ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED* - Page 2

Very interesting and intriguing
Would love to read more

Interesting start...

The first part is very interesting. But there are a lot of questions which I hope will be answered in the second part. Why is Khushi's father termed traitor? Is her brother dead?
Arnav's entry was amazing.
Nannav Miyaan and khushi biwi are such adorable names
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
I am so glad that your brain fries even in sleep as we get to read amazing stories like this.😆

The whole backdrop of this story kinda reminded me of this movie called "Fiza" feat. Hrithik Roshan & Karishma Kapoor

Awesome start loved it can't wait for next part.

Fabulous update
Interesting one
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Awesome ..
Loved it..
Waiting for more

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

My res 😉

Behind the enemy lines.. There lay some mysterious bonds...i am biting my nails when I reading that particular part were Khushi ran clutching zayed to her heart...dont let the Kid cry dat was my prayer.. 😆 ..
Arnie ne maari hot entriyaar...

At the end

Khushi Ki dil Mein baji khandi yaar
Taan tan tan tan.. 😉 ..

Waiting for
Baaki sampreshanam 😆

Thanks Lechu mol Super glad that you were biting your nails. Adutha sampreshanam nale. Marakkathe vayikkuka 😛

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Res! I thought u had updated :(

Unres and u did update.. wohooo..chechi a big love u to u.. that superb.. Really...

I loved it.. Okay so this s what the title says? Crossing the border? Trespassing? Ah I liked the whole chapter.n so different.. Okay so I have a doubt.. the family has really been a traitor since their son,who happens to be sana's husband or their brother was held captive? Or have they been framed?

So these two families know each other..! Nannav miya? I love this name Khushi gave..

So biwi s wife na? Or does that mean something else? Like an endearment?

Oh Arnav go quickly.. even I am waiting..

Love this strong ammi..

So who is Arnav here? Ok many who and whats.. waiting for all the answers from ur next part..

P.S: one way thanks to ur dream..we got one more ts..but oh no.. let it be imagination..and no unpleasant dreams to hinder ur beauty sleep..

Sadh baby you know you ask loads of questions 😆 And you have got some parts fairly guessed. Beauty sleep lol

Originally posted by: Dhrenu

Its ur nightmare..:o i must say you have penned it down wonderfully :) thanks for pm fried:)

Thanks lovie.. I tried my best to convey as I had felt.