him to glance towards his left. He felt his heart skip a beat as his molten caramel orbs fell upon an ethereal beauty looking up at him with limpid pools of hazel.



The din of the room receded into the distance as he stared at the exquisite vision in red. The only sound audible to him was the erratic thundering of his heartbeat. His entranced gaze lingered helplessly on a porcelain perfect visage framed by rebellious soft tendrils of hair that had escaped a severe updo.



A hesitant smile made it's way to her face as she shifted self consciously under his intense scrutiny, causing him to miss a step and stumble forward. He felt someone grasp his hand just in the nick of time, preventing him from tumbling straight into the lap of the very beauty who had bewitched him so instantaneously.


"Thanks ... er ..." He said huskily, momentarily at a loss to remember who was next to him or even where he was. His entire being intently focused on the mysterious beauty in front.



"Sheetal, ASR ... it's Sheetal".



In an instant, reality came crashing back as he looked down blankly at the hand holding his own. The light reflecting from the matching circle of stones on their fingers winking up at him mockingly.



"Sambhal liya" He murmured looking up at her bleakly. Sheetal ... his asli duniya ... his reality.



"Hamesha sambhalti rahungi ... aakhir ... biwi hoon tumhari ... haq hai mera ... tumpar." She replied triumphantly, neatly placing herself between him and ... his sapnon ki duniya.



Or was it?! Read on ...


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The loud ring of a phone startled Arnav Singh Raizada awake. He looked around taking a moment to reorient himself to his surroundings. He was looking out the floor to ceiling windows of his suite at The Plaza in New York. The sun had set & the skyline twinkled with the lights from the tall buildings. He searched for the source of the sound & found his phone wedged in the corner of the couch he was seated on. His wife's voice came through, irritation & panic obvious in it.



"What took you so long to answer the call! I had decided to call Aman if you hadn't answered now. I called you thrice, Arnav. You can't begin to imagine the worst case scenarios that had started playing out in my head!" she said, getting more worked up with each word.



"Khushi- Ouch." he clutched his neck in pain. Damn. He had dozed off in an awkward position.



"What happened now?" she asked, sounding even more panicked than before.



"I had dozed off." Arnav grumbled, placing the designs file he had been holding, on the glass topped coffee table.



"Why the ouch?" she asked sounding bewildered.



"Had a god awful nightmare about Sheetal. And, my neck is hurting." he said, as he tried to massage the knots out of the muscles of his neck.



"You dreamed about Sheetal!" Khushi asked, disbelief & exasperation, evident in her voice.



"I said, nightmare." he sighed.



"What happened in the nightmare?" she asked, slightly mollified, sounding reluctantly curious.



"Something. Doesn't matter. But we are never arguing about anyone while on different continents. I can't shut you up & the dreams that follow are awful." he said, groaning as he stretched his stiff legs.



"What happened in the nightmare?" Khushi pressed on.



Arnav sighed. Khushi was nothing if not persistent. And, curious, too. She wouldn't let it go.



"I am walking the ramp at the New York Fashion Week. I look at a woman in the front row. She is stunning. Has the most gorgeous pair of eyes I have ever seen." he said & chuckled at the sharp intake of breath on the other side. She was getting worked up.



"The eyes are hazel." he says & she lets out a relieved, sheepish laugh that does things to him. Ah, business trips were hell!
"So, I don't really know you but I almost trip & fall looking at your face among the audience at the fashion show." he said, blandly.



"That is amazingly flattering, Raizada. But I still don't see how
Sheetal figures in this & how this can be a nightmare." she said, delight ringing clear in her voice.



"Sheetal comes out of nowhere, keeps me from tripping on my own foot & falling." he said.



"I hate this story. I am supposed to be your knight in shining armour, so to say. The whole trip, fall, catch routine is ours!" said Khushi, huffing in mock outrage & making him smile.



"Well, it gets worse. She tells me she & I are married." he said &
then, waited for the volcano to erupt.

And, it didn't.



Arnav wondered if it had really gotten to her so bad that she had been stunned into silence. That seemed unlikely. Khushi had a penchant for hyperbole but she was reasonable. Mostly.
"Khushi?" he called her name & heard her exhale.



"Was that your wishful thinking at play?" she asked. And, surprisingly enough, she sounded only thoughtful, & not ready to rant at him. But her question itself was infuriatingly absurd & he told her as much.



"Don't be absurd. At least, not when I can't shake some sense into you. Throw the damned photo you found. Burn it. Flush it. I don't care. Just stop obsessing over people who don't matter." he snapped, his patience at an end.



Khushi had found a picture of his with Sheetal from their time in Harvard among his old belongings that she had been cleaning out for the renovation that Shantivan was supposed to have. And, she had been giving him hell for keeping it with him, ever since. He had been trying to explain to her that it had just slipped his mind & that the photo was one of the things that he didn't even really know was there from all the things he had brought back from the States after B-School. She hadn't really been in the mood to listen.



