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ashnitaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

You made me sad with this update.

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Brilliant update
i loved it
thanks for pm
plz continue soon

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arshi_sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Lovely update.. Thanks for the pm

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Param

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Wonderful updates.. loved both chapter 2 & 3.. ARSHI meet was superb.. Arnav behaved so cold with Khushi as he was attracted to her and just wanted to show her he is not affected by her.. well seems he failed.. however Khushi was sweet.. however chapter 3 was very sad.. Arnav's childhood.. his mother died and he didn't even got to know as how a child can differentiate between death and his sleeping mother.. loved the updates..

thanks for pm 😊

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Bhuvana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Omg I have no words to say, it is heart wrenching, I cried for our little arnav who took d emberac in his dead mother arms...

I love d way u express d life philosophy in this story.

Thx for pm n plz continue soon.

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Sydell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Lovely update I don't have words to say.

Wards its really awesome .

Its so beautifully explained the autumn and Arnav's thoughts .

The mother and son bonding was indeed a good thing to read and feel.

You are truly an awesome writer .

You depicted the true feelings of how when a child's mother leaves them it really feels hurt and sad .

I am really a fan of your work.

I truly mean it .

Just waiting for a Arshi scene.please continue soon

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Sydell

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Protective Payal

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Sorry for the late comment

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momoahmd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

woww...

its such a beautiful and enthralling story...

very well written...

my heart went out for poor arnav...and khushi...I just loved her character...

now can't wait to read more...

plzzz continue sooon...

thanks a lot for pm !

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

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SwrlngElephants

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.
Wow Warda! Great work yaar!
I'm already loving this!
First part was just Beautifully written! Your way of description about nature, infact each and every detail in that update is like wow!
I didn't understand that update completely bcoz there are many things which i don't know! But i'm trying to know now!
I love this Khushi! She is some one to be admired! She was at fault once and now whatever she is doing about it now is admirable!
Payal looks like a good friend to Khushi!
Second update shocked me a bit! Seeing how things were intense in the first update, i didn't expect next one to be like this! But i really LOVED it!
So ASR here is like completely opposite to Khushi!
Now I can relate this to our original IPK! I mean that change of ideologies ArShi always had and even this attraction thing!
This is really good! I'm already excited for this journey!
Complex Arnav? Ummm...wonder why? Maybe something related to his dad!
Good one Warda 😊

Nishu your comments always leave me smiling. A lot.

You would gradually understand everything. Yes Khushi has learned a lot from the blunders she made but she still has to learn and understand many things. The process of learning never stops you see till our last breath.

That she is a very good friend cum sister to Khushi.

Completely opposite. There is no similarity between them not even one. In the drama they had the similarity of loving their sisters dearly. Arnav has no sister here for now. At least not biological.

yes you got that right. Something related to his dad made him become like this.

Thanks, love.😳