ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED* - Page 3

Originally posted by: Arshi67

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">J, an intriguing start. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">You've conveyed the sense of urgency and danger so well. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">A mother's helplessness, a wife's unwavering belief in her husband, a lover's longing for the beloved. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Waiting for more :)</font>

Thanks Ruchi behen I hope I do not disappoint you with the concluding part.

Originally posted by: barsha_dash

The first part is very interesting. But there are a lot of questions which I hope will be answered in the second part. Why is Khushi's father termed traitor? Is her brother dead?
Arnav's entry was amazing.
Nannav Miyaan and khushi biwi are such adorable names
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
I am so glad that your brain fries even in sleep as we get to read amazing stories like this.😆

Thanks yaara. Yes everything will be sorted out in next part. Yes of course it keeps frying when I'm asleep.

Originally posted by: -Awaari-

The whole backdrop of this story kinda reminded me of this movie called "Fiza" feat. Hrithik Roshan & Karishma Kapoor

Where every peace in the family gets lost in the blink of an eye.

Majority of us live in a shell..that is an epitome of peace and security.

We just don't realize the value of it

The way you have put in every word is absolutely expressing the kind of unrest each individual is facing...even Arnav!

ps.I m pretty nerved to be left at such a hangover 😒

omg yes I still remember Hrithik's amazing performance in that movie. Yes I totally agree with you. We live in peaceful places and we lack the understanding of such situations which literally happens to millions of people. I don't know why but I guess my mind was extremely upset about something that night. Might be the reason behind this nightmare. Thanks for reading. Your comment just put a smile on my face.

Hey i just luv the concept, continue soon...

It's a beautiful story!! Sure you wil be adding a bit of flashbacks! Miyan n biwi!! So cute but poor souls were separated!
Plz post ASAP !!
PS: thought ur nightmares r resulting into stories like this, it's a treat for me!! But Apne uper thoda reham Karo aur khud me Saath mind ko bhi done ko bolo!!;)

I loved the update but I am a little confused. Did Arnav not recognize Khushi earlier when he called her as traitor or terrorist's daughter and then suddenly he becomes a person who is craving for his childhood love.. And becomes all soft on Khushi.. Please clear my confusion...
Looking forward to the next update

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-

omg yes I still remember Hrithik's amazing performance in that movie. Yes I totally agree with you. We live in peaceful places and we lack the understanding of such situations which literally happens to millions of people. I don't know why but I guess my mind was extremely upset about something that night. Might be the reason behind this nightmare. Thanks for reading. Your comment just put a smile on my face.

Now.this is something to read

intersting first part
Arnav entry was awesome...
Nannav Miyaan and khushi biwi are such
cute names
Eagerly waiting for the next update...

awesome dear