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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Arnav n his mom bond was adorable its really cruel to happen something like this to a 5 year old child
Aeesome update

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Chapter 1

Sorry for the late comment sweetie, but can you forgive your poor devil na right! 😈😉 (Look at me buttering you up 😆😉)

I loved the way you portrayed the first scenario warda, the breeze, hill station, birds chirping with the early sunrise and peacefullness. I love hill stations to the core and to breath in the air filled with natural beauty! My wish has always been to find a house at the top of a hill, to look at the sunrise from the hill and to sit at night wrapped in a blanket infront of the hearth.

Such an earthly wish! 😉 So i really felt connected with Khushi's character here, she enjoys nature too! 😉 But the question that rouse in my mind after reading the chapter was that is she as much complicated as she displays but i think that she is not complex at all, she is only hiding the real her behind reasoning.

Her heart is like an iron cage and inside it is the reflection of the man who must have hurt her somehow in the past and i think that it was Arnav who must have hurt her or maybe she misunderstood. Her crazy love for him must have cost her, her father's life and now she is wallowing in self-guilt and atoning for her sins. Her love for religion is bordering on obsession, she is driving herself too hard, closing herself on the world.

Religion doesn't tell you to lose hope, to become anti-social for the love of paradise. But she is doing all that. At one hand she hopes for the paradise that is good, but she is losing hope for her own self. It's really bitter the way she has lost hope from the world. Hurt and betrayal can make you lose all hope from the world and in a way i can understand her dilemma, even many times i thought of that when i was hurt or betrayed by my surrounding people!

All in all it was truly a beautifully woven web of complex emotions and beautiful characterisations dear! 👏👏 Will be commenting on other chapters too very soon! 😉

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Nice update warda
Very emotional one
Continue soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Read all the chapters in a one go.

U get me hooked to ur stories. Can't wait to read further. Love love love ur stories.

Thanks for the pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

1.

your writing is deep for me...

but it took me sometime to understand...

Little confuse... i thought it was payal... doing the prayer...

but later it is khushi .. i guess...

wow.. you write so good...

the deep meaning... for the words...

lovely... damm you are a good writer...

love the explanation about the paradise on earth...

she sound more like ... that hope to find paradise on earth
is still there..

but chance of getting is very slim...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Dont get discourage with the number likes and comments you get...

your story stand better then you think...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

2..

So arnav dont believe in religion
he did feel something strong for her...
but deny...

Khushi soft and puzzle for him...she did not fake
like the ones he mingle with...

payal more open then khushi i guess...

overall is a nice update...

very interesting meet

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

3..

Sad.. well written...
something i cant imagine 5 year old doing
hugging is dead mom...

Emotional...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Sorry for the late response dear.

I love this Khushi...She is Witty and intelligent...Payal looks like a good friend to Khushi. So, Arnav is totally opposite to Khushi. OMG...he likes Payal😉

Part three is very painful...I am glad that you revealed Arnav's past. Life is so unfair...I cried for the 5yrs old boy.

Great work Warda.