Well, he didn't say she was reasonable all the time. Moreover, Sheetal was a sore spot. Khushi was touchy about the subject still. And, Arnav had therefore, tried very hard to be patient. But he hated it when they fought. The bantering, when she would take his bait & give it back to him as good as she got, was fun. And, hot. It was their foreplay. But an actual fight was anything but.



"Hmmm. Ok." Khushi said. Arnav didn't know what to make of that subdued response that was so uncharacteristic of Khushi.



"That's it? We're done with the issue? Just like that?" he asked.



"Yeah. Just don't ask me what happened to the photo." she said. That made him smile.



And then, Khushi was back to talking nineteen to the dozen & Arnav fell back into their normalcy, forgetting the about turn she had made.



The next day, when the fashion show did happen, he walked the ramp, to a huge round of applause. And, it was a deja vu moment. There sat the woman who owned him, through & through, in the front row smiling up at him. And, he was lost in those hazel depths, until she winked at him & pointed at his feet, silently telling him to not miss a step & fall, face first. He knew then, what Khushi had meant by her query regarding his wishful thinking.



Arnav shook his head. Wishful thinking to an unsaid wish fulfilled. She had made the sweet professional success a tad bit
sweeter by just being there.



The cameras had not captured a laughing Arnav Singh Raizada ever before.



...And, the real end.

-Co-Author's Note-

I have no idea what Ruchi & I were thinking when we wrote this but when we did, 2weeks back, it was awesome fun.
Limon-Thank you for that thread which gave way to this piece.
Ruchi- I am so sorry that I am an appallingly lazy co-writer who took 2 whole weeks just to edit.
To everyone, let us know what you think if you have time. Ignore the typos if small. Bring to my notice if you find any major ones.
Edited by archana.mh17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all... you had me with that stunning banner! Loved it! 👏

ASR, Khushi, lights, camera, New York... hayeee... What a storyline!



First of all let me thank all of you ladies, or shall I say phankis, for conjuring this brilliant idea together! Totally fun filled with a whole lot of masti... I can feel it and can't believe I missed out on Limon's thread!


Ruchi, my love, do you know how excited I am to see you write once again. My eyes were yearning to read your work, and here we are. What a magnificent way to kick this off. Your elegant way with words, your fashion sense comes flashing through. Tom Ford, nothing but the best for our dear ASR. Your narrative has a way of placing me right in the midst of the crowd. I felt as though I was sitting in one of those chairs below the ramp and watching the show all deck out with my formals. I could feel the breeze passing by, then him stop right in front of me. And what the 😡... how did you come up with that juncture to stop?! Really Shit all? You did this to our Arnav, even if it was only a dream... not done, ya?


Archana, Thank you for waking us up from that nightmare! I took a huge sigh of relief... I loved that Khushi was the one to bring him and us back to reality. Back to her. Because we know, its Arnav and Khushi, Hamesha. How did I even doubt that for a second?! And you kept the essences of both of their characters, Khushi snapped initially to accepting what Arnav had to say. With him making sure she knew it was only her in his life. And at the end her making him laugh... something she always had the power to do.


Thank you ladies for sharing, I am smiling ear to ear with this one! Loved it, and love you both! ❤️ 🤗

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayee.. Your OS made your readers as well as the 'hamesha' couple smile! Is there anything that is better than drabbling this couple's love story? And it is even better when we are introduced to writers (new and old) ... the story slips into eternity.

Loved it Ruchi and Archana... Beautiful little peek into ASR and his Jaan's life post marriage. Things that make you go 'Rabba Ve'... Hamesha

❤️

--M


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Ruchi...Archu...🤗

Am I dreaming too...
Aaap...donooo...ek saaath...
Koi hamey chuuti kaato!
Yahaan toh AD mein dil baag baag ho gaya...iss liye AD mein rehna hi accha hai...

Ruchi...
You naughty naughty girl...you gave me a heart attack...what a nightmare!
But of course it has to be a dream...because in AK's AD, Khushi girti hai aur Arnav sambhalta hai...Hamesha!
And how fabulously you write dear...I can actually 'see' the whole scene...very eloquent...
Please keep writing...

Archu...
You saved my life by timely CPR 😉
What a cute relationship you bring out between them by few simple words darling...
I can never get tired of reading the AK banter you write...its so much fun!

Awesomely written...loved it...enjoyed it...

Thank you so much for putting this up...Looking forward for more...because, I didn't buy the both 'ends'!




Edited by -MIMOSA- - 9 years ago
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Aha. Aha
Sadists... that's what you guys are... My heart sank... right past the tip of my toes, almost into oblivion before I could reassure it that this was not the end... could not BE the end. Not cool guys... There I was, in a dreamlike mode, as surely as I later find out that Raizada was... The intro energizing me... the first sentence completely ensnaring me in an unapologetic fangirl haze... The 'haughtily raised left eyebrow' making me almost swoon... ready to go on this ride created by exceptional (ly diabolical) writers... Till I almost crashed and burned... You had me... You had me so good... I still have a sour taste in my mouth, courtesy of the tantrum that my stomach almost threw. I am clammier than Raizada probably was when he woke up.

