Divinity of thy Arms (chapter 4 updated) 19/9 page 38 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Sadh123

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Okay we delve into Arnav's past here. I assume it is Arnav though. So Arnav's dad has left him? Now why are dads so mean and callous? I can't understand. They are selfish too or has Arnav's dad died or something?

How did Arnav's mom die? Oh the starting was so adorable. The bond of mother and child can never be justified with mere words but you did it warda and I am giving you full brownie points for that.

Oh it is natural for every child to feel this way when their mother's leave. And the Autumn leaves falling and Arnav's thought on this has stumped me speechless. Clearly, a kid like him shouldn't have been exposed to such harsh reality and I think seeing his mom die and not realising it is just the first Ray of harshness. Don't give him more lady.

The kid doesn't even realise. How bad is that? I seriously can't believe it. Is there no one at all to help him? And who is "mistress of his mother"? Where was she working? So his mother always wanted to die since I remember her initial wisdom statement. But I don't call it wisdom, it is foolishness or selfishness to let one's kid suffer while we go away to put an end to our torments. In that case you shouldn't have given birth to a child!

This was an equally hooking update and I am looking forward to the next. By the way, so this is the title Autumn Winds. In this page only you posted the king story na? See how much that story has seeped into my heart.

P.S: I have a question. Is Arnav's encounter with the Khushi happening in the present or is it also past? Sorry I got a little confused here.

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-

Yes baby, Khushi is a mystery which ASR will be solving, haina?

Oh god. This Arnav is so rude, he better make up for his foul mouth in upcoming chapters. 😆

I love this Khushi, she has explanations to every other thing in this world. Witty and intelligent, too good for this arrogant ASR.

Whut? He likes Payal lol, haha. Well, he would not know what's going to hit him, right?

Chapter three was really painful to read. My heart felt really heavier when his mother died. I wonder what happened to her. Poor him, he was only 5. I am so sad 😔

I was right on time it seems. I get to read the third chapter, well and ready.

Waiting for more.

Love

J

Originally posted by: shalbi

I really feel like crying right now.. How much has the child gone through.. How much has arnav suffered in his days.. The child who doesn't even know what death is, will be facing the death of the sole person who he loves and wishes to be by his side..

if its just the bigining, what else he has to go through

Originally posted by: kimnana

emotional update ...to loose someone close to ur heart is very painful

arnav ur attitude towards khushi ...in future u will have to fix it for sure ..

soon she will be ur favorite hello n hardest goodbye ...khushi u spread khushi everywhere

thanx for pm.

Originally posted by: vijayalaxmib

Heartfelt update.. I assumed here you written abt arnav's childhood.. The 5 year old kid lost his mother wen he even dont know the meaning of death.. Felt so emotional while reading how he used cloths to clean blood and sat in front of his mother with the hope that she ll woke up once her sleep his over and how he kept half food for her.. Who is the mistress of his mother..? Is kid's father soldier? How hurt kid's mother.. Y was she covered with blood.. Waiting for next.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Chapter 1

Sorry for the late comment sweetie, but can you forgive your poor devil na right! 😈😉 (Look at me buttering you up 😆😉)

I loved the way you portrayed the first scenario warda, the breeze, hill station, birds chirping with the early sunrise and peacefullness. I love hill stations to the core and to breath in the air filled with natural beauty! My wish has always been to find a house at the top of a hill, to look at the sunrise from the hill and to sit at night wrapped in a blanket infront of the hearth.

Such an earthly wish! 😉 So i really felt connected with Khushi's character here, she enjoys nature too! 😉 But the question that rouse in my mind after reading the chapter was that is she as much complicated as she displays but i think that she is not complex at all, she is only hiding the real her behind reasoning.

Her heart is like an iron cage and inside it is the reflection of the man who must have hurt her somehow in the past and i think that it was Arnav who must have hurt her or maybe she misunderstood. Her crazy love for him must have cost her, her father's life and now she is wallowing in self-guilt and atoning for her sins. Her love for religion is bordering on obsession, she is driving herself too hard, closing herself on the world.

Religion doesn't tell you to lose hope, to become anti-social for the love of paradise. But she is doing all that. At one hand she hopes for the paradise that is good, but she is losing hope for her own self. It's really bitter the way she has lost hope from the world. Hurt and betrayal can make you lose all hope from the world and in a way i can understand her dilemma, even many times i thought of that when i was hurt or betrayed by my surrounding people!

All in all it was truly a beautifully woven web of complex emotions and beautiful characterisations dear! 👏👏 Will be commenting on other chapters too very soon! 😉

Originally posted by: Linsie

1.

your writing is deep for me...

but it took me sometime to understand...

Little confuse... i thought it was payal... doing the prayer...

but later it is khushi .. i guess...

wow.. you write so good...

the deep meaning... for the words...

lovely... damm you are a good writer...

love the explanation about the paradise on earth...

she sound more like ... that hope to find paradise on earth
is still there..

but chance of getting is very slim...

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Sorry for the late response dear.

I love this Khushi...She is Witty and intelligent...Payal looks like a good friend to Khushi. So, Arnav is totally opposite to Khushi. OMG...he likes Payal😉

Part three is very painful...I am glad that you revealed Arnav's past. Life is so unfair...I cried for the 5yrs old boy.

Great work Warda.

Originally posted by: pup03

Wonderful updates.. loved both chapter 2 & 3.. ARSHI meet was superb.. Arnav behaved so cold with Khushi as he was attracted to her and just wanted to show her he is not affected by her.. well seems he failed.. however Khushi was sweet.. however chapter 3 was very sad.. Arnav's childhood.. his mother died and he didn't even got to know as how a child can differentiate between death and his sleeping mother.. loved the updates..

thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: NASAKE

Omg I have no words to say, it is heart wrenching, I cried for our little arnav who took d emberac in his dead mother arms...

I love d way u express d life philosophy in this story.

Thx for pm n plz continue soon.