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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very beautiful inue soon.concept dear, liked it a lot. Its new and different, please cont
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
First, what was that? You get such nightmares, Poor you, even I'm scared thinking about it. 😃
Hope that these nightmares don't scare you more. 😊 But, one way it's good too, isn't it?
Here, we get a story about it. 😉
The fear of each member was so well potrayed.
The cold weather, the people following with the guns and them running to save themselves and the family, it all felt so real.
So, who is the traitor? Is it Sana's husband?
Is he really a traitor or was framed?
Khushi seems strong here trying to get the family out of mess even if she is scared trying not to show it.
Arnav, why was he so ruthless towards Khushi at first?
Then he helped them escape.
Biwi, why was Arnav calling her that?
So many questions here, hope to be answered soon.
That was great beginning.
P.S. Hope your keypad gets well soon. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Very nice story liked it a lot
Btw where r they?
N what's the reason that they r being followed?
N who r those men?
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: bhaktiii

It's a beautiful story!! Sure you wil be adding a bit of flashbacks! Miyan n biwi!! So cute but poor souls were separated!
Plz post ASAP !!
PS: thought ur nightmares r resulting into stories like this, it's a treat for me!! But Apne uper thoda reham Karo aur khud me Saath mind ko bhi done ko bolo!!;)

Yes there would be flashbacks. Kash mera dimag meri suntaa 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ina_saahil

I loved the update but I am a little confused. Did Arnav not recognize Khushi earlier when he called her as traitor or terrorist's daughter and then suddenly he becomes a person who is craving for his childhood love.. And becomes all soft on Khushi.. Please clear my confusion...
Looking forward to the next update

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<div>Lots of Love..😊😊

They have met after a decade as I mentioned. So its quite natural to not to recognize each other. He recalls everything when Khushi's Ammi mentions it. I hope this clears your confusion. Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: bs1224

Now.this is something to read

Amazing one
A daughter of a terrorist and being trapped by the armed man
And then like a white Knight they meet arnav
And he happened to be khushi's childhood friend
And their conversation was something to behold
Sweet..and promising
Wondering why arnav left before in their childhood
Thanks for pm
Well written👏
Update soon

Thanks a lot for reading. Everything will be cleared in next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -Awaari-


I have a friend who's practically resided in such circumstances almost throughout his life.
The Imagery he recalls is terrifying indeed.

Ohh that's sad
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

First, what was that? You get such nightmares, Poor you, even I'm scared thinking about it. 😃
Hope that these nightmares don't scare you more. 😊 But, one way it's good too, isn't it?
Here, we get a story about it. 😉
The fear of each member was so well potrayed.
The cold weather, the people following with the guns and them running to save themselves and the family, it all felt so real.
So, who is the traitor? Is it Sana's husband?
Is he really a traitor or was framed?
Khushi seems strong here trying to get the family out of mess even if she is scared trying not to show it.
Arnav, why was he so ruthless towards Khushi at first?
Then he helped them escape.
Biwi, why was Arnav calling her that?
So many questions here, hope to be answered soon.
That was great beginning.
P.S. Hope your keypad gets well soon. 😃

I know right. I was literally in tears that night. Miss B I am super glad that you liked the first part. He was ruthless because he didn't recognize her in the first place until her Ammi mentions it. Yes I hope so too to get my keypad back n healthy lol
Friedriceji thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: meera_beladiya

Very nice story liked it a lot

Btw where r they?
N what's the reason that they r being followed?
N who r those men?
Continue soon

Everything will be cleared in next part Thanks for reading 😳
Friedriceji thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

First, what was that? You get such nightmares, Poor you, even I'm scared thinking about it. 😃
Hope that these nightmares don't scare you more. 😊 But, one way it's good too, isn't it?
Here, we get a story about it. 😉
The fear of each member was so well potrayed.
The cold weather, the people following with the guns and them running to save themselves and the family, it all felt so real.
So, who is the traitor? Is it Sana's husband?
Is he really a traitor or was framed?
Khushi seems strong here trying to get the family out of mess even if she is scared trying not to show it.
Arnav, why was he so ruthless towards Khushi at first?
Then he helped them escape.
Biwi, why was Arnav calling her that?
So many questions here, hope to be answered soon.
That was great beginning.
P.S. Hope your keypad gets well soon. 😃

I know right. I was literally in tears that night. Miss B I am super glad that you liked the first part. He was ruthless because he didn't recognize her in the first place until her Ammi mentions it. Yes I hope so too to get my keypad back n healthy lol

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