ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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Hello everyone!
Surprise lol

So, this is a new two shot that I had penned almost 2 months ago. Actually, this was one of those terrible nightmares of mine 😆
Yes, I am kind of torturing you with these imagnitions of my unconscious mind. I have wrote this with few changes, the real nightmare was a tragedy. I dont know why I get such weird dreams/nightmares. Seems like my mind loves to fry even when the friedrice is sleeping.

Do read and let me know how you find it? 😳

P.S. It will take me some time to post it because as I had mentioned earlier (in my status) that my keypad is acting up and I am trying to move my fingers over it very carefully.

I love you all. Muahs!

Edited by -FriedriceJi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My res 😉

Behind the enemy lines.. There lay some mysterious bonds...i am biting my nails when I reading that particular part were Khushi ran clutching zayed to her heart...dont let the Kid cry dat was my prayer.. 😆 ..
Arnie ne maari hot entriyaar...

At the end

Khushi Ki dil Mein baji khandi yaar
Taan tan tan tan.. 😉 ..

Waiting for
Baaki sampreshanam 😆
Edited by lechuarshi - 10 years ago
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Res! I thought u had updated :(
Unres and u did update.. wohooo..chechi a big love u to u.. that superb.. Really...
I loved it.. Okay so this s what the title says? Crossing the border? Trespassing? Ah I liked the whole chapter.n so different.. Okay so I have a doubt.. the family has really been a traitor since their son,who happens to be sana's husband or their brother was held captive? Or have they been framed?
So these two families know each other..! Nannav miya? I love this name Khushi gave..
So biwi s wife na? Or does that mean something else? Like an endearment?
Oh Arnav go quickly.. even I am waiting..
Love this strong ammi..
So who is Arnav here? Ok many who and whats.. waiting for all the answers from ur next part..
P.S: one way thanks to ur dream..we got one more ts..but oh no.. let it be imagination..and no unpleasant dreams to hinder ur beauty sleep..
Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ts..
really loved it..
thnxx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its ur nightmare..:o i must say you have penned it down wonderfully :) thanks for pm fried:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh wow interesting one
thanks for pm x
Posted: 10 years ago
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J, an intriguing start.
You've conveyed the sense of urgency and danger so well.
A mother's helplessness, a wife's unwavering belief in her husband, a lover's longing for the beloved.
Waiting for more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story,It's very different .
I like it.
You changed the background,pretty cool

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