Fabulously written... I might never forgive you for it but it was fantastic. Loved your take of the Ramp scene ( till you destroyed it.. almost... I was serious about not forgiving you... laughing).

This will Go Bump in the Night for me for a long, long time. Fantastic!

P.S. Unbelievable.

P.P.S... Can I say that I immensely thankful to Archana for putting an end to the nightmare and bringing sanity to a world that spun into madness in a nano second... From that point on I was a like a desperate person... desperate to ensure that the reality was what I thought it should be... The interaction between them was reassuringly normal... Perfect! And her presence in the end... bringing the dream to reality... Priceless! Loved it.

P.P.P.S... Archana do you have more stories? Pls pardon my ignorance. I would appreciate a link if you have and index or stories. Thx
Edited by scrapbooker - 9 years ago
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Ruchiii! <3 <3 I loved this story! Loved the chance to think about the first episode once again (and the excuse to start watching the show one more time, because once your start watching it, you HAVE to finish watching it ;))

1. Absolutely love the attention you pay to small details. For instance, when you described how Arnav saw Khushi's hazel eyes in the audience...bas that description just blew my mind!

2. That plot-twist! Why, why did you have to ruin my fantasy?! There I was, imagining Khushi in red and Arnav in black and that gentle gust of wind and Rabba Ve's and raised eyebrows...until in came Shit-al. WITH THE MATCHING CIRCLE OF STONES! What the! And then she says, biwi hoon tumhari, haq hai mera...not cool, Ruchi, not cool!



3. IT WAS A NIGHTMARE.

4. THANK YOU DEVI MAIYYA.

5. Arnav's sprained his neck, again! Made me think of that episode on the show when he had a sprained neck! He'd looked so cute with his head tilted to the side!

6. I really liked how Arnav tripped and almost fell! Made for a nice change lol. Also really like the idea of Khushi being his knight in shining armor! Why should boys have all the fun? Let Khushi catch Arnav for a change, and then tell him, na tumhari shakal dekhni hai, na tumse baat karni hai! XD

7. Awww such a cute ending!

Archana, I have read all your previous work...silently (yesss I am a terrible person)! And I am a huge fan of the cute stories you come up with, and your characterizations of Arnav and Khushi. It was so lovely reading the part you wrote here ...absolutely love your brisk and witty writing :)


Edited by ...ASB100... - 9 years ago
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You two are so cute...thinking you got me with that post-hanger. Well, joke's on you cause I knew! Of course it was going to be a nightmare. Not only on IF, there is no world in which Arnav would marry Sheetal. Sheetal, of all people. Maybe if you had said Lavanya, I would have believed you :P

Valiant effort, nonetheless. 😛

Other than that, what can I say but that I enjoyed it immensely, especially the banter in the latter part. I love the attention to detail you pay, Ruchi. You build an image in front of my eyes, and I always enjoy that about your writing. And Archana, I love the simple effectiveness in yours. All in all, makes for a brilliant pairing.
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Ruchi, I could have strangled you when I read that Sheetal was the one who 'sambhaloed' Arnav.
Thankfully, it was a nightmare.
You can't imagine how much I hate Sheetal.
Can't stand the name too now.😆

Awww. Love the cute fights between Khushi and Arnav.
And the making up too!😉
She was there for him and he stumbled on the ramp when he saw her!
That one instant made my heart beat faster.
You almost gave me tachycardia! Hehe! 😆

Really enjoyed reading this fun story.
Kudos to you both for writing it.
Thanks a lot ladies, for bringing back memories of those fun times when Indian soaps were worth watching!
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Ruchi & Archana,

Interesting story...certainly shocked me to the eyeballs Ruchi, where you stopped your section of it! Uff! The anxiety would kill if nothing else...a fun recreation of the ramp scene, but Sheetal...truly what the! And my dear friend Limoncello egging you on to write this one...Sin, will have a few words with you about this for sure! Next time, let's inspire Ruchi and Archana to do a bit more romantic wala story...minus Sheetal and Shyam and Dadi if you please.Lakshmi ji is allowed. And even bhootiful Manorma mami, but otherwise only Arnav and Khushi hamesha...haha...


Ok, I digress...super story. Thank you for making A and K realize what they mean to each other. and seriously, hope they do not need to provoke each other with Sheetal for foreplay...yeh aurat kahani se aa jaatee hai baar baar...holy nightmare...holy tamollee...wagaira wagaira...the mind boggles...this cannot be our sunshine couple...who are like dhoop and chandini raat respectively! Kyaa se kyaa ho gaya and all that...🤪

Here's hoping we have more fun drabbles where that came from!

Hugs,

Anu





Edited by Anu567 - 9 years ago

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